FINISHED YA'LL

[FOAtHeart]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v84/FOAtHeart/866.jpg

Overworking this would have killed it so I decided to save it.

@ Jehosaphaty: I think the negative space is totally relevant; it adds to the impression the image makes, I think. So I kept it anyway.


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[Jehosaphaty]

I feel like there is too much negative space on the right side of the image. Will something be going there as a framer to balance? I know it's still a baby pic, just thought I'd throw in what I noticed. I think it has stella potential.

[Skuda]

mmm, very warm, Fo. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

It reminds me of sunrise at the beach. :3

[Collar]

On 2006-12-03 04:40, Skuda wrote:
mmm, very warm, Fo. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

It reminds me of sunrise at the beach. :3





"I agree with Skuda. It gives a very warm appearance, along with a general floaty feeling reminiscent of a daydream. One of those 'I'm not paying attention really, just enjoying the day' kind of deals.

[astuarlen]

Ugh, I am having such a hard time putting the sweetness of this into words--perhaps because the image does such a fantastic job of communicating this feeling of warmth and contentment and serenity and stuffs. :> Yeah, I like it a lot!
Completely disagree with Jeho about the negative space. I think it's vital not to crowd this piece or confine it. In fact, were it mine--but it's not--I would probably add even more space to both sides to emphasize the solitary figure.
I see a couple things that I might do to take the awesome factor to the next level: the dark band on his/her arm just beneath the right shoulder seems to distort the arm a bit. Also, I wouldn't mind seeing the lower body just a touch more defined (are his/her legs crossed?).
Beautiful, though. :} It's very impressionistic and ethereal, almost like a figure seen in the clouds rather than a solid person.
<3 <3 <3

[Jehosaphaty]

It looks great fo, maybe the negative does add something after all. (although I'll disagree with astuar: I think anymore space would drown the little fella. opinions are like buttholes though, everybody's gottem http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif )

[ColonelPiFace]

*wind blows by and he falls over. * wow

[navci]

I like the colours. :>
Always glad to help your experiements!