HUShadow
Oct 11, 2003, 08:08 PM
Okay, I'm gonna write a Fan-Fic...or at least start one. Tell em what you guys think of the first chapter (It's kinda short). Sorry if there's stray question-marks there, for some reason they went and replaced all commas, dot-dot-dots, and quotation marks, so I had to go back and fix my post, but I might've issed some. P.S: Please, don't pick 'You suck' just for fun http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif
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That sound...where is it coming from? Why is it ringing so in my head?
Zeke stopped in his tracks. The Pioneer 2 was a huge ship. He had been walking for hours now, trying to follow the sound that was in his head. It was bothering him, and he intended to stop it. He had covered about one sixth of the giant cruiser he lived on.
'Excuse me, ma'am,' he said to a near-by woman. 'But can you hear that irratating ringing, too?'
'Ringing? Zeke, what are you talking about? Are you okay?'
'Well, I just- -wait?how do you know my name?'
'Everyone knows your name, Zeke. You're one of the three heroes who deystroyed that nasty 'Gaulove' creature. The...the scientist, yes. You're famous!'
'Oh,well, I didn't know that,but thank you, anyway.'
He started walking again, thinking to himself.
Wow...I thought that whole Gaulove thing was supposed to be a secret...
He thought about the woman's words.
'One of the three heroes'
'I wonder how Eli and Leyrien are doing?'
His friends Eli, the Hunter, and Leyrien, the Force had helped him in defeating Gaulove, the giant demon that had been threatening the people of the Pioneer 2. After they had received their earnings from deystroying it, they disappeared without a trace.
Zeke heard the noise again.
Why am I the only one who hears this? That woman was the eleventh person I asked, and the answer was the same as every othe time.
As he kept walking, the noise got louder and louder. He was getting really annoyed now. 'Once I find whatever is making that noise,' he said aloud. 'I'm going leave it in more pieces than I left that Gaulove in!'
He started jogging. He had to get to the sound, fast. It was starting to actually hurt him. He had a headache now. He kept jogging. The noise kept coming. He even tried running backward about thirty feet, but it seemed like once he got to a certain part of the Pioneer 2, the sound that grew louder would stay that same level until he got to a further spot, which meant it would grow even worse.
Zeke was practically sprinting now. He had to find the source of that sound, fast. He felt like his head was about to explode. He sprinted past all of the brightly-lit shops of his home. He went past the hospitals, and the residential areas, and some construction sites even, until he finally stopped in a deserted alley, gasping for breath, and at the same time on the ground, trying to cover his ears from the sound that drew him there.
He couldn't even think. All he knew was that there was a sound, and that he couldn't move. The sound was so horribly loud now that even if he tried to move, his body wouldn't budge. It was like he was under some type of enchantment. He started to yell. He didn't know what he was yelling, for he couldn't hear it. All he knew was that maybe some one could help him.
But suddenly, the sound stopped. Zeke could think again. He spoke aloud, just to make sure he wasn't dreaming. 'Rappies are little yellow wimps.'
He couldn't believe it. The sound that was antagonizing him for hours had finally stopped. But something was still wrong. Zeke once again tried to sit up, but still couldn't. He groaned as he lay there, helpless. He screamed now, 'Somebody help me!,' from the top of his lungs. Suddenly, he felt the presnce of another being in his midst.
'Now, now, Zeke. There's no need to raise your voice.'
A shadowed figure came up from behind him. Zeke could barely see the new-comer in the position he was in. 'Who...who are you?,' he questioned. He could hear a slight chuckle. 'I am the maestro of that beautiful music that brought you here.'
Zeke's eyes widened. 'That was you? But, how?' How could you design something like that? Only I could hear it!'
'Correct. Only you could hear it. I needed you.'
'Why? What for?'
'Your mind, Zeke,' the figure said. 'You have a brilliant mind, and I need you to help me.'
'Listen, if this is some kind of an interview-'
'This is no interview, my friend.'
The shadow started to pace around Zeke, slowly.
'You see, Gaulove was my friend. I need you to help me resurrect him.'
'Gaulove!? Never!'
Zeke tried to move and once again was unsuccesful. 'Damn!'
'Calm yourself, Zeke. Think of your options here. You could either: Do what I ask, help me in my tasks and share domination of the universe with me willingly, or I could force you to. Either way, I will have you on my side.'
'No!'
An angry growl could be heard from the figure. Suddenly, the sound that had brought him to the alley started up again, louder than ever. Zeke screamed. 'No! I'll...never?'
Suddenly, Zeke's mind went blank. The ringing stopped, and he stood up. He then walked over to the shadow and bowed. 'Good,' the figure said. 'I knew you'd se it my way.' The two then disappeared.
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That sound...where is it coming from? Why is it ringing so in my head?
Zeke stopped in his tracks. The Pioneer 2 was a huge ship. He had been walking for hours now, trying to follow the sound that was in his head. It was bothering him, and he intended to stop it. He had covered about one sixth of the giant cruiser he lived on.
'Excuse me, ma'am,' he said to a near-by woman. 'But can you hear that irratating ringing, too?'
'Ringing? Zeke, what are you talking about? Are you okay?'
'Well, I just- -wait?how do you know my name?'
'Everyone knows your name, Zeke. You're one of the three heroes who deystroyed that nasty 'Gaulove' creature. The...the scientist, yes. You're famous!'
'Oh,well, I didn't know that,but thank you, anyway.'
He started walking again, thinking to himself.
Wow...I thought that whole Gaulove thing was supposed to be a secret...
He thought about the woman's words.
'One of the three heroes'
'I wonder how Eli and Leyrien are doing?'
His friends Eli, the Hunter, and Leyrien, the Force had helped him in defeating Gaulove, the giant demon that had been threatening the people of the Pioneer 2. After they had received their earnings from deystroying it, they disappeared without a trace.
Zeke heard the noise again.
Why am I the only one who hears this? That woman was the eleventh person I asked, and the answer was the same as every othe time.
As he kept walking, the noise got louder and louder. He was getting really annoyed now. 'Once I find whatever is making that noise,' he said aloud. 'I'm going leave it in more pieces than I left that Gaulove in!'
He started jogging. He had to get to the sound, fast. It was starting to actually hurt him. He had a headache now. He kept jogging. The noise kept coming. He even tried running backward about thirty feet, but it seemed like once he got to a certain part of the Pioneer 2, the sound that grew louder would stay that same level until he got to a further spot, which meant it would grow even worse.
Zeke was practically sprinting now. He had to find the source of that sound, fast. He felt like his head was about to explode. He sprinted past all of the brightly-lit shops of his home. He went past the hospitals, and the residential areas, and some construction sites even, until he finally stopped in a deserted alley, gasping for breath, and at the same time on the ground, trying to cover his ears from the sound that drew him there.
He couldn't even think. All he knew was that there was a sound, and that he couldn't move. The sound was so horribly loud now that even if he tried to move, his body wouldn't budge. It was like he was under some type of enchantment. He started to yell. He didn't know what he was yelling, for he couldn't hear it. All he knew was that maybe some one could help him.
But suddenly, the sound stopped. Zeke could think again. He spoke aloud, just to make sure he wasn't dreaming. 'Rappies are little yellow wimps.'
He couldn't believe it. The sound that was antagonizing him for hours had finally stopped. But something was still wrong. Zeke once again tried to sit up, but still couldn't. He groaned as he lay there, helpless. He screamed now, 'Somebody help me!,' from the top of his lungs. Suddenly, he felt the presnce of another being in his midst.
'Now, now, Zeke. There's no need to raise your voice.'
A shadowed figure came up from behind him. Zeke could barely see the new-comer in the position he was in. 'Who...who are you?,' he questioned. He could hear a slight chuckle. 'I am the maestro of that beautiful music that brought you here.'
Zeke's eyes widened. 'That was you? But, how?' How could you design something like that? Only I could hear it!'
'Correct. Only you could hear it. I needed you.'
'Why? What for?'
'Your mind, Zeke,' the figure said. 'You have a brilliant mind, and I need you to help me.'
'Listen, if this is some kind of an interview-'
'This is no interview, my friend.'
The shadow started to pace around Zeke, slowly.
'You see, Gaulove was my friend. I need you to help me resurrect him.'
'Gaulove!? Never!'
Zeke tried to move and once again was unsuccesful. 'Damn!'
'Calm yourself, Zeke. Think of your options here. You could either: Do what I ask, help me in my tasks and share domination of the universe with me willingly, or I could force you to. Either way, I will have you on my side.'
'No!'
An angry growl could be heard from the figure. Suddenly, the sound that had brought him to the alley started up again, louder than ever. Zeke screamed. 'No! I'll...never?'
Suddenly, Zeke's mind went blank. The ringing stopped, and he stood up. He then walked over to the shadow and bowed. 'Good,' the figure said. 'I knew you'd se it my way.' The two then disappeared.