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BlackCanaryOfDeath
Apr 11, 2005, 08:48 PM
Last week my friends and I decided to write stream of consciousness poetry after taking tequila shots and playing records. Exciting bunch, right? Well the fun part was that we were going to try to write serious poems about things that are not serious. Still more exciting. This was pretty fun because stream of consciousness is crazy when you're not drunk. So I wrote some about PSO, but no body knows about it and the humor was lost. Here they are, unaltered and magnificent:


the future of our colony is written on
black paper. those who would seek to harm us
and our cause only for love of those glittering
yellow geometric shapes that we use as
currency
brightly glowing and bursting from the inside
of all of us. sometimes as greed and sometimes
in the most literal sense - when it is hidden
in the corpses of our enemies.


if a plan could be born out of desperation
and also take the time of running out a whole
ship of colonists out to the site - who is
desperate?
is it the colonists who?s lives are postponed
and moved on to another plane, another place of
existence or is it the principals, the ones that
wove everyone into the entirety.


names. names are crossed and broken
several times over, then forgotten. by everyone
even the ones that bore those names, no
matter what form they may hold now
the swords and sabers that held the names
are now wielded by others
those who came after the fact
those who don?t know the weight they carry
those who would rather throw away their history than carry it
names that might as well be just words:
donoph, rico, heathcliff, mome.
all that remains of these once proud captains
are the ruins of rust and duplicity


ps- there was another poetry thread but it was over a year old so fuck that.

Graptakular83
Apr 12, 2005, 11:22 AM
drunken pso musings? Nice! Thats way better than my drunk roomate saying he found a "Rico's Panties" and a "Resist/Jesus".

WrathofGOD
Apr 12, 2005, 06:16 PM
alcohol = brain pollution
poetry = brain pollution

hooray for alcohol, down with poetry!

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BlackCanaryOfDeath
Apr 12, 2005, 10:08 PM
Ughhhhhhh Fuck.

navci
Apr 12, 2005, 10:37 PM
On 2005-04-12 16:16, WrathofGOD wrote:
alcohol = brain pollution
poetry = brain pollution

hooray for alcohol, down with poetry!

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What a rude and useless comment.
If you don't like poetry, don't read it.

You provided no input on how exactly is the poetry, why you dislike poetry. There really is no point, it doesn't contribute to anything.

On topic: You know. It is said that alcohol, or state of mind altering drugs makes for interesting art forms. I wondered, when you sobered up and read this again, did you feel like it wasn't written by you? http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

WrathofGOD
Apr 13, 2005, 03:55 AM
On 2005-04-12 20:37, navinator wrote:
You provided no input on how exactly is the poetry, why you dislike poetry. There really is no point, it doesn't contribute to anything.

that's pretty obvious...

on topic: this isn't as bad as I thought it would be... though i really dislike MODERN poetry, as it has lost it's depth. Less of an art form now, more garbles of insipid, meaningless metaphors.


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SquashDemon
Apr 13, 2005, 04:20 PM
On 2005-04-12 09:22, Graptakular83 wrote:
drunken pso musings? Nice! Thats way better than my drunk roomate saying he found a "Rico's Panties" and a "Resist/Jesus".



lol I have those too, OMG I FOUND TEH FLOWENS CONDOM!
no joke, I actually said that at a party once...
oh and awesome poem, I liked the Black Paper refrence