Temperature

[Scejntjynahl]

Ah Beautiful one,
With silver for blood,
You were loyal and true,
Never did you complain as
I immersed you in ice cold baths
And Boiling Solutions.
But I knocked you on the floor,
Falling,
Falling into darkness,
And as your guts spilled unto the floor,
Everything went cold.
No longer well you say
What awaits for me this day.
Your silver blood on the floor
Wishing I could use you once more.




Random thoughts I wished to post.

[EphekZ]

haha thats cool about a thermomoter

very interesting

[Scejntjynahl]

On 2005-08-04 14:45, darkgunner wrote:
haha thats cool about a thermomoter

very interesting



Im glad you noticed. Thanks.

[Skorpius]

I like it. Poetry without an emo undertone of broken hearts and under-the-skin pain.

[Eihwaz]

Yay for wonderful, clever poetry about a normal everyday item. ^_^

[EphekZ]

Since you have a clear talent of poetry you shoudl right more I do enjoy poetry

try anything you see for inspiration the computer? tv? refridgerator?

[Solstis]

Lovely!

Makes me wish that I could find my old poem about a man mowing the lawn. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Skuda]

mmmm... mercury.

that was rather delightful Sen. A nice change of pace. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

two thumbs up!

[Scejntjynahl]

Thank you all for the positive comments. I do not consider myself a poet, for when I actually try to write poetry... it falls short. This was, hmmm, done in the spurt of the moment. Now I have to go the local pharmacist and buy a new one http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[Blitzkommando]

Some of the best things happen with just a sudden inspiration. It is always interresting to read a work about everyday life not involving love. Not to say love poems are bad, but, often other types are overlooked. Nice work.