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mia_viola
Mar 1, 2008, 09:12 AM
my comic to (kinda) follow on after deja's struggles of a cast acrotecher.
id like some feedback on it please, i dont if ill stick with a continous story or just do short funny sketches with dejas help

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The Beginning?
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CelestialBlade
Mar 1, 2008, 01:10 PM
*dies of cute* ;_;

Dimmagolus part made me lol.

ColonelPiFace
Mar 1, 2008, 01:12 PM
XD

MaximusLight
Mar 1, 2008, 01:28 PM
Death by Jao...

Seority
Mar 1, 2008, 02:34 PM
Dim = rofl
Very cute =3

Anduril
Mar 1, 2008, 02:50 PM
I had to pour salt down my throat because of how sugary-cute that was. Too bad I only get random Polty coming up to my window.

Isabella
Mar 1, 2008, 02:52 PM
This was adorable adorably-funny <3!!!!

Mysterious-G
Mar 1, 2008, 05:19 PM
You didn`t correct the writing mistakes I showed you. T_T *disappointed*
Anyway, it`s still a good comic. I would not say it`s superior, but a very good first try.
Keep it up! http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Eligaz
Mar 2, 2008, 06:54 AM
Aweh, beyond adorable. Anything involving Mia makes me melt. ;_;

engelsein
Mar 2, 2008, 11:55 AM
nice start http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Noxia
Mar 2, 2008, 04:54 PM
sorry for the graffity ._.;

-Yue-
Mar 2, 2008, 05:09 PM
Ahhh nice comiccc :*****

Spacepest
Mar 2, 2008, 09:51 PM
Awww, that is the cutest little beast ever. Tiny beasts rock (I'm surprised I don't see more of them. Usually they're all huge creatures).

I want a Shato cam.

And I love the comic, keep up the good work!

DEM_CIG
Mar 2, 2008, 09:57 PM
nice, that was very creative... i lol'd a couple times...

Koji1m1
Mar 8, 2008, 01:14 PM
hmmm not bad mia

Skye-Fox713
Mar 8, 2008, 03:42 PM
Shato cam, where's meh Diwari cam!

nice idea anyway's :3

Arryn
Mar 10, 2008, 07:19 AM
heheheeeee
do more ^.^ *gibs cookie*
and Koji no cookies for u u should have loled http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

uss
Mar 11, 2008, 07:20 AM
Nlce comic

mia_viola
Mar 17, 2008, 11:21 AM
sorry to people who helped me but im not too sure if i will continue with the comic, it seems like a lot of work for not very great results and i really dont think i have the time. i may decide to keep it going just as each comic as a seperate little story but i havnt had many idea so far and my creativity seems to be failing me :/



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CelestialBlade
Mar 17, 2008, 12:57 PM
On 2008-03-17 09:21, mia_viola wrote:
sorry to people who helped me but im not too sure if i will continue with the comic, it seems like a lot of work for not very great results and i really dont think i have the time. i may decide to keep it going just as each comic as a seperate little story but i havnt had many idea so far and my creativity seems to be failing me :/


Aww, that's too bad. I've done comicking before, and I know exactly how you feel, you just hit the burnout a lot earlier than I did. It was cute while it lasted.