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TheAntagonist
Oct 23, 2005, 08:57 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/TheAntagonist27/scannedthing001.jpg
Leave a message please...I need the criticism.
Yes, he is standing on a huge leaf. 'Cause he's cool!
Once again, please please reply...
Could someone make this smaller for me? I'm at a loss how..cause my computer's all wonky...
Paint and Dell Photo Editor aren't working, so I dunno what to do about getting rid of the stray marks,I don't have a good enough eraser.



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Ancient
Oct 23, 2005, 10:54 AM
Try sketching the image out lighter at first, then darken the final image in. This will make it easier to erase your unwanted marks later. I like your image though, nice movement of the cloth, but a bit more detail might have been good. BTW what do the chinese characters mean? Most of the time I get them off the backs of fortune cookie slips. So I have a cool guy with something that says "peaking duck" next to it, and nobody knows http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Dana
Oct 23, 2005, 10:57 AM
other than the slight stretch table, thats amazing, i really like the clothes
Exellent work!

Oni140
Oct 23, 2005, 11:21 AM
Great job ^_^ What does the kanji (Japanese characters XD) say?

TheAntagonist
Oct 23, 2005, 11:31 AM
Thanks, guys.

I made the symbols up. Heh.

Ancient
Oct 23, 2005, 02:09 PM
Ha! I knew it. No wonder japanese people think we're so illiterate XD

Bungee950
Oct 23, 2005, 05:09 PM
Well, in japanese, yes. It's not even supposed to be kanji, just some symbol thingie.

shinobu_seta
Oct 23, 2005, 06:27 PM
Well, it's close to being the kanji for "ten". You know, Akuma/Gouki's thing there?

You did a great job though, keep showing us your work ^_^

TheAntagonist
Oct 23, 2005, 07:11 PM
Who's Akuma/Gouki? I'm outta the loop.
Thanks, everyone, again.
I'm gonna redo it, using Ancient's tip for stray marks. Hopefully it will look better http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif
And i will post more. I don't often get around to drawing much, to hell with you, middle school.

Ancient
Oct 23, 2005, 08:52 PM
Ah, yes it does look similar to Akuma's mark. Although I didnt know thats what his mark meant...10...hmph, that takes Akuma down a few cool points. I always thought it meant something like "badazz motha". Now he's more like psycho Seaseme Street. "This beating has been brought to you by the number '10' and the letter 'argh!'"

EJ
Oct 23, 2005, 09:03 PM
On 2005-10-23 18:52, Ancient wrote:
Ah, yes it does look similar to Akuma's mark. Although I didnt know thats what his mark meant...10...hmph, that takes Akuma down a few cool points. I always thought it meant something like "badazz motha". Now he's more like psycho Seaseme Street. "This beating has been brought to you by the number '10' and the letter 'argh!'"


I literally LOL'ed at this statement.

On topic, I like it now you just need to clean it up and color it. XD

TheAntagonist
Oct 24, 2005, 02:43 PM
I'm working on that now. And no one told me who Akuma and Gouki are.

Sharkyland
Oct 24, 2005, 04:47 PM
I swear that kanji looks familiar, but the only one that comes up in my head is this:

http://linear.mv.com/cgi-bin/j-e/S=48/FG=c/jap/%b8%a4?TR
INU - Dog

Skuda
Oct 24, 2005, 04:51 PM
On 2005-10-24 14:47, Sharkyland wrote:
I swear that kanji looks familiar, but the only one that comes up in my head is this:

http://linear.mv.com/cgi-bin/j-e/S=48/FG=c/jap/%b8%a4?TR
INU - Dog



ditto

http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

it's very similar

TheAntagonist
Oct 24, 2005, 08:03 PM
But backwards.

EJ
Oct 24, 2005, 08:17 PM
On 2005-10-24 12:43, TheAntagonist wrote:
I'm working on that now. And no one told me who Akuma and Gouki are.


Akuma is from Street Fighter.

Gouki is from....um...I forgot who Gouki is.

Sharkyland
Oct 24, 2005, 08:32 PM
I'm out of luck. I can't find any kanji similar to it. Inu just comes close... and Tai/Dai (Taisen/Daijobou)... the other form of Rekka (Fire) seems similar as well.

Sayara
Oct 24, 2005, 08:51 PM
Gouki is Akuma's Japan name ;o

In a future date, try to clean the area near the kanji. I really like that pony tail too. Just remember to clean that bg, or keep the actual paper's bg.

"Ten" on Akuma's shirt by the way is i beleive the kanji of heaven. (Or so Pita TEN says, XD, and TENshi is angel too).

Sharkyland
Oct 24, 2005, 09:17 PM
Here we go, I found the similar kanji.

http://gf.ottix.net/cgi-bin/j-e/S=48/FG=bl/inline/jap/%c5%b7?TR
This 'ten' means "Heaven" or "Sky"

But the kanji's I was thinking of similar are:
http://gf.ottix.net/cgi-bin/j-e/S=48/FG=bl/inline/jap/%c2%e7%be%e6%c9%d7?TR
'daijobou' meaning 'safe' or 'all right'

http://gf.ottix.net/cgi-bin/j-e/S=48/FG=bl/inline/jap/%c2%e7%c0%ef?TR
'taisen' meaning 'great battle'

http://gf.ottix.net/cgi-bin/j-e/S=48/FG=bl/inline/jap/%b2%d0?TR
'hi' meaning 'fire, blaze'

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Zelutos
Oct 25, 2005, 03:37 AM
i simply love it. divine work http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

TheAntagonist
Oct 25, 2005, 05:46 AM
Yeah. Does anyone have a good idea on the best way to redraw it (for a cleaner version) like tracing paper, drawing it from scratch, etc?