More Grammatical Nitpicking: The PSO Tech Guide

[Tact]

http://www.pso-world.com/sections.php?op=viewarticle&artid=284

All of the errors I'm about to post can be found at the above link.

Foie: "It is quick to execute and has a fair amount of damage (depending on your level and the enemies weakness to fire)." enemies'/enemy's

Gizonde: "Although it has a short range, used tactically, it can be a very useful weapon. Andriods can not use magic." Typo/misspelling. Also, it may help to point this out at the beginning of the guide rather than in the middle.

Grants: "A very powerful light based spell. It has a very slow casting time and takes forever to actually aquire." Typo/misspelling.

Megid: "A very powerful dark based spell. It can kill in a single hit, but has very low accurace and poor cast times." Typo/misspelling.

Resta: "It restores your HP, and at higher levels will restore the HP of your teamates." Misspelling. In every other instance of the word teammates, it is misspelled in the same way.

Anti: If somebody else casts Anti on you, doesn't it remove paralysis?

Reverser: "The phoenix down of spells, this cast will revive a fallen friend from the dead." Cast seems like an awkward word choice here. Change if you wish.

Shifta: Teammates misspelling.

Deband: Teammates misspelling.

Jellen/Zalure: Doesn't mention that, at higher levels, these spells can hit multiple targets.

[Kevino]

For anti I think you should include the levels at which certain things are healed. I know paralysis can be healed but I don't know what level. I'll put up what I remember.

1- Poison
2- Paralysis *
3- Shock *
4- Slow *
5- Freeze *
6- Jellen/Zalure **

* These are pure guesses based on how much they bother me.
** I've only heard rumors that anti can cure this.

[Ketchup345]

I made the changes Tact suggested/pointed out. Please give them a read over and see if they are better.

Kevino: I believe that information is in another guide here.



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[Tact]

Hey Ketchup, "teammates" is still misspelled in the Resta section.

I also failed to notice this:

Razonde: "Summons a mini lightning storm damaging all enemies withing a certain range. It has a longer range tha Rabarta." Typo/Misspelling.

Gizonde: "The normal attack version of the lightnig spell." Typo/Misspelling.

Gibarta: "Similair to its simple counterpart, this attack shoots shards of ice in a straight line." Typo/Misspelling.

Zalure: "This spell will weaken the DFP (defense poweer) of a single enemy." Typo/Misspelling.

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[Ketchup345]

Those are done.

I would also like to know if the buffs (Shifta/Deband/Jellen/Zalure) also affect EVP and ATA. From my memory, there was never any actual confirmation.

[Tact]

Ketchup:

There was another instance of the word "teammates" in the Resta section that was left uncorrected. Perhaps you didn't see that one?

"The higher the level the wider the range your teamates can be in to be healed by you. "

[McLaughlin]

Shifta and Deband only effect ATP and DFP respectively. Also, I'm fairly sure that Anti only ever fixed Paralysis from level 5 onward. I'm fairly sure the rest were curable from the get-go.

[Ryna]

On 2007-06-22 16:46, Obsidian_Knight wrote:
Also, I'm fairly sure that Anti only ever fixed Paralysis from level 5 onward. I'm fairly sure the rest were curable from the get-go.


Actually, the Anti level does have an effect on what you can cure. For example, level 5 Anti cannot cure Jellen and Zalure.

[AlexCraig]

Speaking of Anti, this may not necissarily be a grammatical error, but the symbol for Anti in here is the antidote symbol. I don't mean to be nitpicky, but it has bothered me for a while.
http://www.pso-world.com/sections.php?op=viewarticle&artid=284

[Kevino]

Now that I look at it, it is just the antidote symbol. Also the pictures on that page are very small and rather hard to see, do you think we could make them expandable?

[Ketchup345]

On 2007-06-22 15:55, Tact wrote:
Ketchup:

There was another instance of the word "teammates" in the Resta section that was left uncorrected. Perhaps you didn't see that one?

"The higher the level the wider the range your teamates can be in to be healed by you. "Done.

Also I removed the notes about EVP and ATA from the Deband and Shifta ones.

[AlexCraig]

The symbol for Anti is still antidote.

[Ketchup345]

I can't change the symbol for Anti, due to a proper image for it not being uploaded. I also have no talent with any graphics programs, so I can't make one.

So until we can get a real image for it uploaded, we have 2 options: keep the antidote or have a blank space.

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[AlexCraig]

Ah, I see. Okay.

[AlexCraig]

Sorry for double posting, but I noticed in the PSO Beastiary it is called Pouifully Slime, but in the games it is Pofuilly Slime. It is like that with most of the guides I have seen in there.

[Ketchup345]

To be sure I don't miss any when I do this, can you provide the number of the guides where this error occurs?
http:// http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary.php?location=2&artid= 1192 &version=v2
The underlined part is the number I need.

[AlexCraig]

http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary.php?location=2&artid=332&version=v3
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary.php?location=2&artid=1192&version=v2
http://www.pso-world.com/sections.php?op=viewarticle&artid=951
That are a few I noticed



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