KodiaX987
Oct 7, 2002, 12:31 PM
Yahhhhooo!
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=981671
I would have done an RI sig for the event but I didn't have any character pics handy. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif
There it is. The revamped version of Republic Insa: The Android Sin. I've corrected mistakes, smoothened out the plotline, and added a bit of political intrigue to twist things around even more. Also:
-The full prologue of Elenor's transformation.
-Added detail to battle scenes.
-Shurikane's creator is introduced and adds a new twist to the plot.
-Extended scenes, which reveal a bit of Shurikane's past, along with the other Insas, and some other characters.
-Cameo appearances, namely Breezblok and Davion.
-Updated fighter profile charts.
-Drives deeper into the relation between Shurikane and her daughter Sierra.
-Alternate ending includes a few TFFOMP elements, modified to match the Republic Insa timeline and plotline.
Enjoy! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif While I am at it, I submit the revamp for the fanfiction database. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=981671
I would have done an RI sig for the event but I didn't have any character pics handy. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif
There it is. The revamped version of Republic Insa: The Android Sin. I've corrected mistakes, smoothened out the plotline, and added a bit of political intrigue to twist things around even more. Also:
-The full prologue of Elenor's transformation.
-Added detail to battle scenes.
-Shurikane's creator is introduced and adds a new twist to the plot.
-Extended scenes, which reveal a bit of Shurikane's past, along with the other Insas, and some other characters.
-Cameo appearances, namely Breezblok and Davion.
-Updated fighter profile charts.
-Drives deeper into the relation between Shurikane and her daughter Sierra.
-Alternate ending includes a few TFFOMP elements, modified to match the Republic Insa timeline and plotline.
Enjoy! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif While I am at it, I submit the revamp for the fanfiction database. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif