A good, creepy one-shot story; I like how the illusion from the final DF battle was instead internalized as the vision where Rico's mind succumbed (providing, of course, the title for the story and...
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A good, creepy one-shot story; I like how the illusion from the final DF battle was instead internalized as the vision where Rico's mind succumbed (providing, of course, the title for the story and...
Year of the Rappy
Chapter 8
"What is this?" Edwin Scolos asked. "Our business is finished." He blinked, eyes heavy with sleep, at Ryland's face, then glanced over at Lyon. "Who is that?"
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Only one more chapter to go after this one!
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Year of the Rappy
Chapter 7
The trapdoor was metal, around four feet square, and set into a kind of lip. ...
It scares me to admit that I immediately recognized the subject of the thread from the topic line. Darn, I'm old. ^_^ The art, though, is very, very nice, with over-the-top poses and splashy color...
I think I've managed to work a reference to Lyon's disquiet about the concept of having a subconscious mind into every one of my Lyon/Ryland fics. Which of course brings up the question: why have...
I've nearly lost track of how many different PSO fics I've written featuring Inspector Laleham as a member of the supporting cast. He first appeared in "Grave Consequences" (which, incidentally, was...
Wow, Part 4 already. This month is going by pretty fast!
Year of the Rappy
Chapter 4
Despite herself, Lyon found herself intrigued by the situation. Ordinarily, mysteries and conspiracies...
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. As far as future chapters go, I'm deliberately spacing this out so I can post the last chapter on the 26th (Lunar New Year). So Chapter 4 will be...
Year of the Rappy
Chapter 3
Lyon stepped off the warp platform into the cool air of a sunny forest clearing. It was more than a little eerie, she thought. The Residential Area had been the site...
Aw, but digressions are fun!
In the context of PSO/PSU fiction, though, I genuinely think that it's necessary to confine the protagonist (with one exception, which I'll get to later) to a...
*waves* Hey, guys! Mostly I've been hiding at fanfiction.net. GrimGrimoire kind of ate me around last November (2007). ^_- Plus, since I never played PSU (seriously, I've only had a broadband...
A lot of people have mentioned the "cliche" aspect of the Hunter protagonist, and I'd like to expand on that a bit: the male human swordsman is the generic "main hero" of eternities of fantasy...
Myself, I'd have to vote for the Ranger-type, though as Libram notes, it really depends on the kind of story being told. My own PSO fiction tends towards the sci-fi/conspiracy-intrigue kind of...
*shakes head* Man, I disappear for a few months...okay, maybe a year or so...and everything changes! Looks nice, though.
Anyway, for those who remember from waaaay back when, I do a series of...
Wow. Just...wow.
Though on the subject of the eyes, I'd have to side with Tact and Serakor, especially with all the light in the room.
The purple cloud at her hip is very cool in the newest...
After writing three stories about Lyon and Ryland, it was more or less inevitable that I did a humor fic about them. As always, it's a holiday story...
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First off, let's all have a loud cheer of thanks to Ian-KunX for convincing Meira to post now!
*huzzah!*
That done...Nice! Allanque is interesting because she seems to be not all there,...
All right, prepare to put your curiosity to rest and crow with victory at how cheesily easy the mystery was, because here's the final chapter!
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For anyone who's been lamenting the lack of some good old-fashioned violence in the story so far, well, things change for this chapter. I mean, hey, it's Seabed, right? But among it all there's also...
Then more you shall have!
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CHAPTER FOUR
"So, this investigation is back to being wide open," Ryland concluded as the...
One note, for those of you who might be long-time readers of my stories, is that with this fic I finally gave in and started referring to beat time as the "internal" timing system for the story...
It's not the phrase he's questioning, but the juxtaposition of the description of the Dome area as silent with a "noisy" idiom like hammering to describe the rain. That is, silent, but with noise.
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So, you wanted a critique, eh? I guess I'll try my hand at that.
(Somewhere, I'm sure HUnewearl_Meira was expecting me to respond here...
It absolutely does. Unfortunately, I can't take credit for it, though, since such AIs are actually in-game canon. Calus, for example, first appears in the Episode I quest "Knowing One's Heart," and...
Glad you're liking it, folks! This chapter features a guest appearance by a canon character who simply doesn't get a lot of play in fiction.
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