read my sonnet!!

[zepher]

hey pplz read my sonnet i just wrote

sonnetz dun usually hav namez but gave mine a name...




overcasted azure

In a dark and dank place I sit in repose solicity
I ponder upon when Cimmerian epoch will end,
Even though it’s dreadful I must abide tranquility
But darkness’ iniquitous powers in which it sends,
How never can I realize its incessant essence
Its aphotic mortal part writhe over my life,
It shall always leave an atrocious presence
And then my body shall be a impure soul that rife,
Now I must aerify myself to be a celestial entity
Which must not shift into a forlorn distant idola,
So if it is a phantasm that must be arduously holy
I must now refrain from the malady of payola,
In my reverie I cannot wield and restrain such despair,
Then my spirit shall languish into a lurid stygian air.


~zeph~

[Noone]

I don't think it's a sonnet. It doesn't seem to have a series of stressed then unstressed syllables or or the usual iambic pentameter. It has the fourteen lines though... so it's like prose poetry with fourteen lines... but i don't know i'm not into poetry

[derBauer]

I think its a ripoff of the PSO ending song lyrics.

[Dime]

Just because you know a few big words and have a thesaurus handy doesn't mean you can write poetry.

[Skuda]

Blindfolded,
Till the true darkness rises.
Vailed still by the greed,
Even after the end has passed.

[Skuda]

that stupid little ditty took my about 13 seconds.