FanArt: Swimsuit contest entries (now in color!)

[Abaru-FP]

http://www.geocities.com/sandmoof76/CP1colored.jpg

Colored in Deep Paint. Thanks for the link Coffee!

This is the first picture I've managed to fully color. I hate coloring and it kind of shows :/

http://www.geocities.com/sandmoof76/CP2colored.jpg

had to glance at a reference before I started drawing the boobies, but other than that it’s all my work.

Thanks alot for the CC, the things you have pointed out would have gone unnoticed and uncorrected in future drawings. If there is anything wrong with the coloring and shading, please mention it as I have little practice in those areas. I will try to finish one more drawing for the contest.

Edit: Things you might notice and go "huh?" over:

No toes: Toes are ugly and thwart me.

No bellybutton: One is a Caseal, and I think androids don't have bellybuttons. I just forgot to add one to the beast on top.

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[CupOfCoffee]

I think they could both stand on their own as contest entries, to be honest. The second one especially looks well-organized and your drawing craft is obviously up-to-snuff. The only criticism I can really think to offer would be to try and work some light and shadowplay into these two drawings. Good though they may be, they're still basically just outlines. Color shading would be really tough with MS Paint, so you should look around for VioletSkye's sticky in Off Topic about free programs for anyone to download. There was a download link to Deep Paint in there, which is a passable coloring alternative to Photoshop. Edit: here you are. http://www.pso-world.com/viewtopic.php?topic=106971&forum=9&36#gr

Otherwise, man, keep up the good work. (I especially like the "low ATA" caption in the first one. XD)



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[Jared_T]

I really like the top one. My first thought was cool a Beast. Color and shading would help it out.. I wish I saw it before it got "mangled".

The second one the only thing that errks me is the head seems huge. other than that the body looks well proportioned.

Keep it up.



[edit: spelling, needs to learn to proofread]

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[Dre_o]

I have one thing to add to the above comments:

On the top picture, her arms seem to be a little lankey. You know, long and thin. I reccomend adding a little more curvature in the arms. That will improve it alot in my eyes.

I'd still love to see some more.

PS: Though it may sound like I'm not a fan, I love them both http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif .

[Jared_T]

Abaru-AP here is an idea on a program to do some editing. Adobe has a free tiral download. You have to register or something not exactly clear on the details.. Photoshop Trial (https://www.adobe.com/cfusion/tdrc/index.cfm?product=photoshop&loc=en)

[DamonKatu]

*Faint* Not agean! lol Nice but its going to be hard sence their so many competiors. Good luck with that. Just woundering, but are you planing to color this?

[Jared_T]

I just noticed that it is now in color! Is the head on the second pic smaller now? Looks good, but maybe a little more..