TaKaede
Oct 23, 2002, 03:20 PM
Chapter 1: New Friends?
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Okay before I start this is going to be a chapter-a-week fan fiction... that is if I can keep up with schedule... I'm not going to bore you with introduction on EVERY chapter, just this one and maybe a few others (if needed) are going to be exceptions. Anyways between chapters you can give me either your characters to add into the story or maybe just some new ideas and ill try and work it in. I have the structure of the story already written down so I can't change things drastically... I think I've said enough here... enjoy ^_^;
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A young man who looks like he was in his early 20's bursts through the door into the Pioneer 2 restaurant area, he has short black hair which is positioned up in spikes with white highlights at the end, his eyes are blue with a tint of green around the rims, he isn't in the greatest shape as his t-shirt has a rip going through the middle and he is missing half of his left trouser leg, he stands there watching as the people inside gawk at him.
"What?" he mutters, no one hears him and the staring continues. The young man is not in a position to start trouble and cause a commotion so he sits down near the restaurant owner. "Got anything to drink?" he grunts in a quiet voice.
The middle-aged restaurant owner who has a silvery pony tailed hairstyle, he is wearing jeans and a t-shirt that has a very unusual but amusing slogan on which said "Max is a pointy robot. Max does not like the beef. 600 sit-ups a day, gotta do 'em!" he stands there still staring with the rest of the individuals, "Are you okay?" he points a hand shakily at his multiple wounds around his body, "You're hurt..." the restaurant owner thinks for a while, "I can heal you." Subsequently the injured man looks himself down seeing the blood drip from the main gash that ripped right through his stomach at a slight angle. He touches it and winces slightly as the new pain rushes through him.
"...If you must." They walk into an office that is next to the restaurant bar and chants are heard from inside.
"This may feel weird for a second or two," the owner declares while carrying on the chants; He gathers his resta powers, the blessed light collects around the injured man's mid-section that is where most of the major gashes are. Amazingly the injured man doesn't flinch as he feels the scars healing, he nods in thanks as he finishes. "Wow... You didn't even move," the owner says with bewilderment. Shrugging the injured man stands up. The owner holds his hand out to shake hands "I'm Breezblok, I'm a RAmar." Ignoring this, the injured man walks past Breezblok's hand,
"TaKaede... HUmar" he says in a murmured sigh. Breezblok stands there realising he isn't going to shake and hastily pulls his hand back to his waist, after turning around he dashes out to catch up with the departing TaKaede. Breezblok and TaKaede walk out the office together and notice that people have begun their discussion again. Breezblok turns to TaKaede with a bemused look on his face.
"Friends?"
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Okay this is the first chapter, just introducing the main character and someone else to the story. TaKaede doesn't seem to be all that friendly; will he accept to Breezblok's kindness or just attack him? TaKaede has been badly hurt before he walked into the restaurant; ill explain why he's so badly hurt in the next week's chapter. Please R&R and remember that I'm going to be reading your suggestions and I CAN add a character if not in the next chapter but the one after that, it will be a for a female character that will be one of the main characters if anyone with a female character wants to be in the story, I will need a description of your character plus the name of course. Like I said I won't be adding a starter to all of the chapters that was just a one off... however I will most likely be adding a finisher to each chapter... MWEHEHEHEE!!!!! *Evil smirk*
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Okay before I start this is going to be a chapter-a-week fan fiction... that is if I can keep up with schedule... I'm not going to bore you with introduction on EVERY chapter, just this one and maybe a few others (if needed) are going to be exceptions. Anyways between chapters you can give me either your characters to add into the story or maybe just some new ideas and ill try and work it in. I have the structure of the story already written down so I can't change things drastically... I think I've said enough here... enjoy ^_^;
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A young man who looks like he was in his early 20's bursts through the door into the Pioneer 2 restaurant area, he has short black hair which is positioned up in spikes with white highlights at the end, his eyes are blue with a tint of green around the rims, he isn't in the greatest shape as his t-shirt has a rip going through the middle and he is missing half of his left trouser leg, he stands there watching as the people inside gawk at him.
"What?" he mutters, no one hears him and the staring continues. The young man is not in a position to start trouble and cause a commotion so he sits down near the restaurant owner. "Got anything to drink?" he grunts in a quiet voice.
The middle-aged restaurant owner who has a silvery pony tailed hairstyle, he is wearing jeans and a t-shirt that has a very unusual but amusing slogan on which said "Max is a pointy robot. Max does not like the beef. 600 sit-ups a day, gotta do 'em!" he stands there still staring with the rest of the individuals, "Are you okay?" he points a hand shakily at his multiple wounds around his body, "You're hurt..." the restaurant owner thinks for a while, "I can heal you." Subsequently the injured man looks himself down seeing the blood drip from the main gash that ripped right through his stomach at a slight angle. He touches it and winces slightly as the new pain rushes through him.
"...If you must." They walk into an office that is next to the restaurant bar and chants are heard from inside.
"This may feel weird for a second or two," the owner declares while carrying on the chants; He gathers his resta powers, the blessed light collects around the injured man's mid-section that is where most of the major gashes are. Amazingly the injured man doesn't flinch as he feels the scars healing, he nods in thanks as he finishes. "Wow... You didn't even move," the owner says with bewilderment. Shrugging the injured man stands up. The owner holds his hand out to shake hands "I'm Breezblok, I'm a RAmar." Ignoring this, the injured man walks past Breezblok's hand,
"TaKaede... HUmar" he says in a murmured sigh. Breezblok stands there realising he isn't going to shake and hastily pulls his hand back to his waist, after turning around he dashes out to catch up with the departing TaKaede. Breezblok and TaKaede walk out the office together and notice that people have begun their discussion again. Breezblok turns to TaKaede with a bemused look on his face.
"Friends?"
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Okay this is the first chapter, just introducing the main character and someone else to the story. TaKaede doesn't seem to be all that friendly; will he accept to Breezblok's kindness or just attack him? TaKaede has been badly hurt before he walked into the restaurant; ill explain why he's so badly hurt in the next week's chapter. Please R&R and remember that I'm going to be reading your suggestions and I CAN add a character if not in the next chapter but the one after that, it will be a for a female character that will be one of the main characters if anyone with a female character wants to be in the story, I will need a description of your character plus the name of course. Like I said I won't be adding a starter to all of the chapters that was just a one off... however I will most likely be adding a finisher to each chapter... MWEHEHEHEE!!!!! *Evil smirk*
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