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Axel3792
Feb 3, 2006, 12:53 PM
hwrawr finally finished it last night... about 5 1/2 hours...

tell me what ya think!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v420/dasmachtsnichts/kitelookfinal.jpg

Tystys
Feb 3, 2006, 12:55 PM
I like it. The face looks just a little bit off, but it's flawless.
Then again, I'm a drawing n00b, so I may not even know what the hell I'm talking about. But I know a good drawing when I see one, heh

Ansatsu
Feb 3, 2006, 05:03 PM
awesome, but i agree with tystys, the chin is a little too pushed in, but it gives it a unique look to it. very nice. i admire your inking skills as well, as i cant ink for my life



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Sgt_Shligger
Feb 3, 2006, 05:50 PM
huh--- i haven't watched .hack in a while--- its OK but your drawing is good--- the chin is in a bit to much but otherwise its good---- wht program did u use to color it and did u use an inkwell pen to "ink" it?

Sayara
Feb 3, 2006, 06:05 PM
The chin looks fine to me http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_confused.gif

This is a very nice job. He sure is angry at something.

Jehosaphaty
Feb 3, 2006, 06:52 PM
On 2006-02-03 15:05, Tingle wrote:
The chin looks fine to me http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_confused.gif

This is a very nice job. He sure is angry at something.



he could be referring to the slight highlight underneath the lip, but i simply took that to be his lip jutting out like he was angwy. nice pic indeed.

Tystys
Feb 3, 2006, 06:59 PM
On 2006-02-03 14:50, SgtShligger wrote:
huh--- i haven't watched .hack in a while--- its OK but your drawing is good--- the chin is in a bit to much but otherwise its good---- wht program did u use to color it and did u use an inkwell pen to "ink" it?



Actually, kite is from the .hack games originally..until that damn legend of the twilight bracelet came out.

Axel3792
Feb 4, 2006, 05:19 PM
thanks for the comments lol

this picture is based off the cover of .hack//Mutation (part 2/4 of the games)

o and yea lol the chin is supposed to be highlighted under the mouth for effect



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Flwl3ssCowboy
Feb 4, 2006, 09:04 PM
You forgot his uber braclet of hax0rz >_>

White_Knight
Feb 4, 2006, 09:15 PM
Sence this is based off of the game and not the show you can't see the braclet it can only be seen when it's used and at no other time.

Tystys
Feb 4, 2006, 09:42 PM
Maybe you should try drawing a data drain next, that'd be awesome.

Zelutos
Feb 5, 2006, 12:27 AM
You should do Black Rose or Balmung next http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

Balmung rules http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

Tystys
Feb 5, 2006, 04:04 AM
Those wings could take a while.

Kanashimi
Feb 6, 2006, 06:22 AM
The chin is off, and I'm not talking about the highlight. It's more the right line that defines the jaw than anything else... The face angle seems as if he's looking slightly upward, but that one line brings the jaw back down to the neck.

The shoulders are also a little too far forward... If you sketch a connecting line from the neck down to where his skin would be under the clothes, you might be able to see what I mean. Looks just a tiny bit awkward. =)

Other than that, I like it quite a bit. Good work!