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OniTatsujin
Aug 10, 2003, 11:19 PM
Shadows

In the light, darkness grows,
shadows gathering darkness,
this darkness feeds off souls,
thus copying our structures...

Every man and woman have this darkness,
this everlasting power that grows,
growing as we walk in the light,
this darkness soon feeds on its victim...

Making new evil in this world,
People soon only live in the night,
delivering death to all,
How did this darkness come about you ask?

It's the light, the light is darkness,
and the darkness, is the light,
there will be evil, and there will be good,
But soon Darkness will be the only way out...

Only shall you use darkness, to overpower the light,
Only shall you use darkness, to rid this world of evil,
In the Darkness, light in hearts grow...
In the light, darkness in our hearts grow...

Elvendar
Aug 10, 2003, 11:21 PM
O.o

It makes me hungry.

OniTatsujin
Aug 10, 2003, 11:25 PM
On 2003-08-10 21:21, Elvendar wrote:
O.o

It makes me hungry.


:/ ??? ^_^;; okaaaay...riiiiiight....

umbrella
Aug 11, 2003, 12:00 AM
Did you write that all by yourself?

OniTatsujin
Aug 11, 2003, 12:01 AM
yep ^_^ made it up in my head like 10 minutes ago..it just pops in.. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

umbrella
Aug 11, 2003, 12:37 AM
I hate it. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

OniTatsujin
Aug 11, 2003, 08:41 AM
>: (
meanie...

Brett
Aug 11, 2003, 08:43 AM
Pretty good, I've never been a poetry liker or poetry person but not bad

OniTatsujin
Aug 11, 2003, 09:01 AM
On 2003-08-11 06:43, Brett wrote:
Pretty good, I've never been a poetry liker or poetry person but not bad


see this guy is nice http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Brett
Aug 11, 2003, 10:11 AM
Heh, I just say what's in my opinion although normally it does end up being nice.