Sha Sha
Feb 16, 2011, 04:20 PM
I have to write a poem about some place in nature. Lately I have been haunted? Maybe? of Falz Memorial from PSO Ep1. And this is what I have so far. I wanted to add in Red Ring Rico since to me she is important to me to that area.
I'm Still deciding if I want it in 1st person or 3rd person.
Right now it's in 3rd ( i think)
He comes out of the deep dark ruins
Suddenly into a strong calm light
The flowers move but no sign of wind
The meadow is enclosed but wide.
beautiful yet eerie. The air has a strange aura to it.
Odd headstones of unknown follow the marble walkway
up to a tall monument, a memorial of a dark figure
as he get closer to the foot of the tower
a red ring child sits on the tomb
She smiles and waves as she vanish into a flash of light.
This is all I have and Im still moving things
please help me ><
I'm Still deciding if I want it in 1st person or 3rd person.
Right now it's in 3rd ( i think)
He comes out of the deep dark ruins
Suddenly into a strong calm light
The flowers move but no sign of wind
The meadow is enclosed but wide.
beautiful yet eerie. The air has a strange aura to it.
Odd headstones of unknown follow the marble walkway
up to a tall monument, a memorial of a dark figure
as he get closer to the foot of the tower
a red ring child sits on the tomb
She smiles and waves as she vanish into a flash of light.
This is all I have and Im still moving things
please help me ><