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WashuSaotome
Nov 4, 2005, 10:54 PM
It's not fan fiction, so I have no idea where to put this stuff.

Anyway, I'd just like to share some stuff I've written within the past month or so. Critique is welcomed.

Now this stuff is PG-13. (And speaking of writing, anyone doing the National Novel Writing Month thing?)

Enjoy.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23935676/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23963847/
And...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24887787/

(lol... I just noticed that I put these in reverse order of the dates in which I wrote them. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif Doesn't matter.)

*EDIT, FOO'!* I fixed the links.

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InfinityXXX
Nov 5, 2005, 10:50 PM
Everytime I click on a link it says the page can't be found.

I love to write, but my grammar skills are not all that great. I'm alright but I make a lot of errors. Its because all my english teachers were retarded(and the internet). Every year we focused on learning and spelling words instead of grammar.(the joys of going to a poor public school in my town) but this year I put my self in English AP and I've been improving but my confidence on ever showing my book I wrote is low.(Instead I made it into a comic)

But,I look forward to reading what you wrote.



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WashuSaotome
Nov 6, 2005, 12:53 AM
I didn't want to have to resort to it... But it's DEVIANT ART TIME!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23935676/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23963847/
And...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24887787/

There we go...
InfinityXXX
Nov 6, 2005, 01:33 PM
You write really good. Its very dark but the first one has some humor in it.(with the toilet seat. Maybe it wasn't suppose to be funny but I have a dark sense of humor) My favorite one is the last one, the one where she she is introduced to cutting.
WashuSaotome
Nov 6, 2005, 02:08 PM
Why, thank you. *bows*

I think I could have done more with that stuff. You know... Beef it up a little. For some reason, the one with the blanket (That Little Blanket) seems to unfinished to me, but I can't bring myself to write anymore. Heh.

Well, I'll be a postin' some more crap soon. Until then, I will slave away at this keyboard.

*tippa tappa typa*