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PhotonDrop
May 5, 2004, 08:34 PM
Hi all, I'm planning a sequel for my fanfic.

I'd like to ask you all what to avoid when writing this, like what cliches and stuff.

This will have a group of Hunters that work otside the morgue and they all idolize a certain Hunter.

I need an Antagonist and some characters that dont belong to me to borrow.

Could you please help this HUnewearl in distress?



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Solstis
May 5, 2004, 08:55 PM
Erm.... try to avoid all references to Anime?

And a final battle with Falz is sorta Cliche, though no one has done it in awhile.

And by the way, you could use Makar, Solstis' brother (basically the same as Solstis).

Or Toldos, perhaps, a plunky FOnewm who everyone thinks is dead but isn't. O_o (*wigles fingers* Mysterrrrious!)

[Edit]: Is this the *secret*? Sounds good, I can't wait until you write it!

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PhotonDrop
May 5, 2004, 09:00 PM
Yep this was the secret! I had was planning on doing this since the day I started the first one! But then I realized that the characters knowing eachother already would be confusing so I was like "Well, fuck..." so I wrote the first fic and lost notes on my original(good thing, the Compressed Artificial Reality Data Revolution would have fucked the whole thing up) so now I'm redoing it and will make things more detailed, hell I'm even describing the returning characters!

Sagasu
May 6, 2004, 09:58 AM
On 2004-05-05 19:00, PhotonDrop wrote:
Yep this was the secret! I had was planning on doing this since the day I started the first one! But then I realized that the characters knowing eachother already would be confusing so I was like "Well, fuck..." so I wrote the first fic and lost notes on my original(good thing, the Compressed Artificial Reality Data Revolution would have fucked the whole thing up) so now I'm redoing it and will make things more detailed, hell I'm even describing the returning characters!



Wa? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

Anyway, I look forward to the sequel! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

PhotonDrop
May 6, 2004, 12:51 PM
Yep, this will be a good one!

PhotonDrop
May 6, 2004, 04:53 PM
Okay characters list:

PhotonDrop
Techno
Camila
Remix
X
Makar(still considering though)
? #1 (TBA)
? #2 (TBA)
? #3 (TBA)
Doctor Murphy
Doctor Calloway
Antagonist #1 (TBA)
Antagonist #2 (TBA)
Antagonist #3 (TBA)
Antagonist #4 (TBA)
Antagonist #5 (TBA)

PhotonDrop
May 6, 2004, 10:11 PM
hmm... two antagonists will be shaved off seeing that five is rediculous.

I just may have the first chapter up in two days or a week from now.

Sagasu
May 7, 2004, 01:20 AM
Hmm..

Nonsense(about to many villians) whenever you have that many, you can kill off more of em faster http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



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PhotonDrop
May 7, 2004, 09:29 AM
On 2004-05-06 23:20, Sarunakai wrote:

Nonsense(about to many villians) whenever you have that many, you can kill off more of em faster http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

indeed i will, 'shave em off' could also be taken as 'gets blown up in chapter one'. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Solstis
May 7, 2004, 12:44 PM
On 2004-05-07 07:29, PhotonDrop wrote:


On 2004-05-06 23:20, Sarunakai wrote:

Nonsense(about to many villians) whenever you have that many, you can kill off more of em faster http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

indeed i will, 'shave em off' could also be taken as 'gets blown up in chapter one'. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif



They could be converted into useless henchmen http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif!

Gnarled_rose
May 7, 2004, 12:56 PM
HUnewearl in distress?*kicks down door*
Umm.....Maybye you could have this guy that.....doesn't smell good....or.....
Hang on, will this be an Episode 3 fic? Cause if it is, I got nothing, but I will call Hikara over here.

PhotonDrop
May 7, 2004, 04:57 PM
Yeah, its during episode 3 but it wont follow gameplay, it'll be my own story line, but then again, it will tie in at some places.

I'll give you a hint to one place with similar events in both story lines:

KABOOOM!!

PhotonDrop
May 8, 2004, 12:10 PM
On 2004-05-07 10:44, Solstis wrote:


On 2004-05-07 07:29, PhotonDrop wrote:


On 2004-05-06 23:20, Sarunakai wrote:

Nonsense(about to many villians) whenever you have that many, you can kill off more of em faster http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

indeed i will, 'shave em off' could also be taken as 'gets blown up in chapter one'. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif



They could be converted into useless henchmen http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif!



WTF, how'd I miss this the first time around?

lol, the lackeys could have the Bebop and Rocksteady factor with them.

Bebop and Rocksteady factor: Bumbiling henchmen who rarely get things right and look strong but get their butts kicked easily.