My pso comic(starting on pg 3)

[InfinityXXX]

(I've pmed a mod to delete my topic holding pg 1)

Many of you have seen the first page. I deleted the 2nd pg by mistake. But to give u an idea on the 2nd page...
A shot is fired and Derrick and Sharika turn around and they see a Ramar.

Now heres the 3rd pg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg3.jpg


You like?

[InfinityXXX]

*sigh* such a lonely topic

Anyways(for those thats actually looking) heres
page 4. I just outlined everything.


http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/ps.jpg

[Solstis]

Keep up the good work!

http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[InfinityXXX]

Thanks Solstis

Anyways heres pg.5

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoepp1pg5.jpg






I apologize for the size. After I wake up i'll edit it and try to reduce it.


Can someone help me, In the game, on pioneer 2, what is the name of the warp that takes you to the room where Tyrell is in?



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[InfinityXXX]

umm, heres pg.6*echo*

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoepp1pg6.jpg



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[InfinityXXX]

Here is page 7. Tommorow theres a possibility that i may not post a page. I've been trying to draw scetches of Tyrell but so far its not going well.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg7.jpg

[Sharkyland]

So far so good...

[InfinityXXX]

Lol, I had that urge to draw. This doesn't really look that great. About Tyrell....Yeah he looks young but I spent like 3 hours drawing pics of him and thats the end result.
Anyways, enjoy page 8

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg8.jpg

[InfinityXXX]

Sorry but until Sunday, I won't be posting any pages. I just started work and i'm just to darn tired to draw. sorry : (

[RoninJoku]

Look's like your on the right track... It's more entertaining in color though http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif But I know how much of a tedious pain that can be to do all the time... What program are you using?

Also your later pages are starting to look a little rushed... I would say focus more on the quality so you can keep improving your skills... (unless of course your aim is to merely develop story)

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[Eanae]

Nice job. Keep it up. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[InfinityXXX]

I use Jasc paint shop. The last couple of pages were rushed.(no backgrounds,lol) But i'll try to at least color a page every now and then.(like first and last pages, and major action pages). But its a pain the butt coloring. Takes like 6 or more hours. But on sunday,maybe saturday i'll color the next page for yall.



Also, thank yall for your feedback, it means a lot to an artist when you give feedback(even if its bad,lol)

[t3hcyborg]

I like them ^_^ Keep up the good work!

[InfinityXXX]

Yeah, I'm real sorry, but I had a bunch of stuff goin on but now I'm back and I got finished 2 more pages. After these 2 pages and the next one i do, the story is gonna start to pick up, So, enjoy http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif


Page 9
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg9.jpg

Page 10
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg10.jpg


Errrm, i know Tyrell is a bit..off, but deal with it, its the best i could do now, I spend about 30 min a day to try at least get him to resemble the game version. At least i got the suite right.

Another tough thing, as you can kind of see i had trouble with it in pg 10, is Tyrone's(The Ramar) braided hair. Took me a while to get his hair right in pg 10.

[InfinityXXX]

Well page 11, enjoy

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg11.jpg

[XenOmega]

Very Nice, How much is it to Get Jasc?

[InfinityXXX]

Errm...I dunno i just got this computer and the program came with it. I got 60 days free and i'm on day 40 so when my time expires i'll probably find out the price but you can surf the web for it.

[XenOmega]

40 Days oh. Ok Thanks for letting me know

[InfinityXXX]

Page 12. Took an hr and some minutes. As you can see, the plot is starting to develop...


http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg12.jpg





Meh, i hate backgrounds i'm no good at it. Can't wait till school starts so my friend can do my backgrounds.

[XenOmega]

Wow, thats very good. Can't wait to see the next! http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Anti-Hacker]

This is very good, if you want guys take a look at something I have been doing myself here:

http://ragol.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=5959&page=17&pp=10

I have been doing it for ages, didnt know people were interested in PSO comic art.

It takes the mick out of various aspects of PSO such as the 3 hit combo and item stealers online.

I hope no one takes this as an attempt to jack a fan audience, I just thought it was relevant anyway really great continue soon!

[Sayara]

On 2005-07-08 15:06, XenOmega wrote:
Very Nice, How much is it to Get Jasc?



Jasc PSP 7 (which i use) that is the anniversy edition (includes Media thingy, and Animation Shop) was $100.

[InfinityXXX]

Lol, wow thats really funny. Your comic had me laughing out loud. Especially the one when he finds the red box and the hacker steals it.

I had, at one time, wanted to do comic strips that show the humor of pso but i ran out of jokes. Then I did a pso comic that had a similar story of dot hack.

The story of it was that the main character in this comic(the humar) was a real person and he gets hooked on playing on PSO by his friend.(The Hunewearl in this comic). He eventually goes to the Forest and defeats a hildebear but then it gets
infected and it turns into a Hildetorr and eventually he gets the Sealed J sword(*cough* The braclet*). I had fused Pso with dot hack but then i just decided to keep true to PSO and thus you have this comic.

If i ever find that old comic i'll post it up here. Anyways, i'm off to do the next page.

[XenOmega]

Infinity. What Jasc do you use?

[InfinityXXX]

Jasc Paint Shop Pro 8

[XenOmega]

Yeah, lol i am having probs with that. How do you get the Screen that big?

[InfinityXXX]

What do you mean Xen? The size of my comic? I just go to print and then start messing with the size.


Here is pg.13(Yeah, my 13th page!)

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg13.jpg

[Sayara]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/Snoopychan/d.jpg

perhaps?
Psp8 can't be much different then 7 in layout.

[XenOmega]

I know that tingle http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif I meant, what sizes should i use?

[Sayara]

Make it as big as you think you need. You can crop/shrink when you need to.

WHen i did comics, they tended to be 648 x 792 (paper size, 9 x 11)

[XenOmega]

thanks tingle...... and HEATHCLIFF FLOWEN! *Dun dun Duuuuuuuuuuuun*

[InfinityXXX]

lol, well heres the next page....


http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg14.jpg

[XenOmega]

Thats Brilliant. How do you colour it in like that? Whenever I colour in It leaves a White outline

[Sagasu]

Coloring is all about experience usinge the tools available. Meaning, its gets easier as you go along. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I like how the characters are drawn, it projects emotion well.

[InfinityXXX]

Well heres pg.15. It ends my first episode. In a while i'm gonna remove these from photobucket since its gettin crowded so you won't be able to see them.

Enjoy

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a56/InfinityXXX/psoep1pg15.jpg

[Sagasu]

There are plenty of free webspace services, albeit, none of them are all that efficient, but are better suited for mass storage of comics~

Since photobucket has a space limit, and not a set quantity, you may find it worth your time to resize the images down quite a bit. (this last one was a good size) and clear out other unnessesarily large image files you dont need anymore.

These tips aside, you're doing an awesome job. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



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[XenOmega]

I love the Comic Series. I can't wait to See the next ones. And is this based on EPISODE 1&2 or BB??

[InfinityXXX]

It starts off in episode 1 and then goes up to episode 3. I don't have blue burst or haven't seen any of the missions in episode 4 so episode 4 may or may not happen. Thanks a ton for yall feedback! http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[XenOmega]

Well, I love it so far. Please keep up the good work ^_^

[Sharkyland]

Coming along nicely.