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[spoiler-box]I don't want to get into it in case I want to use it in the future. But I wanted to show how my characters interact with a world of love and lust. So far very little importance has...

[spoiler-box]Yeah, it's a great ost. And a great game. It shows that Square still has it.
I have to say, not being able to use songs with lyrics is actually tougher than it seems. I had to...

[spoiler-box]Life is Strange has such a strange combination of warm and empty music. It makes it difficult to know how to feel.

People-watching is a great way to flesh out the atmosphere of the...

That's one of his older things. I think it's been years since he's used it.

Oh...that's different than I thought it looked. What am I thinking of?

Nostalgia Critic has a lot of reoccurring jokes. One of them was FUCKING BUBBLES, but he had a lot more.

Don't we often see camp ships ingame? Like, flying in and out from the glass walls of...

Skies is one of my top five favorite turn based RPGs. It's one of the few late RPGs that takes what makes early RPGs good and expands on that, instead of getting rid of a lot of it. But it also...

2.4 on page 64

Something that seems pretty universally true in art is, a piece should be as long as you feel it needs to be. I like composing songs between 2-5 minutes for instance, but if I...

[spoiler-box]I think the answer to that lays in the Transformers TV shows.[/spoiler-box]

2.3 on page 62

[spoiler-box]Damn~ this song! It was so good, it kind of distracted me. I've gotta look up more from this guy.

Hehe, Marten hasn't learned how to speak with robots. I'm almost...

[spoiler-box]I don't... know. He's putting so much emphasis on it, and making it seem so harmless. That's not a good combination.

It worked great, the horror story. The slow degradation of a...

2.2 on page 60

[spoiler-box]Oh, we're still here? I was expecting easy come, easy go. This is more...easy come, hard go?

Nobody’s perfect—except me, of course. But you’re not me, so I won’t...

[spoiler-box]Yeah, that was probably the better method. If you have to force stuff - even information - it's not as enjoyable. Your story just has a smooth flow to it that was changed for this...

Well I wouldn't know. I've never seen you.

2.1 (58) (Damn it PSOW not again)

[spoiler-box]Oh~ I'm only a month behind now~

You know, I grew up in this kind of atmosphere. Not that I lived...

[spoiler-box]Well Zorael isn't too far from a self-insert. That's not the exact term for it, I think there's one that fits better.
But, self-inserts are more, what would it be like if you existed...

[spoiler-box]Author self-inserts aren't too uncommon. But, I guess they aren't always easy to do.

I didn't really notice the similarity between the characters. Maybe I did in the back of my...

1.6 (57)

[spoiler-box]Hm, there goes my previous hypothesis. I thought the team was attacked because Akasha looked like the Falz. But, the given reason makes sense too...

"Enjoy" a short...

1.5 (57)

[spoiler-box]I don't think we've seen any wire lance users yet. At least, it's been a while.

Man, another song no longer working. The downside of waiting so long to read a chapter......

1.4 (56)

[spoiler-box]Aw, bonding time!

I had difficulty placing the setting of this scene. I was so drawn by the conversation that I didn't care too much. But for some reason I thought they...

These page-long discussions are great. After seeing several pages of nothing but chapter posts and no comments, it's great to see some talk about the story. Even if it's not always on-topic.

1.3...

That...thought also occurred to me.

Well, maybe not as a source of income. But as a way to bring your work to a broader audience.

Right now you can only really write for us. But it's doubtful this forum is going to see any new...

A book wouldn't be that bad of an idea. You could generalize the fantasy of the series and start the characters from scratch. Or even work on new ones. With your skill, it might go somewhere. You...

[spoiler-box]Sometimes we write things and they just come out. We may not write with the intention of that thing coming out, but there it goes.
Like that last thing I wrote, it just flowed from me....

1.2 (55)

[spoiler-box]I got super invested in the massacre. I couldn't tell you why. I just got into it.
Is this the first Falz of the series? Hype! Great choice of words for him.

Hoo...