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Sharkyland
Jul 14, 2004, 02:12 PM
Okay, playing with Mixfortune last night on Episode III, I've gotten an urge to draw my Episode III comic. x_x I've also got a plot for my Episode I & II comic.

I will get a storyline on how the plot is going to flow, and I want people to critique it before I go draw the comic book. Btw, if you read this it will seriously spoil when I actually draw it. I'm thinking of adding ppl from the character bank if people still play attention to that. It won't be random cameos but more like interactions with some of my characters. Like I was thinking of using someone to help Marina finally learn the 'Four Sword technique'

(This will be linked soon)
- Phantasy Star Online Episode I
- Phantasy Star Online Episode II
- Phantasy Star Online Episode III

Any helpers?

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Newdroid
Jul 14, 2004, 02:18 PM
I'll be happy to help! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif
Nisshoku
Jul 14, 2004, 02:36 PM
Count me in, Sharky. I'd be glad to help, and perhaps my character can be put in somewhere. I've been itching to get him in a fic/comic of some sort. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif
Newdroid
Jul 14, 2004, 02:42 PM
He can be in mine too if you want.
Sharkyland
Jul 14, 2004, 02:55 PM
Hmm, I'm thinking of posting it in this thread... it might take me a while to get written down everytime cause it's still fresh in my head.
Sagasu
Jul 14, 2004, 06:12 PM
I'm up for it,

Though I'm better with words I should be able to provide some minor level of assitance http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
Sharkyland
Jul 19, 2004, 04:46 PM
I'm currently writing it, I'll put the first five chapter synopsis up soon.
Sagasu
Jul 19, 2004, 04:48 PM
Sounds good..

Expect little mercy though.
BoarDemon
Jul 20, 2004, 01:23 AM
Hey, maybe I can be of some assistance
Sharkyland
Jul 26, 2004, 02:09 PM
Omigod, it has so many boring parts... x_x Chapter 6 and still Pioneer II isn't on Ragol yet. I might just begin the rough draft on lined paper since I'm having technical difficulties cleaning stuff off my desk so I can draw.
Cell132
Jul 26, 2004, 07:00 PM
^-^ I might be available for assistance. I am currently working on a manga myself. I don't know how much I can help, bu I'll try as much as I can.