Just want your opinions....

[anwserman]

Please do not move this into fanart. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif
Just a concept comic I wrote and drew, and I'm wondering if you guys could give me opinions on it.

Rough, I know. I'd still be something fun to do.

http://www.lucky-s-designs.com/comic/comic001.jpg

[Solstis]

Ooooh.

Nice... though the second panel is somewhat disorienting (may just be me).

Pretty! Pretty!

[Jehosaphaty]

interesting, looks nice...tho im confused on the second panel too. is it an overhead view?

[Guile]

Yeah I can'tell what he is looking at in that panel.
By tit do you mean pussy?

[anwserman]

Yeah, it supposed to be what he's seeing through his eyes... the second panel. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Tit, strip club Guile.

[Evil_Althena8]

wow thats pretty good, nice style to it. The colors are quite nice too. Good work!

[ABDUR101]

Second panel wasn't that hard, you have the back and side of the couch, ceiling, and the lamp.

Interesting I think, keep adding to it.

[anwserman]

Thanks for the comments everyone!
I finished the second strip... and it is slightly more serious then the first one.

NOTE: I don't think the stripper breaks the nudity clause of PSOW, since she's wearing underwear (see: thong) and her boobs are covered up by hair... hahaha. I tried hard to make sure it would fit the standards here, and if not I'll take it down.

http://www.lucky-s-designs.com/comic/comic002.jpg

[Solstis]

The characters look utterly and completely different in panel dos.

:o

:D

*awaits more*

[anwserman]

Easy answer Solstis: Those aren't the characters, just two other guys. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Solstis]

On 2004-11-13 22:23, anwserman wrote:
Easy answer Solstis: Those aren't the characters, just two other guys. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



oi!

Sorry 'bout that.

[anwserman]

http://www.lucky-s-designs.com/comic/comic003.jpg

All hail beginning comic strips!
Since, characters that are supposed to look the same are different in each frame. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

[Mystil]

Very amusing, please post more. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

[anwserman]

http://www.lucky-s-designs.com/comic/comic004.jpg

It is a statement about fast-food in general... Jake works at a fast-food joint. Heh.

It is NOT harassing big people in general.

[Solstis]

I'm currently having a love affair with your attention to detail with the backgrounds.

However... does Jake have a lazy eye, or is it just me?

[Mystil]

The statement, rotf, I remember when I used to work for Burger King. . ."family orders" were fun! =D