my very first (and very bad) sprite comic.

[Wyndham]

http://randomjunk.250free.com/folder/finished1.jpg
keep in mind im just doing an experimental one, okay?
thanks.

[Shake]

Hehe, good work.

Few suggestions:

Resize the picture to make it smaller, but make the text bigger. An easy-to-read comic works wonders on joke execution.

It's okay to swear. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[navci]

I voted "I KILL YOU" because it's a fun option. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Hm Let's see. One of the FOmar's speech bubble isn't done, right?

Heh. Hm. It's okay, not horrible.
... As is, it isn't very funny tho...

[DruidMettool]

I used to make sprite comics. Dragon Warrior Based sprite comics... in MS Paint, even. yes, I'm a Dragon Warrior Fan. Probably the only in the entire state of Rhode Island

http://www.dragon-warrior.com/Comics/redkirby013.png
Made this 2 years ago under my old name.

Yes, your sprite comic is very good for a first attempt. I hope to see excellent work from you in the future

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[_Ted_]

Nice, but make the text bigger!


Oh, and I voted Kill you because of the text!


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[Sayara]

I just dont like those Sprites, they're so... Non Moveable! They're just good for statues and stuff. Ah Well, not bad, kinda a clishe for the Fomar though...

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[Nai_Calus]

Remind me, someday, if I ever go insane again, to produce FFVI-based PSO spritesets. FFVI had great, great sprites.

[EJ]

I voted I Kill you!!! cuz I like that option http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
The comic looks good for a first attempt



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[EJ]

oops sorry for double post (Use powers to make everyone forget about this post)


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[odie2088]

have you been reading temjin's sprite comics?

[Wyndham]

On 2004-05-01 17:52, odie2088 wrote:
have you been reading temjin's sprite comics?



never read another one in my life.

[odie2088]

reminds me of temjin...

[Wyndham]

where could i find temjin's comics, and why?
it was just some jokes thrown in with a sarcastic FOmar. >_>