Burning Darkness Episode 1: An Unusual Meeting

[Neverwinter]

It was a cold and frosty day down on Ragol, many regulars who were happy with the way they lived rushed to their homes as the snow came to fall, but as always Alan was walking slowly through the streets when it snows or rains; he had always had a facination with water, ice and snow.
Taking a usual trip to the shops to get supplies for more missions he might do for the hunters guild, Alan noticed a pure looking woman, who he assumed to be slightly younger than himself, she was purchasing things any usual person would do, some monomates for minor injuries and a monofluid or two for herself. Alan slowly walked up to the woman, hoping to be descreat and not as to alarm her, but she was too intelligent to fall for that old trick,
'Uh excuse me but can I help you'
'Nah not really, but tell me...why are you out on such a cold day. Normally I'm the only person out here wondering around.'
'My name is Leilani Sierra, and who are you? It's not very often that I can find another person apart from the shopkeepers in these kind of conditions.'
'I'm Alan Neverwinter, kind of a wierd second name but i'm just fine with it.'
Suddenly an explosion could be heard from the city centre. Alan reacted fast and ran downtown to see what on Ragol was happening. But rather than adventuring alone as he normally would of done, he was in fact running along side Leilani who was also concerned,
'Whatever starts with an explosion cant be good!' shouted Leilnani who's voice was bieng slighty drowned out by the screams of terror coming from all over the city.
The force and the ranger made their way down to the city centre, screams were getting louder as they worked their way into the city.


So what do you all think so far?

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Neverwinter on 2003-05-17 16:15 ]</font>

[BOC]

that is a cracker of an intro dude, just enough info about the chars, then BOOM into the action!! can't wait 4 the next part!! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

[Neverwinter]

Episode 2: A Wounded Android.

Downdown was a nightmare, as Alan and Leilani neared the centre they spotted a telepipe, but it was gleaming with darkness! Gigabooma after Gigabooma were marching through, Alan and Leilani saw a RAcast round the corner who had claw and blast marks all over him. But he was still using his mechguns to fend off the monsters, 1 neared the unknown android but was quickly taken care of. The andriod was surrounded, but as they got nearer and nearer, he notices that 2 of the monsters were frozen in ice. The next thing he saw was Alan shattering the ice, and the frozen monster inside. He turned to thank him but he was hit from behind, as he fell to the ground, he saw Leilani firing her handgun at the beasts, the next moment and the androis came offline and had a sign on his visor saying, self-repairing, process: 24 hours,
'Well, I guess he's out for now' said Alan in a reassuring voice.
'Wait!, theres more coming in' shouted Leilani.
She was down on one knee in front of Alan looking in the same direction as him, firing her handgun and holding off the horde as Alan was casting a portal destruction technique. It took about 10 minuets, Alan and Leilani walked up to the offline Android and struggled to get him up. As alan lifted up the androids he saw a designation given to the android,
'B.O.C', Alan pondered on this strange name trying to guess what the B, O and C stands for as himself and Leilani took him down to the android department in the cities hospital.

[BOC]

hehehe, what an entrance!!!!!!

thanks for including me dude.....and carrying my heavy metal ass of to the medi centre http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif.

can't wait 4 the next part

[Neverwinter]

Thanks, I am working on Part 3, should be out tomorrow or thursday. The others i actually made up off the top of my head and wrote more as i went along

[BOC]

can't wait till thursday then http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

not bad 4 off the top of ur head http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

PEACE!!!

[polishedweasel]

WEEEEEEE!!! I'm in it. heheheh.....happy. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif Great job man. keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens.

[Neverwinter]

Episode 3: A Rushed Reovery

'He will be just fine.' said the nurse.
'Thankyou we didnt know if he would make it here' said Alan.
'Just one more...' the nurse was a Force, but she only knew support and healing magics. She cast another Lv 5 resta and the android came online again.
Leilani was out for the hour getting a few food and water supplies or her unmentioned personal life. Alan was with the andriod still tying to get what B.O.C stood for.
'Hum, meh i just cant figure it out!
Suddenly a booting up soung came ans the visor once offline was glowing with power.
'B.O.C is now online, thank you human for bringing me to the hospital.
Suddenly from the ouside of the hospital.
'Help!!!' Leilani said as she was being rushed buy more monsters coming out of another dark portal.
A monster came up behind her and struck, but before the swipe touched flesh it was greeted by hard metal. B.O.C had gotten in the way but was uneffected by the monsters claws. Alan rushed behind B.O.C and used his own technique, it caused a protective dome to surround the Rangers and himself.
'Can we still hurt them?!' said Leilani.
'Yes we can fire out but make it quick, with them ponding the force field it wont hold for long.
Leilani and B.O.C started to fire out of the force field and into the crowd of monsters,
'Rerouting all emergency energy to increse power.'
B.O.C fierd his empowerd blasters at the monsters and they went flying.
'Now!' shouted Alan, 'I'm closing the portal!'
With the portal closed and the monsters in retreat, Alan, Leilani and B.O.C finished them off.
'This is becoming a regular occurance' said Alan
'This is true. Portal distubances have risen 20% in the last 3 days' claimed B.O.C in his all knowing robot ways.
The Force and the two Rangers made their was down to the hunters guild to find out if the receptionist new anything.



<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Neverwinter on 2003-05-22 01:35 ]</font>

[BOC]

EEEEEEEEOoooooooooooooooooOOOO!!!!!

keeps gettin better and better dude!!!

hmmm what DO those three letters and three dots stand for?? some would say british oxygen company. others would say blue oyster cult http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif. some would even venturre the guess that it means bio organic cyborg. they would all be wrong!!! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

B.O.C. = my initials + real life nickname.

keep up the good work dude!!!!!

[Sharkyland]

I wonder what's going to happen next... ^_^

[Neverwinter]

i have been gone a while, sorry bout that, next episode is on friday

[BOC]

*Giddy with anticipation of the next part*

can't wait to find out what happens next winter!!

PEACE!!!

[BOC]

dude, u haven't abandoned this fic have u?? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif

it seems like friday never came http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

can we expect another installment or is that a rap??

hope the best is yet 2 come http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

PEACE!!!

[Neverwinter]

soz bout it i will do it tomorrow

peace!

[Neverwinter]

Episode 4: Forest of Doom

Bam! The team had landed in the forest which was lit up with the Ragol sun,
'It is hard to think that something so peaceful as this place can be brought to shreads and be home to such reckless creatures.' said Leilani.
'I know what you mean, I am not fond of this forest at all' said Alan.'
'We proceed this way' said B.O.C remembering what the receptionist at the Hunters guild had told them. B.O.C had a map out on his visor and was figuring out the group's location,
'We travel north-west' said B.O.C.

About 15 or 20 minutes later, the group were surrounded by twenty giga-boomas. The sound of electricity shocked three of the monsters as Alan put out his hand. Leilani decided to join Alan and attack the monsters with electricty. B.O.C was blasting each monster with total accuracy using two mechguns. As the stream of monsters came pouring onto the group, everyone decided to switch to melee weapons. Alan had a boost of defense as he use support techs while slashing some of the monsters with a twin brand. Leilani was using a buster, swinging it around her head and making a perimeter of monsters around her. B.O.C was using his cold, hard fists; he punched one up to the sky and it fell on 3 other monsters. Then he swung round holding both fists out and hiting more monsters. But help was at hand, suddenly a hunter (HUcaseal) came from the trees and in a flash, a dagger was thrown at 1 giga-booma, then using a glaive, she cut through the remainig monsters.



<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Neverwinter on 2003-06-12 00:51 ]</font>

[Garanz2]

Hey how come this fic is getting loads of attention when del and arath is moulding in the corner? Someone support me for a bit!

[BOC]

B.O.C was using his cold, hard fists; he punched one up to the sky and it fell on 3 other monsters.


MUH HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!! nothing better than smashing a few boomas into ity bity little booma bits with ur bare hands http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif!!!!!!

excellent work dude, can't wait 2 read the next part!!

for a while there i thought ud given up on the story, which would be a shame considering ur quality of writing. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

so keep up the good work!!!!!!




On 2003-06-11 09:47, Garanz2 wrote:
Hey how come this fic is getting loads of attention when del and arath is moulding in the corner? Someone support me for a bit!


*hangs head in shame* sorry garanz, i admit it, i haven't actualy got round 2 readin ur fic just yet, but once this post is up and i take a piss, its the next thing i'll do!!!! so ya can rest easy knowning that u'll have one more supporter http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

good luck 2 the both of yas!!!!

PEACE!!!