Love Ailita 2 is here!

[Newdroid]

Love Ailita 2


Chapter 1:Secret Admirer


Author's Note:Love Ailita 2 is here!We are now intro
ducing a new character.My fics should be alot longer and better thanks to the "sniper of dreams" Sarunakai!I hope you enjoy this better.It does have a nice plot.And the point of veiw will be switched between Chars.Enjoy!

Prolugue:Ailita is now somebody special.She is a revered hero for her destruction of Vol Opt.Now the Mines are safe to work in and repairs are being made in the demolished part of the Mines.Ailita has been appointed as a sort of "guardian" and patrols the mines anually in case something may happen.But so far, Ailita has had a very happy life.

Knock,Knock,Knock.Ailita opened her door.It was a delivery man.He was of African American decent and wore a blue and gray outfit with a matching hat."These are for you ma'am!"Ailita ws handed a bouque of pink roses."who are these from?"The delivery man took a look at the card stuck to one of the roses."It looks like a secret admirer;enjoy."With that,the delivery man took his leave.Ailita plopped on her bed with her rosed.They were so beautiful and fragrant.Ailita detatched the card and read the note on it.

Dear Ailita,I took this very hard to tell you, so I wrote it.I like you,and everything about you.You do not know me,but I know EVERYTHING about you.I hope you don't think I'm a stalker,but I would like to see you and get to know you even better.Meet me at the Mines.I hope you come http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/blush.gif .Ailita took the little white card and put it in her dresser by her king size bed."whoever this is better be glad I have to go go to the Mines for my inspection!"

Ailita put on her mainly purple hunter's gear,her gloves,stockings,and headband."here I go;I SO hope this person is not a woman,that happened twice already!"She walked out of the Redria sector to the main teleporter to Ragol.As she walked toward the teleporter she noticed the right guard was giving her sensual looks,but ignored him.But,as soon as she passed him he spanked her bottom.Ailita turned around and gave him a spiral kick to the jaw,landing him.She then stomped his crotch and went into the teleporter.The left guard looked at the other guard."Hehehe, pevert."

Ailita entered the Mines,and was escorted to the first room by a Canadine.She noticed a green RAcast by the exit. He fiddled with his fingers as if he were nervous.Ailita walked up to him holding a pink rose petal."Ailita,I didn't think you'd come!"He gave an odd smile and continued."My name is Mike."Ailita looked at Mike plainly."Did you get the roses?"Ailita looked through the door that Mike was by."Yes,I did and I thank you for them."If Mike's face wasn't so unarticulated,he would have blushed."Listen Mike,I need to make my inspection and it was nice meeting you."Ailita started walking through the door."Ailita,can we meet up at Bono's
tomorrow?"Ailita smiled."You seem nice,( and it is a
PUBLIC area)so okay.Ailita went through the door.Mike watched until she was out of sight,then fell to his knees.Infactuated.

Ailita continued to her inspection and found nothing wrong,so she went home via telepipe.Ailita changed into her peach colored flowing pajamas.She cooked herself some scrambled eggs with cheese in them.As she ate,she got in her bed and took out Mike's "love letter"This guy really likes me."She laughed."I saw him fall!"She took her roses and put then in a vase of fresh water."Tomorrow is going to be a heck of a day!"Ailita washed her dirty dishes and went to bed;dreaming of the next day.

[Newdroid]

Love Ailita 2


EXTRA:Crush or Be Crushed

Author's Note:This is not an official chapter,but I
thought I'd throw in his perspective.

"First stop; floral shop!"Mike was a normal sized RAcast.He was green and had a special crush on someone http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif .Mike rushed to the floral shop looking at all the flowers."Ma'am,what do you reccomend for first impressions?"Mike was talking to the shop manager.She wore a blue apron with her hair in a bun."Well,I'll assume it's for a woman."Mike looked around at all of the different flowers."well,if it is,these pink roses should be perfect!"Mike purchased the flowers and made a rather loving card."Next stop is delivery."

"I need these delivered to Ailita in the Redria
section."Mike then paid his meseta.Mike left the delivery company and went home.Being a "pure" android,Mike has no taste or smell,or feeling.His living quarters definately reflect that.No bed and no food.He has also has no sense of color.Mike polished his shell and went on his way to the mines.

Now in the Mines,Mike nevously waited for Ailita.Ailita is is crush.The fisrt time he saw her was when he came to the Mines for a quest.Mike saw her patrolling the different rooms.Mike was unnoticed,but she sure wasn't.He could not stop thinking of her.He finally had the courage
to speak to her.And it just so happened,a beautiful blue haired RAcaseal stepped forward.

[Sagasu]

Interesting start, secret admirer eh? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Since you and your readers seemed to have taken offense to my previous critique, I have decided to hold back until otherwise notified.

This shows ambition, and your skills are already evolving. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

I'll enjoy watching you grow..

Edit: Just saw the new section. Nice addition, so now we have a lit bit more background detail going on eh?

Good good, shows my faith was not ill placed.


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[Kadavreski]

wow. ><.

nice. anywho...its starting very well.

and, that guard is in a lot of pain now, righT?

he'll feel that come tommorow.

nice. my charcter is put in nicely.

[Newdroid]

Thanks guys.Sarunakai,you can critique.Just keep it at a minimum http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

[Sagasu]

I'll keep that in mind, good luck.

[Newdroid]

Glad you like it! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif It's not too short is it?

[Sagasu]

On 2004-07-14 23:27, Newdroid wrote:
Glad you like it! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif It's not too short is it?



Eh, its all in the eye of the beholder.

In all honesty, if you wish for length, you could spend maybe a day per chapter, instead of cranking em out faster as you have been doing. This can give you time to work on size, detail, whatever you feel your lacking.

All implied.



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[Kadavreski]

short is good. size does not matter its what it contains that counts.

and, youre doing well.

[Newdroid]

Thanks!Can't wait to see your fic!

[Tact]

Nice work, Newdroid! Again, the beginning's great! And was it the shopkeeper at the floral shop that pointed out the pink flowers? Mike, as you said, had/has no sense of color.

[Newdroid]

Yes,the shopkeeper did point them out.

[Sagasu]

Alright people, let me point something out.

Yes, its okay to post on-topic questions about the fiction, but it seems that there is an excess amount of them here.

To prevent the thread from being overrun with spam, it would perhaps be better to pm your questions. Digging through loose replies to find a chapter is no fun at all http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif



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[Newdroid]

Love Ailita 2


Chapter 2:A Date and Malfuntion


Ailita woke up the next morning.She looked up at the ceiling in in a dreamy daze;thinking of what will happen today.She went to her bathroom and brushed her teeth.She washed her face and took a bath.Ailita forgot her clothes so had to go all through her "house" just to get dressed.It's a good thing it was warm in her room.Instead of hunter's gear,she slipped on a cute yellow dress.The dress was made of cotton and was lined with lace and had little white polka dots all over it.She put on some black low-heeled shoes,stockings matching her dress,and a black hair clip."I'm ready."

Ailita walked out of the Redria section to Bono's.She scanned the seats finding Mike.Ailita walked to the green and yellow seats and sat down."How are you today,Mike?"Mike looked up to see a rather pretty Ailita;cute as a buttercup."Yes,especialy now that YOU'RE here!"Ailita smiled.The envirement at Bono's was rather nice.There were hanging flowers,music,and even profesionally cooked food.The perfect place for a date on Pioneer 2,Mike must have noticed that.Ailta just sat there looking beautiful."What are you ordering off the menu?"Ailita took her menue and went down the list of all the foods."I'll take the Spicy Mexicana."Mike then summoned a waiter."What would you like for drinks?"The couple looked at each other."Sprite and diesal!"Ailita looked at Mike"You drink deisal;nevermind."

Ailita ate her meal while Mike just wached her.Ailita looked around."Where are all the other androids?"Mike then noticed that there were no androids around."Oh,all androids were reccomended to get some rest;there in sleep mode."Ailita looked at Mike with interst."For what?"Mike took a sip of deisal."For complete exploration of the ruins of Ragol."Just then there was a power surge.

"Mike,there was a power surge."
"Yes,what of it?"
"If all other androinds are in sleep mode..."
"They were all knocked offline by the jolt of electricity!"
"Excuse me Mike,meet me at home in 20 beats."

Ailita rushed into the principal's office.Ailita told Tyrell of the result of the events,so Tyrell orderd that all all androids should be taken to specialist."Pricipal,I can fix some androids."Ailita looked sternly at the principal."Working in the Mines have taught me about cibernetics,I could build another RAcaseal if I wanted."Tyrell looked at Ailita sternly."You don't have the liscense;get one"Principal Tyrell smirked."But,don't worry about that now."

Ailita hacked into all android's rooms with a card key.The key could unlock ANYTHING with a slot,Ailita was a genius.With all of the scientist working together they got androids fixed,but it would take months for them to ever be the same or gain enough energy.Ailita went home and saw Mike by her door."Come in,there is something I want to dicuss with you."




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[Sagasu]

Plot twists!

Alright you've definatley caught my eye now, and are keeping me guessing.

All in all you've done well.

[Tact]

Heh, cool! Power surge! None of my characters are androids, except...no! The one who's raising my Rati is temporarily dead!!! Keep the plot going, I like it, still!

[Newdroid]

Love Ailita 2



Chapter 3:The 1 Millian Dollar Bot

Ailita sat Mike down."Now,Mike I like you,and I'm going to offer you something."The green RAcast thoughts were drifting,no telling what he was thinking she meant http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif .Ailita went on."I have noticed how RAcast lack in movable huminoid parts."Ailita sat down."I'm offering you an upgrade of human components;the end result is like me."Ailita put her hand on his shoulder."Do you accept?"Mike thought for a while."Yes,I accept!"Ailita got up."Okay the,see you tommorrow over here."Mike nodded and left."Bye Ailita!"

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The next day,Ailita got her liscense for robotics thanks to Tyrell.The test was simple for Ailita to conquer.After getting her liscence,Ailita bought some sythetic skin,tools and other synthetic body parts.She met Mike at her door again.She told him to lay on her table and switch to sleep mode.Mike was now fast asleep.Ailita removed his shell and started her work.

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Mike woke up breathing heavily."Your upgrade is comeplete! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif " Mike sat up.Mike had tanned skin,chesnut hair,and emerald green eyes.He was a muscular burly man with good height."I gave you all external male features."

"So I look human?"
"Yes,I gave you everything."
"Everything?"
"Yes,everything."
"*gasp* Even a....!"
"Look in the mirror in the bathroom,I won't look! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif "

Mike walked into the bathroom leaving the sheet covering him behind.As soon as he closed the door,"Aaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!"



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[Sagasu]

Ailita sat Mike down."Now,Ailita I like you,and I'm going to offer you something."The green RAcast thoughts were drifting,no telling what he was thinking she meant

Ailita is the one offering an upgrade, from this its sounds like Mike is doing the talking http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_nono.gif

Poor guy, didn't know what he was getting himself into http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Newdroid]

Thanks for pointing thay out. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif I didn't even notice it.Heh,Mike has now been humanized! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Tact]

On 2004-07-15 13:10, Newdroid wrote:
"So I look human?"
"Yes,I gave you everything."
"Everything?"
"Yes,everything."
"*gasp* Even a....!"
"Look in the mirror in the bathroom,I won't look! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif "


That was hilarious! My friends have always said I had a sense of humor, maybe I should consider writing a comedy fic after I'm done with the one I already have.



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[Newdroid]

:lol" I'm glad someone found it funny! You get it?

[Tact]

Yup, I got the joke, all right. I'm not even going to hint at it.

[Sagasu]

On 2004-07-15 16:22, Newdroid wrote:
:lol" I'm glad someone found it funny! You get it?



She built his humanoid body, whats left to see? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

[Newdroid]

Yeah,you do have a point!

this is just wrong... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_kuddel.gif

[Sagasu]

On 2004-07-15 20:38, Newdroid wrote:
Yeah,you do have a point!

this is just wrong... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_kuddel.gif



I don't see anything wrong, just nature.

[Newdroid]

I was acually pionting at the smiley.Here goes!

Love Ailita


Chapter 4:Reborn into the Human World


Mike ran out of the bathroom."I cant even tell the difference between me and humans,you have really outdone yourself!"Ailita picked up the sheet,sat Mike down,and put the sheet over his you know what."Now,you have human components and I'll teach you how to use them'and keep the sheet on! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif " Ailita bent over to get him some clothes she recently bought out of her dresser.She noticed that there was a slight rise in the sheet,she narrowed her eyes at him."Hey,that's my hand!"

Mike was now fully dressed.He wore black jeans with a navy blue shirt.It had "RANGER" spelled on it in yellow letters.His hair was neatly brushed."Now you can breath,feel,taste,and smell."Ailita continued."In your braething mechanism,I made it like a plant's,you can braeth in carbon dioxide and make oxygen though breathing isn't neccesary for you."Mike stood up."Can we go to Bono's,I want to try my sense of taste. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif "

After the meal at Bono's,the cople went to a clothing and furnature supply store.There,they both found out Mike's sense of color.He likes dark tones with the acception of red.Soon,his room was filled with dark blues and greens.Ailita showed him how to cook and clean.Mike had his A.I.(artificial intelligence),so he was a fast learner.

After the end of their spree,Mike asked Ailita for a real date."I'll be happy to!"then Ailita kissed Mike on the cheek,this time he was able and did blush."How anout we go to the seaside together tommorrow?"Ailita looked into his emerald eyes soulfully."I'll see you there tommorrow."

That night Ailita again dreamed of the next day."He is so sweet,can I actually be falling for him?"Ailita dreamt of them killing all of those giant bees"I better bring some deep woods off."

Ailita woke up early the next morning.She took a shower and put on a nice flowing gown.It was a dark lavender.It had a matching hairset too.She put her hair up into two buns and had some of her hair in a loop around each bun.She put on some laender lipstick.There was a knock at the door.It was a very distressed and short man."Please help us,everyone is going into a coma and we don't know what..!"The poor man's eyes rolled to the back of his head and fell to the ground.

Ailita ran out to the central part of Pioneer 2.At least hundreds of people were passed out on the street.All in the same condition.She found Mike in a black tuxedo examining what had happened."Well Mike,it looks like we'll have to postepone our date."





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[Sagasu]

"Please help us,everyone is going into a comma and we don't know what..!"

Comma = ,

Coma = A state where the body forces itself to shut sdown, due to severe cases of exauhstion/trauma.

One after the next, deeper in we go! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Kadavreski]

nice how everything is going....

this proves to ST that it would have been nicer to see more of pioneer 2. one for records.

my charecter...haha...youve taken over him pretty well...(why so many dots?damnit! )

its very funny now he seems human and every thing...

does that mean that he's now a ramar http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

also, i was concentrating on pso last night and something got me wondering...

wheres out charecters mags?

[Newdroid]

http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

[Newdroid]

No,he is not a RAmar.He's humanoid;not human

[Kadavreski]

ok...
i have some ebil charecters who won't mind getting killled in your fic, so if you need any bad guys, or good guys, for that matter, just tell me.

[Tact]

Good going! Everyone's "dead"! Except for Aneka, she doesn't have a soul...the plot thickens...

[Newdroid]

You have any extra android characters,Mike?

[Newdroid]

If you want the next chapter of love Ailita 2 say heeeeeeey hoooooooooo heeeeeeeeey hoooooooooo...

[Tact]

On 2004-07-16 11:13, Newdroid wrote:
heeeeeeey hoooooooooo heeeeeeeeey hoooooooooo...


I'm too lazy to type it by myself. But sure, I want the next chapter.

[Newdroid]

Love Ailita 2


Chapter 7:Trouble Rises While Peace Resides

Author's Note:Sorry this chapter is late. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif I needed some "me" time.I also bought photoshop! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif


Ailita and Mike rushed to Mike's apartment,since it was closer.She had a set of hunter's clothes their.She quickly slipped into her clothes."Now that that I don't have a hull anymore,what will I wear?"Ailita went through the corner where she got her clothes."Here put this on;I specially desighned it for you."Mike took the bundle of clothes and put them on.They were a similer to a RAmar's uniform.It was dark blue with an orange stripe down the side,and it came with a helmit looking similar to his old face.

The two took the teleporter to the forest.Trouble usually brews there... As they walked through the forest they noticed something very similar.The monster were on the ground in the trance the people of Pioneer 2 were in.Mike heard wispers from the trees."Ailita,I think there is something here!"Ailita walked to where Mike was,and then something lunged at her from the trees with dynamic force.It spoke."We are the Laharl,fear us and let us consume your thoughtsand your flesh!!!"The Laharl jumped at Ailita,but Ailita dodged to the side.Mike shot it in the head with a Guilty Light,but no damage was done!

The Laharl the stood up and turned around looking at Mike.It had charred black skin and smoky hair.Their eyes were yellow and fangs and claws emergerd from the hands and mouth.They are very intellegent and swift enimies."You can not harm me,but all is good becaude soon I'll feast..."The Laharl ran toward Mike;knashing it's teeth.Then in a flash,a familiar black haired RAmarl jumped in front of Mike and shot the LAharl in both eyes.The Laharl tumbled backward and then fell limp next to a tree.

"Aneka!!!"Ailita ran to Aneka and hugged her."I'm glad to see you back again!"Aneka walked ut to the laharl and stabbed it in the chest with a buster."Always shoot them in the eyes first,and then they'll be more vulnurable."Aneka walked toward Ailita."Nice to see you again too,I'll fill you in later about me and those things,we have to go to the Mines!"

[Sagasu]

Touching reunion..

[Tact]

Yeah, so I guess the Mines are still normal, because they're mechanical...but I still don't know what to expect.

[Kadavreski]

sorry, my internet was playing up lately


but, i still love the fic http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif