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qoxolg
Nov 5, 2007, 01:26 PM
Alright, eventough I already made a thread for this before, no one was willing to provide me some screenshots..

anyhow.. I just want to pratice with drawing male characters, cause latley I've only drawn sexy ladies (and scray ones) >_> I still have alot to learn when it comes to drawing males, so please give alot of critique!

but... some time ago in another topic H_Meira helped me by posting screenshots


On 2007-11-04 13:41, HUnewearl_Meira wrote:
Well, if you want a male PSU character, try this fellow--

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e358/VanGarrett/PSU-VG01.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e358/VanGarrett/PSU-VG02.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e358/VanGarrett/PSU-VG03.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e358/VanGarrett/PSU-VG04.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e358/VanGarrett/PSU-VG05.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e358/VanGarrett/PSU-VG06.jpg



and here is the result (don't laugh http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif)

http://jojo.sappusx.com/PSU_VG_done_small.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/PSU_VG_done.jpg)

Click for biggy

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ShinMatsumoto's done:

http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_done_small.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_done.jpg)

click for big

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Noxia's progress: BG

http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_lolwtfpimpbbq.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_lolwtfpimpbbq_big.jpg)

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Damons progress: Done
click for big

http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_done_s.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_done.jpg)

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Contest pic of my own character:

http://jojo.sappusx.com/lovely_Q_ss.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/lovely_Q_s.jpg)

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Mwablablabla's sketch

http://jojo.sappusx.com/mwablablala.jpg

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JenJen sketch3:

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3asmall.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3abig.jpg)

JenJen sketch1:

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch1_x.jpg

JenJen sketch2:

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch2.jpg


If you want your character drawn, give me alot of screenshots like the ones above, one with the pose you want your character in, and discribe the personality. I will choose characters randomly, and if I like the sketch, I will color the whole pic in my usual coloring style (see my Del Sabrina pic).

thank you!


EDIT: NO MORE REQUESTS! I AM GONNA DO SOME OTHER STUFF FOR A WHILE! ALL FINISHED ONES CAN BE ADDED TO THE GALLERY!





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Skuda
Nov 5, 2007, 05:40 PM
I knew it was VanGarrett right of the bat. Nice work! http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

Sgt_Shligger
Nov 5, 2007, 06:01 PM
My only biff is that the eyes seem too far apart, or the glasses might be too narrow for the eyes.

Mwabwetumba
Nov 5, 2007, 06:19 PM
Here's my character. Draw him if you like, I would be happy to see some more art of him. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Let me know if you need some more/better screenshots!

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4651/mwab1ms7.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/1655/mwab2tn1.jpg
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4562/mwab3ww3.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9371/mwab4xy2.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3781/mwab5vz3.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/645/mwab6wk0.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/5519/mwab7vd0.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8669/mwab8bd1.jpg
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8496/mwab9wo3.jpg

The last one is just a pose I thought would be cool. Agree if you want to, it's not really important. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

qoxolg
Nov 5, 2007, 06:33 PM
On 2007-11-05 15:01, Sgt_Shligger wrote:
My only biff is that the eyes seem too far apart, or the glasses might be too narrow for the eyes.



I was thinking the exact same thing.. and it's the eyes.. I am also thinking about bending the arm a little, cause it looks to stiff right now.

Anyway, thanks for pointing it out, cause I was not sure about it. I will definitly fix it when I line/color it (IF H_Meira wants to see it colored of course).


I knew it was VanGarrett right of the bat. Nice work!

I am glad you see it! I really had problems to get the face look like VanGarret.



Here's my character. Draw him if you like, I would be happy to see some more art of him.

Let me know if you need some more/better screenshots!

The screenshots are good, a little small, but I think I can use them.

qoxolg
Nov 5, 2007, 06:35 PM
*double -__-


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qoxolg
Nov 6, 2007, 08:06 PM
Here is the sketch of Mwabwetumba, was hard to draw, because I suck @ drawing casts. The screenshots were also to small to see al the details.. ah wel.. if you want it colored (Mwablabla), just tell me.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/mwablablala.jpg

well... NEXT! screens screens screens... http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

zeroguy518
Nov 6, 2007, 08:14 PM
very nice

Nai_Calus
Nov 6, 2007, 09:02 PM
I'll bite if you feel like drawing a girly-looking male newman Fighgunner. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

http://www.iankunx.net/psunai9.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinai4.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinaifull.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinai8.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinai6.jpg



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HUnewearl_Meira
Nov 6, 2007, 09:52 PM
On 2007-11-05 15:33, qoxolg wrote:
Anyway, thanks for pointing it out, cause I was not sure about it. I will definitly fix it when I line/color it (IF H_Meira wants to see it colored of course).


I say, go to town with it. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mwabwetumba
Nov 7, 2007, 02:50 AM
Ooh, I'm very much pleased with this!

Thanks! http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif



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qoxolg
Nov 7, 2007, 03:57 AM
On 2007-11-06 18:02, Ian-KunX wrote:
I'll bite if you feel like drawing a girly-looking male newman Fighgunner. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

http://www.iankunx.net/psunai9.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinai4.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinaifull.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinai8.jpg
http://www.iankunx.net/aoinai6.jpg


Of course I will http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Do you want your character in a particular pose? and what weapon? screens would be nice, cause I am not really much of a PSU player myself (only offline on my 360 >_>)


On 2007-11-06 18:52 , HUnewearl_Meira wrote:
I say, go to town with it. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Ok! The coloring will take a while, but I will try to do it within one week.

I will only color one sketch at the time, so be quick if you want your sketch colored.

ShinMatsumoto
Nov 7, 2007, 06:25 AM
You know, if you're willing to give it a shot, I'll put up pictures of my character. However, he's got a few details about him that can't be expressed in PSU.

If you're willing to try though, it'd be cool if you managed to do it. I've kinda wanted a good drawing of Shin lately.

qoxolg
Nov 7, 2007, 12:52 PM
Sure, you can post them, and just tell the details you want in the pic http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

ShinMatsumoto
Nov 7, 2007, 03:05 PM
Okay then.

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/4672/psu20071107155045000gt0.jpg
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8415/psu20071107202801000ao4.jpg
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/1706/psu20071107202815001sa1.jpg
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/7242/psu20071107202822002my3.jpg
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/153/psu20071107202857003ju2.jpg

Alterations are...

If it ends up getting into color for some reason, Shin's eyes are heterochromatic. One eye is green, one is blue.
He's also got quite a few scars. But that won't come into play here, as...
For the love of God, he's wearing a shirt. At least a loose T-shirt, heh.
He also has very slightly pointed ears. 1/4th newman blood.

As for pose... I suppose for Shin, most appropriate would be with the sword slung over his shoulder in some sort of confident/arrogant pose.

Appreciate it, man.



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qoxolg
Nov 7, 2007, 04:32 PM
Alright, I will draw your character next. I'll also color it after I finished coloring the one of H_Meira, cause I already got some nice ideas http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

VanGarret is Lined by the way..

DamonKatu
Nov 7, 2007, 06:26 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff167/Dkatu/Damonkatu.jpg

I don't think they think they're funny. I beleave they think they are sweet X3

Beware of Damon since he has a thing for women. >;3



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qoxolg
Nov 7, 2007, 07:28 PM
Hey Damon! your sketch will be next if you can give me a good discription of the pose you want (or even better a screen!)

@IanKunX: If you can give me a screen/discription of the pose you want your character in, I will start sketching.

anyway... sketch for ShinMatsumoto is here! the best I've made so far http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif definitly gonna color it!

http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinDinges_sketch.jpg

DamonKatu
Nov 7, 2007, 09:31 PM
Mmmmm pose.....Ok, I find one...

Sgt_Shligger
Nov 7, 2007, 10:26 PM
Something seems off with the left arm. . . I realize it's supposed to be in perspective but it just seems off.

Nai_Calus
Nov 8, 2007, 12:44 AM
Oh, yeah, pose. *digs through old files* Know I have a shot of - Aha.

http://www.iankunx.net/hyuga.jpg

Not my character, obviously. (I MISS YOU GAZZY. ;_; )

Something like that, the whole Hyuga hand on the hip 'aren't I cool' pose works fine for Nai. X3

ShinMatsumoto
Nov 8, 2007, 01:07 AM
Fantastic, save for the body having more height than I normally imagine, it's perfect. I love the "Come and get me" thing with the hand, that's absolutely his character, heh.

The arms are actually quite good, they simply look a bit disproportioned against the larger upper body. Generally I figure Shin's only got a six-pack.

But I can't do that, by any means, so nicely done, and well done.

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qoxolg
Nov 8, 2007, 02:14 AM
On 2007-11-07 19:26, Sgt_Shligger wrote:
Something seems off with the left arm. . . I realize it's supposed to be in perspective but it just seems off.



It's been bugging me the whole time, actually both arms look a bit weird. But as usual, I will fix it when lining. Thanks for pointing it out http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif



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DamonKatu
Nov 8, 2007, 01:15 PM
I got it. Something that he's smiling in a disagree pose. (ctrl U i beleave) Can you do that? I can get pictures later today. I'm alittle busy today >.< Keep an eye on Damon just in case. He might flirt with your characters...



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qoxolg
Nov 8, 2007, 07:28 PM
No need to hurry.. I will just wait for the screens. I still got plenty of stuff to do... VanGarreths coloring will be done tomorrow (you can already see the progress in the post where I originaly posted the sketch).
After that I will start with the next sketch, and I will start coloring the one of ShinMatsumoto.

qoxolg
Nov 9, 2007, 04:09 PM
Finished the coloring of VanGarrett... altough I miss spelled the name -__-'

Will start coloring Shins one soon, and also start with another sketch..

http://jojo.sappusx.com/PSU_VG_done_small.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/PSU_VG_done.jpg)

click for big

HUnewearl_Meira
Nov 9, 2007, 04:33 PM
Well now! Looks like that colored really well, qoxolg! I'm impressed!

qoxolg
Nov 11, 2007, 11:15 AM
On 2007-11-09 13:33, HUnewearl_Meira wrote:
Well now! Looks like that colored really well, qoxolg! I'm impressed!



heh. thanks! I'm glad you like it http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

anyway! started with lining the pic of ShinMatsumoto. I tried to fix the arm a bit, but it still looks a bit weird.. but I think I can live with it like this. I will try to finish it tomorrow. Keep an eye on the opening post for the progress, I will update it every now and then.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_Lined.jpg

Dj_SkyEpic
Nov 11, 2007, 11:23 AM
Really like what you did with the colors on the Van Garrett picture.
The others are coming along nicely as well!

qoxolg
Nov 11, 2007, 11:30 AM
Thanks! If your interested, I can always put a lower resolution version of the PSD file online.

Dj_SkyEpic
Nov 11, 2007, 12:27 PM
xD I bet you would like to see the psd file of the work I'm doing too!
Sure, we can do a switch around if you like ( when I'm done of course!)

qoxolg
Nov 11, 2007, 01:16 PM
I sure do!

You can download the .PSD of VanGarrett right here (http://jojo.sappusx.com/PSU_VG_small.psd)

qoxolg
Nov 11, 2007, 09:32 PM
Almost done with the pic of Shin. Only some light effects and of course a background. I was thinking of something Neudaiz myself.

click for Big

http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_lightfx_small.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_lightfx.jpg)

qoxolg
Nov 12, 2007, 01:16 PM
Right now busy with the background.. only done the shading.. and I am already amazing myself.. this is the first time a background is starting to look actually good. How I did it? a trick I saw some weeks agoon a webpage. Just use flat colors as a base, and then use a multiply layer above it with only greytones to create the shadows and details. I have to say it works damned good! I think the next pic I will color will be completly this way.

Of course the background isn't finished.. Still have to do lighting and effects, and eventually blend Shins character into the background.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_bg_shaded.jpg

Flat colors: http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_bg_flat.jpg + multiply layer: http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_bg_multiply.jpg = Greatness

Cheers!

Dj_SkyEpic
Nov 12, 2007, 01:31 PM
I'm lovin' it. xD
Cool technique on the background there. It makes me wonder how Shin will be added in there since he's so shiny vs the background.

Good luck with it though!

qoxolg
Nov 12, 2007, 04:09 PM
Thats why I will add a lighting layer http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif probably a few of my favored Linair Dodge ones. When I add Shin to the background, I will add tons of ligting/shading/FX layers to blend them together.

The reason why Shin is shiny, is because he's on that Neudaiz mission where the sun is setting (have no idea what the name of it was). But I haven't added the sun yet.

Noxia
Nov 12, 2007, 04:32 PM
maybe you can draw Noxia the pouny master, if you want pics, you will find all you need in my webcomics http://www.pso-world.com/viewtopic.php?topic=141703&forum=12&start=210&223

you can do her in a funny state or serious state if you want =3

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qoxolg
Nov 12, 2007, 04:57 PM
Eventhough it's MALE requests... I might make an exception http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif I feel like drawing something sexy in between all these males .. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif I might start with it after I finished shins picture..

ShinMatsumoto
Nov 12, 2007, 05:20 PM
Oh dude, that's freakin' awesome.

You kick more ass than I can imagine.

It's even better since Shin tends to hang around Neudaiz.

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qoxolg
Nov 12, 2007, 07:15 PM
I think I am done... http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif I did forget the leaves on the tree.. wanted to add them later, but I think it looks better like this (the leaves would cover half the background) and hey.. when I look outside my window, I don't see any leaves on the trees http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_yes.gif

Click for big and click here (http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_small.psd) for the SMALL .psd file

http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_done_small.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/ShinMatsumoto_done.jpg)

Next!

Serakor13
Nov 13, 2007, 12:36 AM
Very nice job on the colors, and just the artwork in general. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

DamonKatu
Nov 13, 2007, 01:28 PM
I'll get the photos this afternoon at 4:00 at the latest. Im busy with college life and its harsh right now...

qoxolg
Nov 13, 2007, 05:24 PM
heh, no problem! I actually got a easy college week, thats why I am drawing alot righ now http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif I will try to do your and Noxia's request at the same time... will probably start tomorrow with it.. or this night.. it's still 23.21, so plenty of time left to do some sketching.

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By the way, I found where I got the coloring thing for the background, I saw it at the webpage of the amazing UdonCrew (hope the link works) http://www.capcomcomics.com/previews/aocsc/11.php

Be sure to check their work here (http://udoncrew.deviantart.com/), cause it's simply amazing, I actually stopped with adding their work to my favs because it's just all very good.

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EDIT: found something funny! my first work I posted here! OH NOES TEH HORROR!1!!1!11! can't believe how much I sucked back then.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_redface.gif
http://www.pso-world.com/viewtopic.php?topic=110633&forum=12
enjoy! ^.^



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DamonKatu
Nov 13, 2007, 09:51 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff167/Dkatu/psu20071114_114212_003.jpg

I was thinking something like this....What if I wanted Moatoob. <,<'

Just make sure that Damon keeps away from Sappel...>.<

qoxolg
Nov 13, 2007, 10:24 PM
If this is the pose you want, then I will try to start the sketching tomorrow. I just finished Noxia's sketch (and it's already 4.19 AM here -___-zzZZZz).
The background is the last thing I draw, so you got plenty of time to think about that.

here the VERY VERY rough sketch of Noxia.. I know.. boobies are a bit big, but I already said I feld like drawing somthing sexy http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif The arm parts are also on the small side.. thats because I like them better this way.
@Noxia you want a particular background?
http://jojo.sappusx.com/NoxiaVERYsketchy.jpg

Dj_SkyEpic
Nov 13, 2007, 10:47 PM
Oh very nice sketch of Noxia's character. I do have a small concern though.
There's something about her hair and forehead on the right side of the picture.
I think if you extended the right tail a bit more inwards, it'll help cover a bit of her bald spot.

Everything else, I'm fine with! Go for it!

ShinMatsumoto
Nov 14, 2007, 02:53 AM
Nice job man. Really well-done, I'm loving the capturing of Shin's character. Appreciate the time.


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Noxia
Nov 14, 2007, 06:34 AM
am i so sexy ?? O.o lol i don't really know myself then xD, i love it ! really nice job ! ( ^-^)b
concerning, the background, I think Garwik pub would be nice (if it's ok for you)

this background, for example
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4462/psu20071114203115001nu1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

qoxolg
Nov 14, 2007, 11:53 AM
Ah of course! the bar in the pub fits perfectly with the sketch http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif I only played PSU offline, so I never really hung out there.


Oh very nice sketch of Noxia's character. I do have a small concern though.
There's something about her hair and forehead on the right side of the picture.
I think if you extended the right tail a bit more inwards, it'll help cover a bit of her bald spot.

Everything else, I'm fine with! Go for it!

Yeah.. I now see that I forgot to change the hair. I oringinally wanted her to face straight forward.. but I changed my mind, but I didn't change the hair. I will fix it when I line this thing.

DamonKatu
Nov 14, 2007, 11:59 AM
Kafie: I did not have a relationship with THAT woman...I mean I WANTED to... X3 She sexy and all... but I have morals and obligations XD

Sorry, I had to get into character for that one...

qoxolg
Nov 15, 2007, 01:19 PM
Sketch for Damon done! Things that bug me are the jacket and the hands. Was also hard to make the face look like Damons character, hope I captured it well enough http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

I will first start with the lining/coloring of Noxia, after that I'll color Damons.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_sketch.jpg

DamonKatu
Nov 15, 2007, 01:26 PM
On 2007-11-15 10:19, qoxolg wrote:
Sketch for Damon done! Things that bug me are the jacket and the hands. Was also hard to make the face look like Damons character, hope I captured it well enough http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

I will first start with the lining/coloring of Noxia, after that I'll color Damons.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_sketch.jpg





You did a good job so don't worry...Though, he looks less dangerous than he used to be X3...

OH GOD, DAMON!! Put your jacket back on!!!

JenJen902
Nov 15, 2007, 10:39 PM
Mind drawing Agent? If you really dont do females then...
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee291/What902/psu20071115_090734_001.jpg
My male character is good but i want to see agent http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee291/What902/psu20071115_095414_010.jpg

qoxolg
Nov 16, 2007, 03:36 AM
sure, your next in line thoug.. >_> eventually you will get yuor pick..

Nai_Calus
Nov 16, 2007, 04:17 AM
I'd hit Noxia.
...She'd probably hit back though. XD

[s](Do Nai! http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif )[/spoiler-box]

qoxolg
Nov 16, 2007, 05:44 AM
(Do Nai!:wacko: )

ah of course! allmost forget about yours >_> did you already decide on a pose and background? I'll do yours after coloring Damons and Noxia's.. and see it from the bright side.. I get better with each pic I draw http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Googlebonker
Nov 16, 2007, 07:47 AM
Could you try drawing Rhonda?

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa181/alurapsu/psu20071009_023916_021.jpg
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa181/alurapsu/psu20071009_024028_023.jpg

She's a large female CAST who isn't overly-concerned about her size. "I'm a CAST. This weight isn't much of a bother."

qoxolg
Nov 17, 2007, 06:30 AM
Of course I can try, but you have to wait for a while, cause there are 3 others before you in the waiting line..

any way, also a little update on Noxia, now in the progress of shading. I am trying something new using a 3rd shading layer instead of the usual 2 that I use. It's still in progess.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_Spr.jpg

Noxia
Nov 17, 2007, 05:39 PM
really niiice , i love it , pouny to you ! n.n <3

I will repost it because i changed the hole of my nose, it looked like i was "snorgling" n_n;
and i improved the eyes, now they look almost like in game n_n
you're doing a great work ( n_n)b

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/7791/noxiasproa6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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DamonKatu
Nov 17, 2007, 06:32 PM
Damon: I like it too *drools*

HE's GONE WILD!!! TAKE HIM DOWN!! *tranqulizers flew into Damons back and 20 shots knock him out*

Noxia
Nov 17, 2007, 06:36 PM
need a pouny chocolate ? o.o; good for crazy people

JenJen902
Nov 17, 2007, 06:40 PM
Yumm pouny chocolate!!

qoxolg
Nov 17, 2007, 08:31 PM
I actually never draw pupils.. so thats why they aren't there, it doesn't fit my soft/shiny coloring style.. and the nose.. look at your own nose in the mirror.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

anyway, started on the lighting and stuff, the colors might be changed a bit in the final picture with the background (like I did with Shins pic).

http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_x.jpg




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DamonKatu
Nov 17, 2007, 09:06 PM
*Damon licks the pouny chocolate and it oozed nicely in his mouth*

Ewwwwwww...I dont think Damon's crazy...Its just the day of the season...if you catch my drift >.<...Beast often have it every year like any animal on earth....I dont need to give out more hints...>.<

Damon: im feeling strange....Ahhhh. Im ok now...thanks for the depressant nwn...

JenJen902
Nov 17, 2007, 10:22 PM
0.0! perv! lol

DamonKatu
Nov 18, 2007, 01:04 AM
On 2007-11-17 19:22, JenJen902 wrote:
0.0! perv! lol



Damon: IM SORRY *bows down to her* Its just beast habbits. I have no control...

Kafie X: Oh boy, now he's in his other phase...Anyways, lits stop spaming alittle..Plus isn't it known that some artist draw their characters necked then draw their clothes on? I forgot what that method was named. I wounder how noxia's final project looks like...?



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Nai_Calus
Nov 18, 2007, 01:23 AM
On 2007-11-16 02:44, qoxolg wrote:

(Do Nai!:wacko: )

ah of course! allmost forget about yours >_> did you already decide on a pose and background? I'll do yours after coloring Damons and Noxia's.. and see it from the bright side.. I get better with each pic I draw http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif



Something Hyuga-ish, and background doesn't matter. X3;

And lol, don't worry. XD Take your time. :3

Noxia
Nov 18, 2007, 04:21 AM
i looked my nose in the mirror xD i don't see my hole so much http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif
now each time you will post my pics, i will change the nose and the eyes.
Trust me ;-; most of the people i showed your draw don't like the nose, please let me help you (._.)

Noxia's eyes are one of the parts i like the most ._.

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6223/noxiaspec2wq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

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qoxolg
Nov 18, 2007, 07:09 AM
Updated post above..

alright alright.. I changed your nose.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif but I won't go any further. The eyes will be drawn in the way I like it.. and I don't like the small CAST pupils, they look like they are staring you to death. The eyes are also far from done, eye detail is most of the time one of the last things I add. If you have any close up screens of the eyes, that would be great!

Noxia
Nov 18, 2007, 12:30 PM
if you want a screen with close up eyes, just look in my webcomic topic :3 you shall find what you need.

JenJen902
Nov 18, 2007, 02:06 PM
Pouny chocolate = love.. lol and btw her sig is pretty good pic of eye.. well just the right eye but other than that lookin great! her fingernails are looking a bit unproportional but other than that its perfect

qoxolg
Nov 18, 2007, 04:05 PM
Starting on the background.

click for background only

http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_xx.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_bgsketchy.jpg)

DamonKatu
Nov 18, 2007, 05:43 PM
Her drinks on me...Not literitly! I mean I'll pay for her drinks. Good luck on the background.

JenJen902
Nov 18, 2007, 06:15 PM
Backgrounds looking great! id go lez over her... i mean! lol jk.. or am i http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_confused.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/blush.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_argh.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_bunny.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/doughboy.gif Mixed smileys http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif but seriously jk lmao

DamonKatu
Nov 19, 2007, 03:00 PM
On 2007-11-18 15:15, JenJen902 wrote:
Backgrounds looking great! id go lez over her... i mean! lol jk.. or am i http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_confused.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/blush.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_argh.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_bunny.gif http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/doughboy.gif Mixed smileys http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif but seriously jk lmao



Now she's crazy too. Take her down! *once again X3*

qoxolg
Nov 19, 2007, 05:50 PM
I am sorry Noxia.. but I am not in the background mood at the moment.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif I will let your picture rest untill I am in the good mood for doing a background.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

here is the current result.. hurhur! this won't be used when I will do a serious BG.. click for huge...to use as a.. uh.. wallpaper.. or whatever.. it sux :/

http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_lolwtfpimpbbq.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/Noxia_lolwtfpimpbbq_big.jpg)

Dang.. what should I do.. let the requests rest for a while and make a pic for the contest? or should I just ignore the contest.. >_> cause I am not really interested in prizes.... mehhh..

Noxia
Nov 19, 2007, 07:03 PM
don't worry, it's ok for me, i love ( ^-^)b you did a very nice work, Pouny to you so much !

KuroNetsune
Nov 20, 2007, 12:15 AM
yo qoxolg, got a spot open for a trade?

DamonKatu
Nov 20, 2007, 11:56 AM
Well well...Its our favorite furry drawer. how's life treating you?

qoxolg
Nov 20, 2007, 01:23 PM
don't worry, it's ok for me, i love ( ^-^)b you did a very nice work, Pouny to you so much !

But I am still gonna redo the background >_> someday...


yo qoxolg, got a spot open for a trade?

uhhh I am not really a PSU player.. so I don't have anything I want to have drawn (atleast not PSU/O related).
But if you got something you want to have drawn, just give me some screens and a discription.

JenJen902
Nov 20, 2007, 03:02 PM
Looking great Q i think you should enter noxias drawing into the contest! Its looking really good so just a suggestion http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

qoxolg
Nov 20, 2007, 03:48 PM
thanks http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

to bad I can't enter it.. I still got Damon's pic as the next pic


Rules:
All entries should either be related to the category for which they are being submitted. Submissions for the humor category must be in by 11:59 PM EST on November 25th, 2007. Submissions for the Phantasy Star Universe (quality) category must be in by 11:59 PM EST on December 1st, 2007. All submitted content should conform to site rules. You are allowed to make multiple submissions, but may not submit an entry to multiple categories. Any works that are posted on PSOW (either in the Fan Works forum or appropriate Gallery) prior to the start of the contest are not eligible for submission. Also, any entries that are posted in Fan Works before the contest ends will be disqualified.

But it doesn't matter anyway, cause it's won't make the art any better. I will continue with the requests just in my own pace.

qoxolg
Nov 22, 2007, 04:45 PM
progress on Damon's pic.. srry for being slow.. but I a very busy.. and I have to go to bed around 23.30 instead of 02.30 http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_lined.jpg

I did some fat lining (15px 80% hardness brush).. cause I feel like cell shading this pic, I hope you don't mind that Damon, if you do, I will make another version with my usual coloring a few weeks later...

qoxolg
Nov 23, 2007, 09:39 PM
Update! well.. Damon is just a lucky bastard! Cause I didn't feel like doing a boring cell shading job... so I tried to use the same trick I used on the background of Shin... and it's already starting to look pretty awesome http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif the best coloring I've done.. and guess what? it's even faster than my usual coloring.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I am not done yet, still some extra light effects to do.. I don't know about a background.. I might keep it simple.. dunno yet..

anyway.. behold! (pirates wrath.. hur hur.. >_>)

http://jojo.sappusx.com/Damon_shaded.jpg

Jared_T
Nov 23, 2007, 11:20 PM
I have to say that your coloring skill an detail are pretty good!
But I suggest that you try working on your anatomy. Mainly your muscle structure on your arms and chest is out of control. I don't know if you wanted to have any critiques but I do know its six pack abs not an 8 or 10 or whatever your doing there. Hmm.. actually I think it may just be that you have the upper torso to long although I'm not that sure I'm not that good at drawing men either. But DeviantART (http://search.deviantart.com/?section=browse&qh=boost%3Apopular+age_sigma%3A24h+age_scale%3A5&q=tutorial+men) has plenty of tutorials.
I did look at one of your .psd an I don't know half of what your doing. That DOESN'T mean that your doing anything wrong I just only use about 15% of whats available with adobe. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

qoxolg
Nov 24, 2007, 05:37 AM
On 2007-11-23 20:20, Jared_T wrote:
I have to say that your coloring skill an detail are pretty good!
But I suggest that you try working on your anatomy. Mainly your muscle structure on your arms and chest is out of control. I don't know if you wanted to have any critiques but I do know its six pack abs not an 8 or 10 or whatever your doing there. Hmm.. actually I think it may just be that you have the upper torso to long although I'm not that sure I'm not that good at drawing men either. But DeviantART (http://search.deviantart.com/?section=browse&qh=boost%3Apopular+age_sigma%3A24h+age_scale%3A5&q=tutorial+men) has plenty of tutorials.
I did look at one of your .psd an I don't know half of what your doing. That DOESN'T mean that your doing anything wrong I just only use about 15% of whats available with adobe. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif



Heh thanks, critique is good! cause that was the whole point of startig this topic in the first place: the learn myself to draw male characters!

The abs look like an 8 pack.. thats because the lower thing are actually not part of the 6 pack.. it also looks weird because at some places the clothes cover the lines...
For the muscle things I used pictures of real body builders, to see where all the muscles go.

and.. I am not even close to using 15% of Photoshop.. I think more something like 0,1%.. to be precise: Brush tool, wand tool, selection modification, Eraser, Color picker and the layer blending tools.. thats all I need to do the coloring http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif.

qoxolg
Nov 24, 2007, 05:09 PM
Damon's pic is done! sorry for the cheap background >_> I thought a detailed background would ruin the pic, so I made a simple/cheap one instead..

Time for the next one! if I am quick enough, I will submit it for the contest.. else I wont <_<

anyway, click for big:

http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_done_s.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/damon_done.jpg)






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Fuji
Nov 26, 2007, 04:18 AM
I'm game for seeing my character drawn up. There are a few face shots just so you know how his face looks as well. His weapon of choice is his Earth Element Gizaha-zashi.

Looking forward to seeing the result.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y19/CrzyMAXKenji/psu20071126_011338_008.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y19/CrzyMAXKenji/psu20071126_011331_007.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y19/CrzyMAXKenji/psu20071126_011306_003.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y19/CrzyMAXKenji/psu20071126_011242_002.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y19/CrzyMAXKenji/psu20071126_011228_000.jpg

qoxolg
Nov 26, 2007, 12:11 PM
Alright! your on the list.. I don't do the requests in a specific order.. I do the one I feel like doing.. so you might be the next.. you might be the last..

I do know that I will try to make something for the contest.. and it's gonna be female.. cause thats waht I like to do most http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Fuji
Nov 26, 2007, 05:19 PM
No worries, take your time and get to it when you can. You're the one doing me a service so I have no problem waiting as long as you need.

Sgt_Shligger
Nov 26, 2007, 06:12 PM
I see most of the pictures drawn here have been reviewed (so I'm not commenting on a single picture.) I'd lay off coloring and focus more on getting line art done right. As Jared said, your coloring and shading is fine. Don't worry about the CG process. Get the basics/details down.

Jared also mentioned anatomy. I wouldn't worry a lot about drawing really detailed muscles at this point. Work on proportions first then work on the finer details.

qoxolg
Nov 26, 2007, 06:44 PM
yeah.. was thinking about the same thing.. the coloring makes it take alot longer.. but I love coloring http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif I am still not completly satisfied with the coloring (especially shading on glossy materials and shading on clothes have to get better) and I am also trying to find a coloring style that I want to stick to (almost there though.. really like how the colring on Damons pic came out).

I also feel a bit bad when I don't deliver a finished work when someone does a request >_> I think I will do my next request with multiple sketches, the best one will be picked and colored..

but I will first focus on the contest http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif after that I will go further with the requests.

KayaHime
Nov 26, 2007, 07:07 PM
On 2007-11-26 15:44, qoxolg wrote:(especially shading on glossy materials and shading on clothes have to get better)

Something that might help there is familiarizing yourself with different types of fabric, how they lay over the body, and what they look like in different lighting situations.

Sgt_Shligger
Nov 26, 2007, 07:13 PM
No offense to the people making requests.

You're not really obligated to draw every request you get. If you don't feel like drawing something don't force yourself to draw it.

JenJen902
Nov 26, 2007, 11:56 PM
Are you starting on KOTCM? If not dont i remodled her and want to take a screenie of new agent so.. If you started dont want to be a pain http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_bunny.gif

qoxolg
Nov 27, 2007, 01:22 AM
I haven't started on it, so be sure to post any screens http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

JenJen902
Nov 30, 2007, 10:21 PM
Ill post a screenie soon

qoxolg
Dec 1, 2007, 03:36 AM
okaj! I just finished my supersecret submission for the contest http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif so.. I think I will have time around monday to start on it...

JenJen902
Dec 1, 2007, 10:47 AM
Ok wont we see it tommorow since the deadline is 11:59 tonight

qoxolg
Dec 9, 2007, 10:56 AM
Alright.. I am going to start with the next request very very soon...

This week I have been drawing something thats not PSU/O related http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif.. You can check it here (http://jojo.sappusx.com/Auxgirl_widescreen.jpg). I really like how the coloring came out, I think I will nail down that style for the next pics, so I can concentrate on the linework.

Now for the next request I wanna do a X-mas pic.. probably the character of JenJen. But if someone else is quicker with posting screens, I will do that one (I prefer a female character for the pic).

JenJen902
Dec 9, 2007, 01:35 PM
Im not on comp so im waiting for one of the many people that took screenies for me to SEND ME IT! lmao

JenJen902
Dec 9, 2007, 02:33 PM
Some pretty good screenies for you to work with n.n
Even threw in a christmas tree :3!
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee291/What902/001.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee291/What902/002.jpg
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee291/What902/003.jpg

qoxolg
Dec 9, 2007, 03:12 PM
I hope you don't mind if I change the clothes a bit?? more some kind of x-mas clothes in PSU style.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

anyway, thanks for the screens!

JenJen902
Dec 9, 2007, 03:40 PM
Lol was thinkin of changin clothes to red and green with a santa hat! Also make me winking and flashing the piece sign with shining lipstick XD

qoxolg
Dec 9, 2007, 03:52 PM
haha I will keep it in mind when drawing http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

qoxolg
Dec 10, 2007, 03:30 PM
Alright! first sketch done for JenJen! I will make 3 sketches and you can choose which one you like most.
I will then line and color that one..

I am doing that because I need to improve my drawing skills.. my coloring is fine for now http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Note that the coloring on this sketch is just a very quick paint, it's just an indication of the colors I am gonna use.

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch1.jpg

DamonKatu
Dec 10, 2007, 04:41 PM
Is she under the mistletoe? X3 Sexy...*get slaped around once agean*

JenJen902
Dec 10, 2007, 09:52 PM
Like it but a little TOO reveiling

qoxolg
Dec 11, 2007, 06:20 PM
2nd sketch! a little less revealing.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif Didn't color the sketch.. but imo way better than the first one!

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch2.jpg

JenJen902
Dec 11, 2007, 06:22 PM
both of them are good but my nose is HUGE lol

qoxolg
Dec 11, 2007, 06:26 PM
ooh ok.. I will make it smaller... IF that will be the one.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif will do another sketch tomorrow (the last one) after that it's up to you to choose which one you like best.

edit: actually the nose isn't huge when compared to the screenshots.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif



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JenJen902
Dec 11, 2007, 07:03 PM
hah true

DamonKatu
Dec 11, 2007, 11:15 PM
Can I slap him around for being a perv? CanICanICanI?!? XD



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qoxolg
Dec 12, 2007, 01:43 PM
You can slap all you want >_>

anyway, 3rd sketch.. quick one http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif IF I have to line it, I will fix the eyes a bit, and add something "x-mas like" in her hair..

cheers!

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3.jpg

JenJen902
Dec 12, 2007, 02:10 PM
ill go with the first one if you make it a lil less reveiling

qoxolg
Dec 12, 2007, 03:04 PM
ok ^.^! I'll start lining and coloring tommorow!

DamonKatu
Dec 12, 2007, 04:32 PM
I wasnt talking about with my hand, I was ganna do it with an Iron.

K-X: You crack me up little buddy...

Who's joking...? X3 Good work by the way...

JenJen902
Dec 12, 2007, 05:46 PM
if you already started before you saw this keep going but if you didnt do third one

qoxolg
Dec 13, 2007, 01:23 AM
I haven't started.. so the 3rd one will be it http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif I liked tha one better anyway >_> the first one looked kinda creepy.

EDIT:
Since the contest is over, I guess it's alright to post my pic http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

It's my own PSU (offline) character with custom clothes.. I mad custom clothes, because PSU offline only goth those standard boring ones... http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Here some of the progress stages:

sketch:
http://jojo.sappusx.com/lovely_Q_sketch.jpg

colored:
http://jojo.sappusx.com/lovely_Q_color.jpg

finished:
http://jojo.sappusx.com/lovely_Q_ss.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/lovely_Q_s.jpg)





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Jared_T
Dec 13, 2007, 01:25 PM
Not bad Q! The perspective is a bit wonky. http://community.thewotch.com/style_emoticons/default/eusa_think.gif You know... She won't be able to run in that outfit, or stand up, or raise her arms arms above her shoulders, or anything else practical an remain decent. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif But its not bad. I can do a more thorough critique if you want me to.

qoxolg
Dec 13, 2007, 02:52 PM
yeah I know.. but the light green isn't part of the skirt http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif it's part of the shirt/top.. but because she is sitting, it covers the skirt a bit. The shirt and skirt are not connected in any way, so she should be able to move freely.

Atleast the anatomy should be right.. because I used a screenshot from a video with a very sexy lady for the pose >_>

And feel free to give more critique.. I am still learning as well


EDIT:

some update on JenJen's pic.. boring lining is done.. I HATE lining >_<

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3_lined.jpg


whatever..

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3_colorbase.jpg



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Jared_T
Dec 14, 2007, 04:10 PM
Well Q I have your critique of "Lovely Q" ready. Should I post it here or do you want me to PM it to you?

qoxolg
Dec 14, 2007, 07:43 PM
doublepost meh..


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qoxolg
Dec 14, 2007, 07:46 PM
OH nice! you can post it here, no problem!

Jared_T
Dec 14, 2007, 08:46 PM
You do know that you can delete a post by hitting the "edit" then checking the the "delete this post" box. If you edit it within 20mins or so.

Its been about 12 years since my last art class so some of the terms I use may not be right. But its as close as I can recall.

Lovely Q critique (http://free.yosemite.net/~jtaber/images/lovely_Q_critique.jpg)

Note: Most of the shading advice is something I'm still struggling with. If I don't pay close attention to my lighting I tend to make it up as I go. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

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qoxolg
Dec 15, 2007, 05:24 AM
Ooh thank you ^.^ really appreciate it! Thats some usefull feedback.

The (for us) left breasts and shoulder.. yeah.. dunno.. I tried to stick to the model that was on the screen I used for the pose.

The shading on the clothing folds is most of the time soooooo random, have to admitt that.

About the light sources, there is techniquely only one (top-left-ish). That right light bulb in the eye is just to make it look less empty.. and the windows on the back was added for the same reason.
Sometimes I sacrifice realism, to make the overal presentation of the pic look better.

JenJen902
Dec 15, 2007, 12:45 PM
I like it Q n.n
very good but the yes look a little blank 0.0 unless your still working on those also theres some kinda wiered thing above my lip lol

qoxolg
Dec 15, 2007, 02:22 PM
Your a beast right? they got a weird lip, but I can still change that if you don't like it.. haha.. Of course it's a little blank.. these are just the basis colors, shading will be done somewhere tommorow http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

EDIT:

little update.. halfway on the 3rd shading layer

http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3_shadinglv2_5.jpg


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JenJen902
Dec 17, 2007, 07:38 AM
Thats great the only thing is beasts do have regular eyes n.n you forgot the pupil

qoxolg
Dec 17, 2007, 12:07 PM
pupil is part of the eye shading, you will see.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif hope to finish the coloring of the character tonight (yeah it's already 6.00PM here)

EDIT:

update: shading and lighting on the character is done.. now for the background.. you want een simple one? you want wallpaper size? or just normal size? widescreen/squarescreen? tell me http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

Click click for big!
http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3_SandL_S.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3_SandL_B.jpg)




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JenJen902
Dec 17, 2007, 05:59 PM
it doesnt matter what size and a good christmas background would be nice

qoxolg
Dec 20, 2007, 04:29 PM
Alright.. done.. kindoff.. I was lazy.. and didn't feel like doing a background.. so I made a crappy one http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif if you don't like it.. then you don't >_>

here is the results:

CLICK:
http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3asmall.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3abig.jpg)

crappy wallpaper 1:
wpp1 (http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3awidewpp.jpg)

crappy wallpaper 2:
wpp2 (http://jojo.sappusx.com/JenJensketch3bwpp.jpg)

This was also the last request.. I am stop the requests for a while.. I also got alot of other idea's for stuff to draw.. So you won't see me here for some weeks, I will keep checkin others stuff of course ^.^ Just no art from my side (won't be drawing anything Phantasy Star related for a few weeks).

Thanks all for the requests and the good feedback! ^.^

cheeeers!