PDA

View Full Version : FanFic: A Mag Fairy Tale (told in poem form)



shinto_kuji
Jan 7, 2004, 03:08 PM
something i came up with at school yesterday. good way to get those grades up, no? now on to the tale... (this is inspired by the story that was inspired by fluffy. go fluffy!)

-----

A Mag Fairy Tale
by:shinto_kuji

----------



Once upon a time,
There was a black and white Sato.
He had a tail of orange
And the name of Mr. Bombato.

He was a lonely mag
With noone by his side.
All he wanted was
To have a lady as his bride.

Then one day,
As he wondered alone,
He happened across a building-
The rounded Central Dome.

And there on the Dome's top,
Mr. Bombato saw a strange thing.
A beautiful pink Sato
Lay on the roof sleeping.

"Oh, why, fair maiden?"
Mr. Bombato cried,
"Why dost thou lay on that roof?"
The pink Sato opened her eyes.

"My name is Cindrealla
And I dare not leave.
If I move from this spot,
King Dread will kill me!"

"Oh, Cindrealla," Bombato asked,
"Who is this King Dread
That, if you move but an inch,
Will strike you down dead?"

"King Dread, my kind Sir,
Is a fiersome and terrible beast!
He is the dragon that lives here,
Just below my very own feet!"

"Then I, the Sato Bombato,
Shall smite that King Dread.
Then when i return,
We can be wed!"

And with that, Mr. Bombato ran
Straight through the door
And through the dirt,
Onto the Central Dome's floor.

But, King Dread was prepared.
He flew higher and higher
And killed Bombato quickly,
with his fiersome, terrible fire.

Bombato opened his eyes,
Looked all around,
And saw a wonderful man,
Backed by a very pleasant sound.

"Who are you, Sir?" Bombato asked,
"And where am I at?
Have I been killed by Dread?
I can't kill him, I am but a cat."

The voice boomed aloud,
"Do not rest just yet.
King Dread is evil, I am good!
I am most the wonderful person
You have ever met."

"Then," cried Bombato,
"Will you help me wonderful man?
I must save Cindrealla,
I must do all that I can."

"I see, I see," said the voice,
"Hear me cry out loud!
If the purpose is for love,
It shall be allowed!"

Mr. Bombato found himself falling,
Through the sky and the clouds,
Down through the Central Dome,
And back to the ground.

King Dread saw Bombato and cried,
"I thought I killed you before.
You fool! Do not come back here,
Unless you wish for some more!"

King Dread charged at Bombato,
His horns aimed low,
But Bombato was ready,
The sounds of heaven in tow.

Mr. Bombato dodged Dread's attack,
Finding himself behind the beast.
He grabbed Dread's tail,
And threw the beast east.

Bombato had won,
Victory was his.
Now to claim his prize,
His beautiful Miss.

The two Sato got married,
They loved each other dearly.
The honeymoon filled
With HaHa's and HeHe's.

Yes, it is good
To see a tale end in laughter.
Oh! And I almost forgot...
They lived happily ever after.

----------

THE END

----------

what do you think? ^-^;

Robo47
Jan 7, 2004, 03:12 PM
O_O

Nai_Calus
Jan 7, 2004, 03:41 PM
Awwwwwwww, that was so cute! I have a weakness for pure, unadulterated mush. XD

Fluffy approves as well and says it's nice to see Mags with names stupider than his. I told him that wasn't nice, but he's too cute to be mad at.

navci
Jan 7, 2004, 03:54 PM
Awww.
That's so cute. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif I think it's really original and... well, even poem idiots like me can follow through, so, kudos to you!

... though. Sato has orange tongue? Hehe

Sord
Jan 7, 2004, 04:48 PM
funny...but it would have been really funny if Cindrella had turned him down.

shinto_kuji
Jan 7, 2004, 07:06 PM
On 2004-01-07 13:48, Sord wrote:
funny...but it would have been really funny if Cindrella had turned him down.



aw but that would have been mean... and it wouldn't have been a very good fairy tale >.> <.< >.>

Sord
Jan 7, 2004, 07:08 PM
i didn't say it should happen that way, just the the irony would be pretty funny. I mean he was saved because of his love, but if his love turned him down, would he die again?