PSOW Community episode 1

[PhotonDrop]

*insert overly dramatic intro movie here with a kickass logo that says "Welcome to PSOW"*

*insert large building on the corner of Gamespy and PlanetDreamcast* This, my friends is the PSOW Community Center. Here, many hunters gather to share the latest find, to vent themselves or to act like idiots in the large dumpster outback...

Here we meet two people of the Community, the tall RAcaseal with Delsaber hands is known as Shurikane, used by one, KodiaX987. And the other guy had just joined and made an ass out of himself by asking in several different Threads how he can make a sig.

"Go back to kindergarten and actually try to pass it before posting here again."

Shurikane then grabs the kid by the head and throws him aside.

"Hey, careful there Kodia" a rather tall and lanky FOnewm calls out, he wears a black and blue costume, with red hair covered by a hat with Pom-poms. "Its not good to kill these guys."

It was Si'ev, the FOnewm used by Navi, an artistic legend of the FanWorks department.

"Noobs dont mess with this." Shurikane says quietly as he walks off.

With a smirk Si'ev turns around and sticks a Piccie to a bulltin board. With another smile si'ev dissapears, Navi had logged off.

---

Meanwhile, out in the dumpster a Moderator played games with the inhabitants.

A FOnewm in blue and white sat in a swivel chair and said,"Okay, final question."

His words attracted the attention of a HUmar clad in yellow armor and matching hair, a HUnewearl in Pink and white and a RAmarl in black and red.

"What have you?"

The HUnewearl, named Eclair, and the RAmarl, Ghost09, sprouted word bubbles with this face in it ":wacko:" The HUmar, named Sord, just sat there and blinked a few times before changing form, into a FOmar with a giant fluffy cat tail.

---

In a dim lit office a HUmar in green sat at a computer typing things onto a computer.

Suddenly his intercom blinked and a voice came over it"eRUPT, Sarunakai requests a name change to Sagasu."

Without a word said eRUPT brought up a window and altered Sarunakai's data.

commercial break! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_disapprove.gif


<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: PhotonDrop on 2004-07-31 17:27 ]</font>

[KaFKa]

yayz0rz http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

this should be something to read if you actually keep it going.

[PhotonDrop]

On 2004-07-31 17:26, KaFKa wrote:
yayz0rz http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

this should be something to read if you actually keep it going.



there was more but forgot it... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_disapprove.gif

[PhotonDrop]

ooh! wait I remembered it all!

[TheOneHero]

http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif For for G.H.O.S.T.09! Thanks PD, great work looking for more. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_yes.gif

[Tact]

Awesome! I wonder when I come in...

[Ness]

I always thought of PSOW as a fully urbanized planet.

[Tact]

Well, yeah, it is PSO World.

[PhotonDrop]

And so Sarunakai sat at the foot of the FanWorks department bulleting board. He had a pen and pencil and wrote and corrected his latest chapter to Soveryn Song when suddenly his FOmar robes phased out and back in. With a flip of a switch he looked up to see Sagasu abouve his head.

At that moment a RAmar identical to Bernie comes near,"Who are you, and why do you have Sarunakai's tablet?"

Sagasu looks up at Mr.Rubbish and frowns,"...I am...Sarunakai."

"Oh...carry on!" Mr.Rubbish said with shifty eyes.

With a final flick of his pen, Sagasu finished and tacked the latest chapter onto the board. He stood for a good while marveling at his greatness. But then he ges to turn around but trips over a couple of FOnewearls, both wore black but were is different styles, they were FOAtheart and Tingle.

"Oww."

"HAY j00! U mes up teh drawling! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_disapprove.gif"

"meep, i made Usada a little too busty..."

Sagasu stood up and sighed as he brushed his self off "My apologies... OW!"

"Lets get the meanie, FO@<3!"

"Ja! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_disapprove.gif"

Tingle readied her Rabbit Wand and FOAtheart grabbed up a random pointy thing.

With the knowledge of what two FOnes could do to a FOmar, Sagasu took off running.

after two minutes the chase was ended by another FOmar, this one clad in blue robes and square glasses.

":o its Dhylec!"

"meep."

"Praise the lord!"

Dhylec just looked at the two FOnewearls, causing them to cease their chase. Sagasu then noticed a sticky note by his fic so heran off to check it.

commercial break!

[Tact]

Keep it up! I can't wait to see how this turns out! It's funny, entertaining, and it features all of the people of PSOW (Or FKL, at least).

[KaFKa]

*waits for the FKL special edition*

[PhotonDrop]

On 2004-07-31 17:58, KaFKa wrote:
*waits for the FKL special edition*



but this is one episode! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_disapprove.gif

[navci]

http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif
Kodi doesn't kill navi immediately? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif
I have this .hack image of this in my head.

[-Z]

I love this show...
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

[TheOneHero]

On 2004-07-31 18:22, -Z wrote:
I love this show...
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif



Its a show? Ah well. I liked what you added Photon Drop. I will keep lookng for more...every....day...

[PhotonDrop]

New Episodes! every saturday! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Lone_Wolf_Nasca]

New Episodes! every saturday!

Hmmm, I will have to remember to tune in on Saturday then http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif. Nice work PD ^_^ !!

[Sef]

Hey! Very good stuff PD. Can't wait to see more. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Sayara]

Usada the BUST! o0!

Wow! PD! Thats good! A little jumpy. But all shows are! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Scejntjynahl]

Definetely entertaining and fresh. Very good stuff PhotonDrop.

[HUnewearl_Meira]

Hmm... It has a very busy feel to it. It moves from one scene to another fairly quickly. The style is interesting. On the level of criticism, the only thing I can really suggest, is to keep going with it, and further develop the style you're working with. It's good and has potential, but it seems a little thin, perhaps.

Of course, I'm seeing that this work isn't finished, and you seem to be working with character introductions at the moment, so what's left to come may render my next comment moot, but try bouncing back and forth between scenes. Not really big cliffhangers, but just leave a scene unresolved and go on to a couple other scenes before coming back to finish it.

You're off to a good start. Keep your vocabulary use in mind, and try to be creative about wording things, and this should develop quite nicely.

[mr_rubbish]

Wow, I'm just suprised I'm worthy enough of a mention!

HUnewearl_Meira relax! Its just a bit o' fun. While your comments are valid I don't think PD is all that bothered.

[BOC]

a fic of psow. well it was bound to happen sooner or later!

good stuff photon. Until next saturday!

PEACE!!!

[Zzzzzz]

Darn commercial breaks... always too long, yet not long enough for a bathroom break. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

I'll be there next Saturday. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Solstis]

On 2004-08-01 04:26, mr_rubbish wrote:
Wow, I'm just suprised I'm worthy enough of a mention!

HUnewearl_Meira relax! Its just a bit o' fun. While your comments are valid I don't think PD is all that bothered.



Nopes.

But of course, PD's dialog is always stellar!

[Sord]

heh, so that's what happens when you make more than one of you >_> identity crisis ahoy! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

keep it up, and what KaFKa said (don't feel like going back to quote it)

[WraithVerge]

wow how did I miss this thread? o_0;

lol loved it. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Eihwaz]

Short, and amusing, what makes this one so enjoyable is that it doesn't take like 3 hours to read. A nice, long fic can be a great thing, but a quickie can be good too.

Looking foward to the next chapter! And did you check your PMs? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

[HUnewearl_Meira]

On 2004-08-01 04:26, mr_rubbish wrote:
HUnewearl_Meira relax! Its just a bit o' fun. While your comments are valid I don't think PD is all that bothered.


I wasn't trying to come off as sounding harsh; only offering a bit of advice.

I suppose that I should reiterate that I did enjoy what I read, and I do like the style that it's being written in.

[navci]

On 2004-08-02 08:20, HUnewearl_Meira wrote:


On 2004-08-01 04:26, mr_rubbish wrote:
HUnewearl_Meira relax! Its just a bit o' fun. While your comments are valid I don't think PD is all that bothered.


I wasn't trying to come off as sounding harsh; only offering a bit of advice.

I suppose that I should reiterate that I did enjoy what I read, and I do like the style that it's being written in.



Well you are reading it. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif That says a whole lot. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif
Cuz VG never reads.

[HUnewearl_Meira]

On 2004-08-02 10:31, navinator wrote:
Well you are reading it. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif That says a whole lot. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif
Cuz VG never reads.


Indeed. There are a great number of professional authors, whose livelyhood relies on their ability to impress publishers, who are unable to hold my attention.

[PhotonDrop]

Sorry, but this wasnt finished! I have one final thing to add (i was down in Virginia camping yesterday)

--

With events happening everywhere PSOW usually is very busy, but today there hasnt been many people. The entrance opens up and Si'ev/Navi enters again. Sagasu, who is still near the FanWorks bulletin board, finished up planning events in the next chapter. He hears a sound and looks up but sees nothing. Behind him, Si'ev/Navi peeks over his shoulder.

"Ooh, Im telling Sarunakai on yoooooooouuuuuuuu!"

"Navi, I am Sarunakai."

"...Oh, heh, sorry!"

Si'ev/Navi turned around and read the sticky notes by her piccie, then made his(her?) way to the Fresh Kills Landfill dumpster.

--

Sagasu put down his writing tablet and massaged his wrist, he then stood up and heard a commotion in FKL so he went to investigate.

Inside, a tall and skinny RAcast with dark green coloring named Uncle Bob was watering the plastic flowers outside his giant inflatable Mushroom house with the seven dwarves drawn on it. But the reason for the ruckus was because FOAtheart had accidentally melted Mechgun_Mike's Uzi's with Megid and MM was trying to get compensation. If it werent for Sef, the large red RAcast holding MM away their would have been a blood bath.

"THOSE COST ME A TRIP TO GOOGLE!!"

"Doesnt sound like much http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif"

"Stop Mike! FO said she was sorry!"

"YOU OWE ME!!"

Suddenly a chill ran through the air, Abdur101, a HUcast with massive shoulders and green coloring slowly walked in, everything was quiet except for the sound of Uncles watering pail.

"Whats going on here?" he questioned.

"FO destroyed my Uzi's!"

"It was an accident!"

Abdur laughed and tapped the air in front of him, a small window opened up and had the words Google written on it. He reached inside and pulled out a new gun for Mike.

His eyes lit up with glee as he snatched the new Uzi from Abdurs hand and huggled it.

"Thank you!"

"YW, now im just going to lock this... and we wont speak of it again." with a flick of his wrist the event was erased from FO and Mike's head.

Sagasu shook his head and turned around to leave.

And this ends our weekly visit to PSOW.

Tune in next week for the next episode,"Shapeshifter"

*insert cheesy music and a few scenes from the episode*

[EJ]

I like this style of writing, it seems to fit psow community. Can't wait till the next saturday to read more.

[Tact]

Cool. Did Umkle remember the little event? And I like the way they go to different sites.

[Allos]

You're an Underling of the DTPA so I hope we will play some role in this saga (and mabye you could become a Corporal!).

[Bradicus]

Short 'n' sweet.

[Zzzzzz]

On 2004-08-02 19:51, Bradicus wrote:
Short 'n' sweet.