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gamerdell7
Jul 9, 2003, 12:50 AM
Hiya! This will be my first Fan Fic. on this site.

All my fan fic. will always titled 'Hunters United'.

I've made one fic. similar to this in Gamefaqs.com.

If you've seen the fic. on that site(chances are you didn't) then hurray!

Quick rule/note---
Many people can join in on my fan fic.(since I usually can't do them alone)
If you want to join the story, just post saying that you want to be in the story(I have to aprove that you can join, but usually I let people join(more the merrier!!!)), then make a post of the next part of the story.

----------------The Beginning---------------------

"Gosh, this rooms are small"-Dell

[Dell, a Fomar.
(wears glasses and has a ponytail)
He had begin studying Techniques when he was a teen.
Right before he left to pioneer 2,
his parents bought him a.......(on the next bio)]

"Don't be such a baby, Master, at least the rooms are free"-Delta

[Hucaseal named Delta.
(Short,has antenna-looking things sticking out of her head)
Delta calls Dell,Master. She was supposed to guard Dell on his trip in Pioneer 2. Funny though, because she is quite short.]

"I guess your righ--"-Dell

Suddenly Pioneer 2 began shaking violently.

"I think we just hit something"-Delta

*DING*Sorry passengers,
we seem to have a slight problem*DING*-Speakerbox

"A problem...?"-Dell

He looked out the window, finding out that....they landed on Ragol.

"Now why did they do that?Hey, Maybe I can find my Parents!!!"-Dell

"After that odd explosion a few days ago?"-Delta

"Maybe, there's always hope!"-Dell

*DING*Due to some technical difficulties, no one may leave this ship*DING*-Speakerbox

"Maybe I should go tonight"-Dell whispered to himself

"What'd you say Master?"-Delta

"--Oh nothing"-Dell

To be Continued----------------

(What yah think? No one join in on the story yet, just yet.... just give me some time, then some people can join(plz read rules on joining, which shows on top of this post))

DnaX
Jul 9, 2003, 01:12 AM
Hey Gamer! Mind if join your fic? You can see my characters' info in the Character Bank. It's on the 4th page last post.
Keep writing http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

Cheers! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/pepsi.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/pepsi.gif

>.< X

gamerdell7
Jul 9, 2003, 09:56 AM
Well, heres my next part.
(DnaX, you can add yourself in by this part of the fic, or the next one I will write(which is later today, or tomorrow))

-----------continuation--------------

12:00 a.m.

*Beep,Beep,Beep,Beep,Bee---BOOm*

"stupid clock"-Dell

Dell had finally woken up, but broke the alarm clock because it never stopped beeping.

Cant wake up Delta-Dell

He tiptoed to the door.

"---Come on! Lets go on Ragol!!"-
A female on the other side of the room Whispered

"But, what about what the prin-"-A male whispered to the Female

"I don't give no crap about the principle"-??? Female

"Fine, I'll go Sue"-??? Male

"Good, now c'mon"-Sue(??? Female)

Wonder where they're goin....-Dell

He began to open the door silently.

CREEeeaak

Crap, stupid door-Dell

"What was that noise? Bernie, check it out, I'll take the teleporter to Ragol first"-Sue

"Fine..."-Bernie

Tap,Tap,Tap Dell heard the footsteps coming.

oh god, oh god, oh god-Dell

He began running, only to run into Bernie.

"WHat the---"-Bernie

"Oops, uh, Sorry, byebye!!!"-Dell

"Hey, get back here!"-Bernie

He then took out a Sniper then shot a photon bullet.

"Heeeeelp"-Dell

the photon got closer and closer, but Dell was able to duck out of the way.

"Come here!!!"-Bernie

The Teleporter!!!-Dell

He Ran, and ran, only about to Run into Sue as she appeared in the teleporter

"Bernie, I fou---"-Sue

Bam!!

"OW, you Bi--"-Sue

"Oooops, sorry, I got to go!!"-Dell

Dell then jumped on the teleporter and vanished.

"God, what the hell happened?"-Sue

"I...Don't know, but if that Idiot tells the principle what you did, your screwed."-Bernie

"Hey!! you too!"-Sue

"and how's that?"-Bernie

"I just like to lie"-Sue

She began to smile.

"One Fomar, going down...."-Sue

The 2 then vanished in the teleporter.



"Something's wrong here"-Dell

He looked around, only to find that he is the only one there.
Something then caught the corner of his eye.

"What's this?"-Dell

He looked around, and found a baby Hildebear.

"Aww....Cute, I think"-Dell

Suddenly the forest shook wildly, only to find that Dell was surrounded, by a group of Hildebears.

"......."-Dell

-------------------To be continued
(What yah think? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/pandatummy.gif )

DnaX
Jul 9, 2003, 11:58 AM
I'll be adding in the next part Gamer. Happi, happi working together. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif
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"Rini, shouldn't we wait like the announcement said." DnaX asked. She was a very short pink HUcaseal that had a pony-tail.

"I'm going down there whether the principal approves or not. I'm going to find out the reason why my parents died." Rini replied, "You don't have to come with me." Rini had light blue hair that was usually tied into two buns, but since it was night, she had let them down. Her hair when to her shoulders and she wasn't wearing usual FOmarl clothed. Instead she had changed into a zip-up sweater and short dress that was less likely to trip her.

"Find then, let's go." Dna exclaimed. Both of them had tip-toed into the teleporter. When they arrived, they saw a guy being surrounded by four gaint Hildebears. Rini started running into the middle of the four Hildebears and casted Rabarta. They died the instiance it hit them.

"Are you okay?" Rini asked the FOmar wearing glasses.

"Why'd we have to save this guy?" DnaX asked. *she totally dislikes guys* The FOmar still sat there mouth opened.

"Are you alright?" Rini asked again.

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Sorry that it's a bit short. But it's the morning and I just woke up. Hehe...Please give me feedback.

>.< X

Slicer238
Jul 9, 2003, 12:22 PM
Good fic so far, I would glady join if you allowed me too.

DnaX
Jul 9, 2003, 12:37 PM
Gamer's maybe going to reply you on a PM...I think.

>.< X

gamerdell7
Jul 9, 2003, 08:37 PM
naw, I'll just let yah join right now http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif.

And call me Dell http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif .

I'll post my side of the story later, just for now, I'll let you 2 do the story(In about 2-3 hours, I'll be online).

Slicer238
Jul 9, 2003, 10:57 PM
Ken and Julia were going through the forest on a quest to find some mags. "Hey Ken, what exactly are we looking for again?" asked Julia a white haired, 18 year old FOnewearl. "I'll told you either the mags or the android that took them." said Ken an 18 year old, brown haired RAmar. Ken had his Varista in his and hand and his Agito 75 sheathed on his side while Julia had her railgun out and a Wand strapped to her back. They were walking through a wooded area and heard a bunch of howls of pain. "Hmm sounds like someone else is here." said Ken as they headed towards the howls.

When they arrived they seen a young Fomar, FOmarl, and Hucaseal. The Hucaseal was shaking her head about saving the Fomar. "You guys alright?" Ken yelled over. "Yea, just had a fight with some of the animals." said the Fomarl as she dusted her casual wear off. "Well ok then just thought we checked out the disturbence." said Julia smiling.



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gamerdell7
Jul 10, 2003, 12:31 AM
Good, good, I'll post the next part of the story

*Another note,My character isn't dorky,lol, just to let you know, I just made him bump into Sue and Bernie as just a little thing to laugh at*

gamerdell7
Jul 10, 2003, 12:52 AM
-----------------Continuation on Dell's Side of the story----------


"So, uh, introductions anyone?"-Dell

This guy is getting on my nerves already-Dnax

"Well, My name is Rini, and this is Dnax"-Rini

"why aren't you wearing your battle clothes?"-Dell

"Can't a lady dress as whatever she wants?"-Rini

"Oh, Right, and you 2?"-Dell

He looked at the Ramar and FOnewearl

"Name's Ken, this is Julia"-Ken

"Hi"-Julia

"Hello"-Dell

"So, what are you all up to?"-Dell

"Well, we we're----"-Ken

Suddenly a Android came out, knocking Ken to the ground.

"Ken!!!"-Julia

"Don't move.."-?????

"Kireek..."-Dnax

"Hello everyone! nice to meet you all! To bad this is already our last time seeing each other"-Kireek

"Wait...what do you mean?"-Dell

"We're here to take out anyone who gets in our way"-?????

A Ramar walked in from the bushes.

"Bernie?!?"-Dell

"Why hello there stupid Fomar..."-Bernie

"Well, my name is--"-Dell

"I dont care what your name is! You interfere, you die!"-Bernie

"But its 5 against 2"-Rini

"Well, three to be exact..."-Sue

"Sue?"-Julia

"5 against 3?"-Dell

"Just because we're outnumbered, doesn't mean you not better"-Bernie

"RRrrGGhHHHERRER"-Kireek

He then fell to the ground.

"Techs are fun to use..."-Dell

"... your all going down!"-Bernie

Bernie then used his SHOT, but unstead of photon, they were tranquilizers.One hit Dell, then Julia.

"What the......"-Dell

"Why....?"-Julia

The 2 fell.

"Julia!!"-Ken

"Don't move, or your little girlfriend gets sliced up"-Sue

She held twin swords next to Julia.

"Ok, your all goin Down!"-Dnax

To be continued---------
(Sorry if I made your character do something you didn't want it to do)
(Dont forget, make a Post that your gonna Post the next part of the story, then make another post of the story....Confused? just Pm me)

Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 12:15 PM
I'll post up a part.

Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 12:31 PM
Ken looked at Julia sleeping and then at Sue. "Alright I tell you what." said Ken as he sheathed his agito and looked at Bernie "Me and you." Bernie looked at him "Uh no, we'll just kill her off the minute you move.". Ken sighed rabbed his sheathed agito and somehow managed to get right behind Sue. Bernie looked in amazment while Ken smiled "now let her go and you won't be sleep." said Ken as he raised the end up his sheathed agito.

DnaX looked at Bernie he wasn't paying attention "Nice plan.". DnaX ran over and grabbed his shot "Now I think its time you two explained why you attacked us." said Rini as DnaX held them up. Ken removed Sue from holding Julia and grabbed her. "Hey you better tell me when this wears off." said Ken as he layed Julia next to Dell. They all forgot about Kireek and he jumped up and slashed Ken right across his back.

DnaX
Jul 10, 2003, 01:19 PM
I'll write the next part http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

>.< X

DnaX
Jul 10, 2003, 02:57 PM
DnaX and Rini had lossen their grip on Bernie so he took advantage of hitting DnaX in the neck making her unconcious. Rini noticed wut had happen and casted Gibarta on Bernie. He was frozen instantly. Ken's back was bleeding seriously. Rini catsed Resta on him and cured his wound.

"Thanks." Ken said to Rini.

"Now it's 2 against 2. This time we're even."Kireek said. Holding his Soul Eater. Ken had his agito out and ready. Rini equipped her rod for defense. Sue had took her edges out.it was girl against girl and guy against guy.

Kireek had underestimated Ken and thought he was just a ranger that didn't know any better to mess with him. Kireek had planned to one shot kill Ken but his attack missed big time. Ken was way too dast for Kireek. Ken had moved behind him with blinding speed and slashed Kireek's back like he did to him.

On the other side of the battle, Rini had used her mind reading skills to read every move Sue had planned. Sue was going down in a flash. Although Rini didn't have such speed, she had telekinesis. She moved the edges out of Sue's hand in threw them into the bushes. Sue began to draw out her railgun but Rini had read her every move. She was quicker to call upon Gibarta and froze like she did with Bernie. While Sue was still frozen, Rini used Rafoie and wounded her badly making her faint.

Bernie had recovered from his frozen stage and was about to shoot tranquilizers towards Rini and Ken. Rini noticed quick enough to take Bernie's shot out of his hands using her telekinesis and cast Rafoie on him. He fainted too like Sue did.

Now it was up to Ken to defeat Kireek...

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Please give feedback..

>.< X

Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 03:00 PM
Good fight scene.



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Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 03:11 PM
Ken watched as Rini used her metal strength to defeat Sue and Bernie. "Slick, very slick." he thought to himself. Kireek stood up sparks coming out of his back "Hmm maybe I was alittle to hasty in judging you, Your soul will indeed become very tastey." Ken gave him a look "Your still gonna try and fight me after I just made your sensors worthless?". Kireek began to laugh "I'll fight you now and everytime I come across you.". Ken just looked at him "alright lets go then.".

Kireek ran at him full speed and slashed his scythe and missed. Ken jumped back and began to laugh and a 4 mines came up from the ground and exploded. Kireek started to laugh "my sensors may be worthless now but my mines are perfect take you down." Then he noticed Ken land right infront of him. "why are you kneeling in front of me you want to die?" said Kireek as he raisied his Soul Eater and began to slash. Ken looked up at hi mwith a smile and then Kireek heard a glass shaterring sound and explosion. Ken came down so fast he created a sonic boom and used it to knock Kireek back.

"Alright now that your done laughing I think I'll take you down." said Ken as he ran full speed at Kireek. Kireek got up and ran away using mines to cover him. "Well its better then him killing any of us." said Ken as he walked over to DnaX and Rini.

gamerdell7
Jul 10, 2003, 09:14 PM
great Fic. Everyone!! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

I think I'll post now.

gamerdell7
Jul 10, 2003, 09:35 PM
---continuation--------
(Dell's side of the story)


"...ugh..er..hm..."-Dell

"Look, he's becoming concious"-Rini

"I, I don't feel so good.."-Dell

Dell then ran behind a bush and puked.

Ken then looked at the dart.

"..... This doesn't look like an ordinary Tranquilizer dart."-Ken

"What do you mean---"-Dnax

Soon Bernie and Sue got back up.

"S--s-Omthings comm--ing...Bern-ie we gotta split"-Sue.

The 2 then ran.

"Weaklings!!!"-Dnax

Booom,Booom

"Earthquake?"-Rini

"Footsteps"-Ken

"Dragon--"-Dell

Dell began to limp.

"There's a Dragon COMING!!"-Dell

"Everyone, Split!"-Ken

Ken then picked up Julia and ran behind a tree.
Everyone else ran to different trees.

"Wasn't tha-t thing--in the Central*Cough* Dome?!?"-Dell

"Looks like it escaped, and it looks a lot bigger than last time!!!"-Ken

Ken noticed it.
The Dragon was almost the size of pioneer 2.
The Dragon got closer.
Stepping on almost every tree on the way.

"It's going to Pioneer 2!!"-Rini

"We must warn the people before the Dragon gets here!!"-Ken

They all stared at the dragon.

"What are we all waiting for!?!?!?! RUUUUN!"-Dnax

THe Ragon had spotted them, and Shot out multiple fire balls.

"Forest Fire!!"-Dnax

The fire spread.

"C'mon everyone, RUN!"-Dnax

Everyone ran, closer and closer, they saw the teleporter.

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Well, im done for now. What you think? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/pandatummy.gif

Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 09:46 PM
May I step in?

Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 09:50 PM
Ken ran with Julia in his arms as Rini, DnaX, and Dell got closer and closer to the transporter. They began to step into the transporter and Ken tossed Julia inside "Tell her I'm out getting milk." said Ken as he turned around and blocked a fire ball. "Ken get in the transporter." yelled Rini. "GO, I'll try and keep it busy while you warn P2." yelled Ken as he withdrew his Varista and fired a round at the dragon hitting it in the eye. The group began to disappear and seen a giant fire wall engulf Ken.
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(Don't kill him off or make him evil, cuase I have my own plan.) http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif




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gamerdell7
Jul 10, 2003, 10:29 PM
Great Job Slicer! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Maybe I should post now.

DnaX
Jul 10, 2003, 10:43 PM
I'll post later today...

>.< X



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gamerdell7
Jul 10, 2003, 10:57 PM
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"NO!"-Julia

"Huh?"-Rini

But Julia still seemed asleep.

"Did W-ee take out the Dar-t..?"-Dell

Dnax took out the Dart.

"Hm.. this is odd...No Medical center can heal something like this"-Dnax

"What, what's wro-"-Rini

Thug
"The Drag--on!cough"-Dell

"C'mon! we got to tell the Principal Tyre--"-Rini

Thug
Every then hit the ground.

"Ow Ow Ow Ow Ow"-Rini

Rini had just twisted her ankle

A whole bunch of people ran all over pioneer 2.
Whats going on!?!?!
Heelp!!!!
A dragon!!-Passengers

*Ding* Everyone, please stay come!!! we are sending soldiers to take care of the monster*ding*

"No! they shouldn't do that!"-Ken

"Ken!"-All 3 said.

"Are you all right!?"-Rini

"Yeah, I think so, I barely stratched the monster at all..."-Ken

"Whe-res the medic cent-er*Cough*-Dell

They all Tried to run.

"dangit, you all have to be slow, Ill bring Julia to the center right now"-Dnax.

The Android picked her up and ran.

"C'mon, we better get healed..."-Ken

Bam

"oh no!"-Dell

The 3 looked out the window.

"....."

It was a massacre, so many dead bodies...

"Oh my god..."-Rini

"HAhahaHAHAa"-?????

Out the window, there was a scientist, or, at least it looked like one.

"He kinda looks like Dr. Os--*Cough*"-Dell

"What?"-Ken

"Dr. Os--to,*cough*-Dell, ran to the nearest bathroom and puked.

"Whose that?"-Rini

"I thi--"-Ken

Bam!!!!!!

"Oh no!!! it's trying to make a hole in Pioneer 2!!"-Rini

"RaZONDIE!!!!!!"-Dell

Zap Dell tried to hurt the giant beast, but no luck

"hm..? whats this!? Stupid Hunter!"-Osto

The Scientist Jumped, VERY FAR, and crashed into the window

"Oh my god!"-Dell

"RaBarta!"-Osto

Ice Ran across the floor

"Jump!"-Ken

All 3 Jumped, only to get there feet stuck to the ground right after

"God, I dont wanna die...."-Rini

"Now why would you say that?!"-Dnax

Dnax then threw a sort of fire trap, and melted the ice.

"C'mon! we Can take him!"-Dnax Smiled

-----------To be continued----------
(Feels kinda crazy, dont it?)

Slicer238
Jul 10, 2003, 11:55 PM
Answered my own question. I'll post after DnaX goes




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gamerdell7
Jul 11, 2003, 12:44 AM
Ok ok, Ill post the next part. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

gamerdell7
Jul 11, 2003, 01:09 AM
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"C'mon yah wierd-lookin scientist! We can take you on!"-Dnax

"Stupid Android"-Osto

Suddenly Everything turned white, Blinding Ken,Rini, and Dell, but not Dnax.

"I--I can't See!"-Dell
"Help! Why is everything so bright!?"-Rini
"I't must be some sort of flash bomb"-Ken
"Hey!! Stop that!"-Dnax

Dnax took out a rifle an fired fieriously.
But Osto dodged almost every single photon bullet, except for one.

"Agh, How dare you!, My Dragon, Come Here!!!!"-Osto

The ship broke apart

"We got to get off the ship!"-Ken

"Run!*Cough*"-Dell

"Wait, you guys go to the nearest teleport, I'll go get Julia"-Ken

"Fine, c'mon you guys"-Rini

"Wait, I ha-ve to get my andr--oid!"-Dell

"Fine, we'll be near the teleporter"-Rini

As Rini and Dnax go off the same direction, Ken and Dell go to different Directions.

*One quick note: this is where you tell YOUR side of the story, until the characters meet up again

---Dell's Side---
"Delta, hope your safe..."-Dell

As He began Limping his way in the long hallway to his room, he finds Delta, standing, confused.

"M-master! what happened to you!?"-Delta

"C'mon we'll talk later, we got to get out of here!"-Dell.

As Delta helped Dell run, The hallway began to collapse

"o-oh no, not now!"-Dell

The 2 Ran, But Dell Fell by accident, and the whole hallway went down

"AAAaaaaagh"-Dell

the hallway fell aver 4 miles to the ground.

"I got you!"-Delta

"Ooph"-Dell

Not a single scratch...

Everyone ran all over the forest area, screaming


"C'mon, we got to hide, for now"-Dell

The 2 found a spot to hind, as the sun was setting, Dell stoad there, waiting to see if the others were still there...Then he fainted

"Master! are you ok?"-Delta

He was out cold... Delta waited, going into sleep mode to save her energy

-------To be continued------

Yay this is fun!

Slicer238
Jul 11, 2003, 01:15 AM
Alright I'll go next

gamerdell7
Jul 11, 2003, 01:28 AM
whew... typing takes alot out of you.

Slicer238
Jul 11, 2003, 01:34 AM
Ken ran as fast as he could (which was pretty damn fast) and arrived at the medical station. Most of the workers ran off but a few dedicated people stayed there and helped the wounded off of the ship. "Man where is she, maybe shes off the ship and safe?" thought Ken as he looked around the the building. He tried to ask what was left of the staff but none of them knew.

He kept walking going into every room looking for her. "Oh man I ain't got the time where is she." said Ken as he quickend his pace. Julia was outside of the ship and layed under a tree. She began to wake up and looked at the flaming Pioneer 2. Her eyes widened as she seen many small explosions and then a big explosion near the medical station. "If I was out that would of been were Ken looked." thought Julia as her eyes began to water. She got up and was still alittle dizy from the drug.

"Ma'am you can't get up your still recovering." yelled a nurse. "My---my boyfriend is on Pioneer 2 and if I was hurt he would of been in the medical station." said Julia as she fell to the ground crying, "Ken I'm sorry I couldn't help.". She fell back unconscious and a nurse ran over to check. Ken was still alive but his time was running out the medical station was sure to go very soon. He got up to the security room and watched the monitors and seen DnaX carrying Julia. Then he fast forwarded and seen a person carrying her out. "Alright I just got to get out of here." thought Ken as a close by explosion went off.

"Don't worry Julia I'll be with you soon." thought Ken as he ran towards the nearest transporter. He got on the transporter and as he started to vanish an explosion went off in the room sending him father away then he wanted to be. "Great now I have to hike through the forest." thought Ken as he appeared father up from Pioneer 2. He started walking and finaly found some refugees of P2. He then seen Julai laying under a tree. She woke up and seen him standing next to her.

gamerdell7
Jul 11, 2003, 01:38 AM
Great job slicer! Now It's Dnax's side of the story.

where do you live? what time is it there?

Slicer238
Jul 11, 2003, 01:43 AM
*raises eyebrow* ?

gamerdell7
Jul 11, 2003, 02:00 AM
Hm? Never mind. It's getting dark here, so Im goin online tomorrow.

DnaX
Jul 11, 2003, 12:40 PM
Rini and DnaX had went to get some supplies and camping out stuff. They had went to the rooms they were at and brought all the useful things. Such as clothes, food, water, a few sleeping bags and so on.

"Rini...Why do I have to carry all the things?" X said under the piile of bags.

"Okay then don't." Rini used her telekinesis to make the bags float in the air.

"If you do that there's no problem for me." DnaX smiled. They got to the nearest teleporter and teleported. Under the tree they saw Ken and Julia. They also saw Dell and an android sitting behind the bushes where they could see the sunset.

"We might have to camp out in the wilderness so we brought some supplies." Rini said aloud. They looked at the supplies she was talking about and saw that was alot. DnaX had handed them each a backpack.

"I hope that crazy scientist cools himself down." DnaX said.

>.< X

LJ
Jul 11, 2003, 04:22 PM
Hello. I'll be joining. Here's my part.....
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LJ, the 16 year old Humar, walked back from the caves. After training in there for hours he had accidentally fallen asleep. It was lucky that a monster hadn't attacked him while he lay sleeping. He arrived in the forest.

"What in the world?" He saw a huge dragon rampaging and firing fireballs everywhere. "I gotta stop the forest from being burned down," he said. He ran quickly towards the dragon. As he got closer to it he noticed the dragon wasnt randomly firing at the forest, but at some hunters. Before he could get to them, all of them but one teleported back to Pioneer 2. The hunter left began to jump and attack at the dragon but to no avail. After trying for a couple of miinutes he ran and jumped into the teleporter with the dragon at his heels just as he teleported. The dragon roared. The dragon then took flight and flew away. LJ took out his yamatos. The forest fire was beginning to spread. 'What am I gonna do,' he thought, 'I know.'

LJ jumped above the closest tree on fire and activated his yamato's special ability. He channeled his magical ability to shoot out beams of ice through his swords on all the trees that were on fire.

"Man that was close," he said, "But how did the dragon get so big, and who were those hunters i saw that it was following. Could they have done something to it to make it grow? I need to go to the city and find them."

LJ ran to the teleporter and arrived in Pioneer 2. He saw a maniacal looking scientist and the Dragon rampaging. "UH OH!" said LJ. He then turned around and headed back into the forest.

He arrivied in the forest and looked around. He knew he had seen people teleporting to the forest when he had been in the city. He walked for about 30 minutes when he saw a camp of refugees from Pioneer 2. As he walked through the camp he saw the Hunter who had tried to fight the dragon earlier. He walked forward shouting, "HEY!"
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Slicer238
Jul 11, 2003, 05:01 PM
If your reffering to Ken hes a RAmar, guy I'll post next.

Slicer238
Jul 11, 2003, 05:08 PM
Ken looked at the backpack "great we're going back to school.". Julia woke up a little bit earlier still dizzy from the sleeping drug. "So Ken I heard you tried fighting the Dragon to let us get on Pioneer 2." said Julia simling. "Meh, I was gonna keep fighting it but it just wouldn't die, I mean I even shot it in the eye." said Ken. "So did you get the milk?" asked Rini sarcastically. "You know what I did." he pulled a lunch room milk carton out of his inventory.

Dell was still out and his android didn't leave his side. Ken looked over "You do know that you can take your eyes off him for a second.". Delta ignored him and stayed focused on Dell.

gamerdell7
Jul 22, 2003, 03:14 AM
Ah.... Been a while, now I'm ready to type again


(note, My character is now a short HUmar with a ponytail. I lost my Fomar to Corruption(Dang...) but I made a HUmar as a replacement.)


Continuation

"NO!"-Dell

He stood up, frozen in silence.

"Hm? Your awake!"-Delta

"ah...finally"-Ken

".........."-Dell

"Well, c'mon and eat"-Rini

He sat next to them.
Everyone ate, except the androids.
Time passed... getting late.

"Well, as of now, many live were lost on pioneer 2.
We, are a few of the many survivors."-Rini

"What are we gonna do?"-Ken

"We are gonna go look for traces of evidence of what happened to pioneer 1 when we left, we must check in the forest for clues, possibly in the Central Dome."-Rini

"Well then, C'mon! What are we waiting for??"-Ken

All of them got up and ventured in the forest to the Central Dome.


To be continued

gamerdell7
Jul 22, 2003, 03:19 AM
Continuation

"y'know, I was just here, theres nothing here you'll find."-LJ

"Oh yeah? let's see..."-Dnax

X began smacking all the controls in the Dome.

"She's odd..."-Delta whispered to Dell.

"there!"-X

A cave.

"HA! Liar!"-Dnax

"..."-LJ

To be continued

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