Critisism: Be my guest.

[Dre_o]

To those who read this. Comment. Critizize. In general, let me know what you think.

Notwithstanding, take into consideration that this piece is simply a practice round, no color, background, or anything like that a body. Legs not included. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif Unfortunetly, this will probably end up being one of those help threads that gets two responses but no problem, it's cool.

If I get to finishing something like this before I start the larger piece I'm planning, It'll look much better than this. FYI, This is supposed to be my best interpretation of my self, kind of like Scott_Kuda.

And why did I cut it off at the hands? I got tired of messing up continuously but that's not the point. Getting any kind of advice before I start the previously stated project would help immensly

And I appologize for the image size, it was out of my control. ^_^"

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/Flemlazoid/Me2.jpg

[Sayara]

I don't think you quite grasped what Sagasu suggested for you in a previous thread. As of this instance it makes you the Humar feel like your in a female body with 0 chest.

The male, usually tend to be alot more built in the hips then the female, This is just general observation.

In the swimming pools, note how a girl has a more bendy body compared to the guys over the otherside. They are more rectangular, and less curvy. Theres SOME curve, just not as much as you have.


About your hands, you cannot give up on working with hands, Keep practicing, and if this drawing has failed hands, the next one will strive to be better.

Your choice of eye and face designs are rather interesting though, If they would face the right direction it would be quite piercing.