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    Note: I didn't do the BBcode for the blocking, since that's a job in itself and I'm still working on getting the other scripts cleaned up and ready to go. If anyone wants to volunteer, it would be appreciated. I have the .doc I can send to show anyone the proper blocking. It really looks a lot spiffier with the text differentiated.

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    In a far away galaxy, lies a sun, orbited by 3 planets. The Gurhal system.
    A place inhabited by humans, and their creations,
    CASTs, Newmens, and beasts.
    For 500 years, there was war among the races,
    a seemingly never-ending conflict. Then finally...
    An era of peace and prosperity that has lasted for 100 years.
    But now, a darkness has awoken, and threatens the Universe.

    (Cutscene)
    (Shot pans in of the Guardian Colony)
    Text: The Alliance Centennial Ceremony at the thriving Guardian Colony....
    (Large battleships align in formation and begin firing lasers which explode into beautiful fireworks.President Dallgun stands before the crowd smiling as the display continues outside the domed viewing plaza)
    (End Cutscene)

    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan walks down a long hallway, when his communicator beeps)
    ---Ethan: Hello? Oh, hey Lumia! Yeah, I just got off work. I know, I know. I'll take that shortcut through the alleys and be there before you know it. Okay?
    (Ethan hangs up on Lumia and tosses his airboard to the ground. He jumps on and begins zigzagging through the alleyways - ducking and jumping pipes. As he exits the alley into a street, a car barrels down on him and hit him, sending Ethan and his board flying. The car come to a stop before him, and a servant of the Communion of Gurhal steps out)
    ---COG Servant: Hey! Are you okay?
    ---Ethan: Ow! My leg! I think... dammit!!
    (A beautiful newman girl exits the car and approaches Ethan)
    ---Mirei: I'm so sorry, but are you okay?
    ---Ethan: What do you think?!
    (Ethan bites his tongue as he glances at the beautiful Newman girl)
    ---Mirei: Well, it appears you've injured your leg...
    (Mirei casts a recovery technique on Ethan's leg)
    ---Mirei: How do you feel now?
    ---Ethan: Huh?
    (Ethan stands on his broken leg and feels no pain, he stomps it in amazement)
    ---Ethan: H-Hey... T-The pain's gone! I'm healed!
    ---Mirei: I'm so glad!
    ---Ethan: Thank you! Hey, was that a TECHNIC?
    (Ethan, then embarrassed stammers)
    ---Ethan: Um. I'm Ethan Waber!
    ---Mirei: My name is...
    ---COG Servant: Ma'am, we'll be late for the ceremony. We have to get going.
    ---Mirei: Yes, you're right.
    ---COG Servant: Now, if you'll excuse us.
    (Mirei and the Servant enter the car and drive away - leaving Ethan alone in the street. He looks at his watch)
    ---Ethan: Oh man! I completely forgot! I'm gonna be late, too!
    (End Cutscene)

    (Opening Cinema)

    Episode 1 Chapter 1: Of Light and Darkness

    Clyez City: Central Table: First Floor
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    (Cutscene)
    (Lumia is standing alone by the fountain in the Central Table. She spots Ethan arriving and waves emphatically)
    ---Lumia: Hey Ethan! I'm over here! Come on!
    (Ethan rides up to Lumia and steps off his board, placing it in his nano-transformer)
    ---Ethan: Geez, do you have to shout like that? It's embarrassing, little sister.
    ---Lumia: But the ceremony's already started! I want to find a good place to watch!
    (Lumia begins tugging Ethan along after her as she exits)
    ---Lumia: Come on, Ethan! Let's go!
    ---Ethan: All right, all right already!
    (End Cutscene)

    ---Lumia: Ethan, hurry up! If we don't get there soon, we'll miss the ceremony!
    ---Ethan: All right, All right. If I can remember how to get to the viewing plaza... We take the Linear Line right?
    ---Lumia: Yeah. I think the platform's on the fourth floor.

    (Human Girl)
    ---Human Girl: The Colony is huge, so if you're looking to go to the viewing plaza, the Linear Line is the best way to get there. The Linear line is on the fourth floor, last doorway on the right.
    ---(Again)
    ---Human Girl: If you're looking to go to the viewing plaza, the Linear Line is on the fourth floor, last doorway on the right. It's the best way.

    (Galmo Veag)
    ---Galmo: Sorry about what happened before with the Divine Maiden...
    ---Ethan: Huh? What are you talking about?

    (Mefon Lead)
    ---Ethan: All these Guardians are just hanging around doing nothing during the ceremony.
    ---Mrs. Lead: Hey, as long as everyone feels safe, right?
    ---Ethan: I guess...
    ---Mrs. Lead: You're a weird kid.

    (Guardian)
    ---Ethan: (These Guardians sure seem more busy watching the ceremony than doing their job!)
    ---Guardian: What was that?
    ---Ethan: Nothing.
    ---Guardian: What's with him?

    (Black Cast)
    ---Black Cast: It's been 100 years since the alliance between the three planets was signed! 100 years since the establishment of the GUARDIANS! The GUARDIANS have protected the peace of our solar system for a century!
    ---(Again)
    ---Black Cast: I've been looking forward to this celebration for so long now! I'm so excited! Too excited, even. My doctor warned me about this...

    (Mikua Tesran)
    ---Ethan: Hey! Is that you, Mikua?
    ---Mikua: Ain't this a sight! What are you doing in the city, Ethan?
    ---Ethan: Ah, just taking Lumia to see the ceremony.
    ---Mikua: To get to the plaza, take the Linear Line on the 4th floor. You know that, right?
    ---Ethan: (What a know-it-all!)
    ---(Again)
    ---Ethan: Hey, Mikua!
    ---Mikua: Whoa! If you don't hurry, the ceremony's gonna start without you!

    (Yokus Melton)
    ---Ethan: Hey Yokus! You goin' to the ceremony, too?
    ---Yokus: I think you've got the wrong person.
    ---Ethan: Huh? What are you talking about?
    ---Yokus: Have we met somewhere before?
    ---Ethan: Wrong person, I guess... How strange...

    (Try to go up the right stairs)
    ---Guardian: Currently, the second floor is off limits. To reach the Linear Line, please use the center elevator.

    (Try to go up the left stairs)
    ---Guardian: During the ceremony, the second and third floors are closed to all non-security personnel. If you want to go to the Linear Line platform on the fourth floor, use the elevators.
    ---Ethan: Guardians think they're so hot, always telling people what to do...

    (Try to enter the Guardians Barracks)
    ---Lumia: Come on Ethan! Forget about visiting your friends! Lets hurry up and go to the fourth floor!

    Clyez City: PPT Spaceport: Fourth Floor
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    Lumia: The Linear Line gate is back there on the right.

    (Sinenu Forin)
    ---Sinenu: To get to the Linear Line you go straight from here. You're the fifteenth person to ask!
    ---Ethan: (Quit your whining!)

    (Kitov Milzu)
    ---Ethan: Excuse me, the Linear Line?
    ---Mr. Milzu: It's right over there. If you're here to see the ceremony, you'd better hurry!

    (Arsh Milzu)
    ---Ethan: Is that...? Mrs. Milzu?
    ---Mrs. Milzu: Is that you, Ethan? It's been so long, hasn't it! Is that little Lumia with you?
    ---Lumia: Hello. Mrs. Milzu.
    ---Mrs. Milzu: You two came out to see the ceremony, did you?
    ---Ethan: Yeah.
    ---Mrs. Milzu: Well then, see you later.
    ---(Again)
    ---Mrs. Milzu: You'd better hurry. It's going to start soon!

    (PPT Desk Caseal)
    ---Ethan: Ah, excuse me!
    ---PPT Desk Caseal: Watch it! I don't know what's up, but I sure wish everyone would just settle down already!

    ---PPT Information Desk Clerk: Welcome and thanks for using the PPT spaceport. I'm truly sorry, but due to the Alliance Centennial Ceremony, all PPT shuttle arrivals and departures are suspended. We apologize for any inconvenience.

    (PPT Gate Attendants)
    ---Spaceport Caseal: This gate is for the spaceship dock. This gate is currently closed.
    ---Moatoob Caseal: This is the PPT gate for the Planet Moatoob. The PPT is currently not in use.
    ---Parum Caseal: This is the PPT gate for the Planet Parum. The PPT is currently not in use.
    ---Neudaiz Caseal: This is the PPT gate for the Planet Neudaiz. The PPT is currently not in use.

    (Guardians between the 3rd and 5th floor stairs)
    ---Guardian: The third floor is currently closed.
    ---Guardian: The GUARDIANS Headquarters is currently off limits.If you have a request, come back after the ceremony.
    ---Ethan (thinking): As if I'd have a request for them!

    Linear Line Platform
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    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan and Lumia exit the train, Lumia still tugging Ethan along by the arm)
    ---Lumia: Come on Ethan, run faster!
    ---Ethan: Why can't we just use my airboard, Lumia?
    ---Lumia: You know you're not supposed to ride two to a board!
    (No Vol comes bumbling by the pair, knocking Lumia over)
    ---Lumia: Aah!
    ---Ethan: Watch it, you klutz!
    (No Vol goes to leave but Ethan stops him)
    ---Ethan: Hey, hold on there a second! You wanna giver he back what you just stole there?
    ---No Vol: What the heck?! Get lost. I didn't steal nothing.
    ---Ethan: Lumia, check your pockets.
    ---Lumia: Huh? Hey! My Meseta Card is gone!
    (No Vol sneaks away while Ethan and Lumia are talking)
    ---Ethan: You see. you... huh? Hey! Come back here!
    (Ethan gives chase, Lumia follows behind)
    ---Lumia: Ethan!
    (No Vol slyly hops aboard the Linear Line just before the doors shut, locking Ethan out. The train then departs the station. Ethan hops on his airboard and chases behind. At the next stop, No Vol humming a tune hops off the train and strides towards the viewing plaza. Ethan comes up the ramp shortly after No Vol leaves the scene)
    (End Cutscene)

    Linear Line Platform
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    ---Ethan (shouting): Where did he go?!

    (Guardians)
    ---Guardian: If you're looking for the viewing platform, it's over there. This area is off-limits.
    ---Guardian: The ceremony has created some security problems, so this area is currently off-limits.
    ---(Again)
    ---Guardian: Why did I have to get stuck working? I wanted to see the Divine Maiden, too!

    (Kumil Godes)
    ---Ethan: Did you see a sketchy-looking guy come by here?
    ---Kumil: No. Except you.

    (Human Male)
    ---Ethan: Hey! Did you see a really sketchy-looking guy pass through here?
    ---Human Male: Hmm, if you mean that very rude thug, you just barely missed him. He was headed towards the viewing plaza.
    ---Ethan: Thanks!
    ---(Again)
    ---Human Male: Did you find that thug you were looking for?

    (Fisul Godes)
    ---Ethan: Did you see a suspicious-looking guy come through here?
    ---Mr. Godes: Well, I was just watching the ceremony...
    ---Ethan: Why don't you do your job and guard us? You're supposed to be a Guardian, aren't you?
    ---Mr. Godes: What's your problem?

    Access Corridor B-1
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    (Swindler)
    ---Swindler: That shady-looking guy? He just passed through here.
    ---Ethan: Really? Thanks!

    (Qurio Medoc)
    ---Ethan: The plaza is this way, isn't it?
    ---Mr. Medoc: Sorry, but I just got here. I've got no idea where I am or where I'm going!

    (Rol Medoc)
    ---Ethan: to get to the viewing plaza, I just go straight, right?
    ---Rol: I just got here from Parum so I really don't know.
    ---Ethan: Okay, thanks anyway!

    (Exit hall)

    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan catches up with No Vol and slams into him)
    ---Ethan: Ah! Gotcha!
    ---No Vol: Huh? You again?! I thought I told you to get lost!
    ---Ethan: Now you give me back my sister's card!
    (A voice calls out offscreen)
    ---Hiru Vol: Hey, buddy! You got a problem with my brother?
    (Hiru Vol and Do Vol come walking up)
    ---No Vol: Oh, Hiru! Man, this guy won't get off my case!
    ---Ethan: Because you stole my sister's card!
    ---Hiru Vol: Now, now, now. Just relax, boy. We're the Vol brother, okay? I'm sure you've heard of us. So why don't you just go back to the hole you came from? Unless you want a piece of me. Understand, chump?
    ---Ethan: And if I don't?
    ---Hiru Vol: If you don't?!
    ---Hiru, Do, & No Vol: Heh heh heh
    ---Hiru Vol: I guess this punk hasn't heard of us after all! Now... we'll make sure you never forget us!
    (Hiru Vol takes a swing at Ethan. Ethan ducks and jabs Hiru Vol in the eye)
    ---Hiru Vol: Uunh! I guess you're a little tougher than you look after all.
    (Lumia entes the scene from a hallway)
    ---Lumia: Ethan!
    ---Ethan: Lumia, you idiot! Get out of here!
    ---Lumia: Who are you calling an idiot?
    ---Hiru Vol: Wha?! Brothers! Grab her!
    ---Do Vol: G-got it!
    ---Ethan: Lumia, run! Run!
    (Do Vol chases Lumia down, grabs her, and begins dragging her back to the group)
    ---Lumia: Aaaah! Lemme go, you jerk! Let me go!!
    ---Hiru Vol: Well now. We wouldn't want your little sister to get hurt, would we?
    ---Ethan: Damn you...
    (No Vol grabs Ethan's arms from behind)
    ---Hiru Vol: Now this is more like it!
    (Hiru Vol punches Ethan in the stomach)
    ---Lumia: E-Ethan!!! You're cowards!
    ---Hiru Vol: Whatever, girlie...(turns to Ethan) So where's that tough guy attitude now, eh?
    (Ethan punts Hiru Vol between the legs, and then heat butts No Vol who releases him)
    ---Ethan: Lumia, duck!
    (Ethan steps off of Hiru Vol's back and delivers a roundhouse to Do Vol's face)
    ---Ethan: Lumia, are you all right?
    ---Lumia: Yeah! Thanks.
    ---Hiru Vol: Screw this. Now you're gonna pay!
    (Hiru Vol then pulls a photon knife and advances toward Ethan)
    ---Lumia: Ethan!
    ---Ethan: Don't worry. Just stay close.
    ---Voice: Hey! What's going on here?
    (Everyone turns to look, and Leogini S. Berafort is standing behind them)
    ---No Vol: Damn... It's a Guardian.
    ---Hiru Vol: Looks like you got lucky this time. Let's go!
    (Trio exits, with Do Vol lagging behind idiotically mumbling)
    ---Ethan: Hey! hey, Come back here.
    ---Leo: Huh, I'm not surprised. Most of these low lifes don't have the belly for a real fight. Are you two all right?
    ---Lumia: Thank you, mister. You rescued us.
    ---Ethan: Yeah, thanks for getting in the way.
    ---Leo: What?
    ---Lumia: Ethan! How could you say that? We could've been in real trouble!
    ---Ethan: I could've handled those guys just fine by myself.
    ---Leo: Oooh! Sounds like you're quite the tough guy!
    ---Ethan: Wanna find out?
    ---Lumia: Ethan! Stop being stupid! I'm so sorry! I don't know what's gotten into him! Come on! We're going to be late for the ceremony!
    (Lumia tugs Ethan way by the arm as he stares hatefully at Leo)
    (End Cutscene)

    (Scene: Ethan, Lumia)
    ---Lumia: Ethan! Why do you always get like this when you see a Guardian?
    ---Ethan: Whatever... Everything's okay now, right? We're here to see the ceremony, so let's go see it.
    (Ethan exits. Lumia shrugs in confusion)
    ---Lumia: Wait for me!
    (Lumia exits)
    (End Scene)

    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan and Lumia enter a crowded viewing plaza filled with screaming fans. They cheer louder as the Divine Maiden takes the stage)
    ---Ethan: Huh? That girl...!
    ---Lumia: What? Mirei? She's the Divine Maiden. Do you know her?
    ---Ethan: Divine Maiden? Really.
    ---Lumia: Yes, silly. She's part of the Gurhal Faith, the symbol of the Communion! They say that she can see everything.
    ---Ethan: Hmm. Who wouldn've known?
    ---Lumia: Maiden! Maiden!! Aaaah! Maiden!!! Over here! Over here!
    (Ethan chuckles)
    ---Divine Maiden: I pray that the Holy Light may touch you all, and bathe you in it's warmth!
    (The Maiden enters a meditation like state and sees a vision of a far off star-like phenomena spewing blue streaks of light toward the colony)
    ---Divine Maiden: What? What is this...?
    (She gasps in horror as the realizes the vision's meaning, just as the first of the SEED begin tearing through the Alliance Military's fleet. A ship directly behind her explodes into flames)
    ---Ethan: What was that?!
    ---Divine Maiden: Everyone, listen1 You must leave this place now!
    ---Lumia: Ethan, we've got to get out of here!
    (Lumia begins tugging Ethan's arm, leading him away)
    ---Ethan: Yeah, I'm coming!
    (End Cutscene)

    Linear Line Corridor
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    (Scene: Ethan, Leo, Lumia)
    (Crowds of people rush through the ruined hallway in a panic, Leo tries to direct them where to go)
    ---Leo: Everyone calm down. you're going to be fine.Move quickly now. this way.
    (Ethan & Lumia enter and approach Leo)
    ---Ethan: Hey, you're that guy!
    ---Lumia: I apologize for my brother's behavior before.
    ---Leo: There's no time to worry about civilities now. Hurry up and get with the others!
    ---Ethan: Why is it that Guardians think they can tell everyone else what to do? We're going this way. Let's go Lumia!
    ---Leo: Huh? Hey!
    (Lumia bows to Leo)
    ---Lumia: I'm so sorry! Ethan, wait!
    (Lumia runs off after him)
    (End Scene)

    (Try to exit back to the Viewing Plaza)
    ---Ethan: This isn't the right way!

    (Proceed through Linear Line corridor)

    Linear Line Platform
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    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan and Lumia enter the Linear Line platform and find it deserted)
    ---Ethan: It looks like everyone's been evacuated.
    ---Lumia: That way's blocked off by rubble.
    ---Ethan: I guess we've got a long walk ahead of us...
    (A rumbling noise)
    ---Ethan: Huh?!
    (The rumbling gets louder and debris begins falling from the ceiling)
    ---Ethan: Lumia! Get over here!
    ---Lumia: I-I can't... I'm too scared!
    (Rubble falls, separating them)
    ---Lumia: Aaaah!
    ---Ethan: No! Ugh! Lumia!
    (Ethan stands and inspects the rubble, looking for a way through)
    ---Ethan: Uh... Lumia!!!
    ---Lumia: Ethan...
    ---Ethan: Lumia! Are you alright?!
    ---Lumia: Yeah... I think so. But, there's so much rubble, I can't see you.
    ---Ethan: It's okay. I'll go get help! You stay put. Understand?
    ---Lumia: Okay, I'll wait here. Just hurry!
    (Ethan turns and exits to Linear Line corridor)
    (End Cutscene)

    ---Ethan (thinking): Damn! Looks like my airboard got busted in all the commotion. Guess I gotta travel on foot.

    (Approach the rubble)
    ---Ethan: Lumia! Are you all right?
    ---Lumia: Ethan! I'm okay, I think... But I don't think I can get myself out of here!
    ---Ethan: Don't worry, I'll go get help.
    ---Lumia: Okay. Please hurry, Ethan!

    (Exit Area)

    Linear Line Corridor A-1
    ----------------------------------
    ---Ethan: Geez, what a mess. I guess everyone's been evacuated.

    (Approach man crushed by rubble)
    ---Ethan: ... I've got to save Lumia!

    (Medic)
    ---Medic (Talking to accident victim): Keep it together! I'm here to help now.
    ---Ethan: (He's gonna to have his hands full here!)

    (Talk to wounded man - no response)
    ---Ethan: ...!! What am I supposed to do?

    Corridor B-1
    -----------------
    ---Ethan: I guess everyone has been evacuated.

    (As Ethan walks further into the corridor another rumbling is heard)

    ---Ethan: Wha-!? Was that another collapse? I hope you're safe, Lumia!

    (Exit corridor)

    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan spots Leo amid the wreckage and runs up to him)
    ---Leo: Sorry, kid. I'm too busy to chat right now. You better get to a shelter...
    ---Ethan: My sister... She's trapped behind some rubble. You gotta help me now!
    ---Leo: Calm down. I'll call headquarters.
    (Leo comms HQ)
    ---Leo: Headquarters, this is Leo... I've got a female civilian trapped behind debris. Requesting help.
    ---HQ: Roger. We'll dispatch assistance as soon as possible.
    ---Leo: Got it!
    (Leo turns back to Ethan)
    ---Leo: You see, kid. Help's on the way.
    ---Ethan: Thanks... I really mean it.
    ---Leo: S'alright. Don't sweat it.
    ---Ethan: Ok. It's just that no one was around and I didn't know what I was going to do.
    ---Leo: Hey. What's happened here? Where's that bravado I saw earlier?
    ---Ethan: Huh? What do you mean?
    ---Leo: Hey hey, no harm meant. Just glad you didn't do anything rash this time.
    ---Ethan: What's wrong with believing in yourself?
    ---Leo: Nothing, as long as you know when to ask for help. Listen, you gotta understand you can't do everything by yourself. If you don't learn that now, it'll come back to bite you someday.
    ---Ethan: To be honest with you... I don't know what you're talking about.
    ---Leo: Well, you'll understand someday, kid.
    (Rubble falls in front of them and a SEED Blewme form crashes down through the ceiling)
    ---Ethan: Huh? What is that?!
    ---Leo: Something's coming out of it! Be careful!
    (A SEED-Vance appears from out of the Blewme)
    ---Leo: Damn!
    (Leo pulls his gun, but it's knocked from his hand and he is slammed to the floor.)
    ---Ethan: Hey! Hey!! On no! Are you okay?!
    (Seeing no response from Leo, Ethan reaches for Leo's gun)
    ---Ethan: Just going to borrow this real quick!
    (The SEED form strikes at Ethan, but he rolls and fires at the SEED form, killing it)
    ---Ethan: I... I got it... What... is it?
    (Ethan then remembers Leo laying injured and rushes to his side)
    ---Ethan: Hey, Hey, you alright?! Where are you hurt?
    ---Leo: I-I can't move. I'm paralyzed...
    ---Ethan: What should I do?
    ---Leo: Help is coming soon... You might not be able to wait... Your sister could be in trouble.Take my weapon and go protect your sister!
    ---Ethan: Alright. I will.
    (End Cutscene)

    (Scene: Ethan, Leo)
    ---Leo: The name's Leogini Santosa Berafort. My friends call me Leo. And you are?
    ---Ethan: Ethan. Ethan Waber.
    ---Leo: Waber! Really?
    ---Ethan: Yeah. So?
    ---Leo: No. Never mind... Ethan. For starters, take this.
    (Recieved Comm Terminal Message)
    ---Leo: As long as you hold on to that, we can stay in contact. I'll be able to support you through the terminal, so pay close attention.
    ---Ethan: All right. I'm not big on following order from Guardians, but... For Lumia's sake, I'll do what you say.
    ---Leo: Please do. Look here. Because of that creature, you can't go down the same corridor as before.
    ---Ethan: That's true.
    ---Leo: Keep moving down this corridor until you find another platform on the Linear Line, then go up the line until you reach the platform where your sister is trapped. Make your way there first. As soon as I can meet up with the relief forces I'll catch up with you.
    ---Ethan: All right.
    ---Leo: Also, take this.
    (Recieved Guardians Equipment)
    ---Leo: You might be attacked again. If that happens, don't forget your weapon, armor, and photon arts. I'll instruct you further later on. Don't get yourself into anything you can't handle kid.
    ---Ethan: I got it. Don't overdo it yourself, pops.
    (End Scene)

    (Talk to Leo again)
    ---Leo: Have you equipped yourself yet? Hurry up, Ethan. Your sister is waiting.

    (Exit area)

    Access Corridor B-2
    -----------------------------
    (Scene: Ethan, Leo)
    (Ethan stops as a call comes in over the Comm)
    ---Leo: Ethan, can you hear me?
    ---Ethan: Yeah. I hear you loud and clear.
    ---Leo: All right, then just keep heading down that passage.
    ---Ethan: Roger that.
    ---Leo: It shouldn't be too far to the next platform.
    (As Ethan looks around he notices strange life forms)
    ---Ethan: Hold on a second!
    ---Leo: What's going on?
    ---Ethan: There are these... things. They're uh... Well...
    ---Leo: What? What is it?
    ---Ethan: They're... some sort of life form... I've never seen before. What the heck are they?
    ---Leo: Okay, focus on what's important now. Don't worry about what they are, just get past them. I'll guide you from here, so do exactly what I say.
    ---Ethan: All right.
    (End Scene)

    (Ethan proceeds to destroy the creatures)

    (Scene: Ethan, Leo)
    (After defeating the creatures, Ethan comms Leo)
    ---Ethan: Okay! It looks like I've got things under control.
    ---Leo: Great. You seem to have a keen sense for these things. Check out the containers in the the northeast corner of that block.Break them open and look inside.They should be stocked with emergency supplies.
    (End Scene)

    (Ethan breaks the containers)

    (Scene)
    ---Ethan: Hm. What's this?
    (Recieve Sword)
    ---Leo: A sword is a two-handed weapon more powerful than a saber. Don't forget to equip it!
    (Weapon Pallet tutorial)
    (End Scene)

    (Exit Corridor)

    Access Corridor B-3
    ------------------------------
    (Fight your way through B-3)

    (Scene: Ethan, Leo)
    ---Ethan: *pant* *pant*
    (Ethan's comm beeps)
    ---Leo: Ethan, are you all right?
    ---Ethan: This is getting tough!
    ---Leo: I understand you're worried about your sister, but don't overdo it. If you use a monomate you can recover some of your health.
    (Item Pallet Tutorial)
    (End Scene)

    (Exit Corridor)

    Access Corridor C-1
    -----------------------------
    (Scene: Ethan, No Vol, Do Vol)
    (Ethan enters corridor and sees No & Do Vol standing together)
    ---Do Vol: W-What are we gonna do?
    ---No Vol: Calm down! I need to think.
    ---Do Vol: B-But we...
    ---Ethan: Huh? What are you two doing here!?
    ---No Vol: It's that kid from before! Well, I guess ya didn't make it out in time either, eh?
    ---Ethan: Something like that. Look, I guess we never finished what we started back there...but I don't have time right now for the likes of you. Later!
    ---No Vol: Hey, hold up! Just a second there. We were, uh, wondering...Can you help us out a little here?
    ---Do Vol: Yeah! We can't find our big brother, Hiru.
    ---Ethan: Huh? You can't be serious? Why do you think I'd help out a couple of punks like you?
    ---No Vol: You're trying to get out too, aren't you? It's kinda risky to be wandering around here all alone. Come on, lets's help each other out!
    ---Do Vol: Yeah, c'mon!
    ---Ethan: ... All right, whatever.
    ---No Vol: Great, great! I'm the middle Vol brother, No Vol.
    ---Do Vol: I'm the third brother, Do Vol.T-Thanks for offering to help!
    (Ethan calls Leo over the comm)
    ---Ethan: You get all that, Leo?
    ---Leo: Roger that, Ethan. The comm terminal should have some spares. Lend them to those two. I'll manage operations between the three of you from here.
    ---Ethan: Thanks!
    (No and Do Vol join your party)
    (End Scene)

    ---No Vol: All Right! Lets do this!
    ---Do Vol: Yeah! Do this!
    ---Ethan: Those two sure got a lot of spirit...

    (Scene: Ethan, Leo, No Vol, Do Vol)
    (Fight your way to the locked door. Leo comms Ethan)
    ---Leo: All right. From there, go forward.
    ---Ethan: Huh? If we're going forward, we'll need to find a way to unlock this door first.
    ---Leo: What? Doors in that area are supposed to open automatically in the case of an emergency. Oh. Wait a minute. I think I understand why. A little while ago I received a report from the troops who are making their way there. With all those creatures running around, it looks like the security system has been compromised.
    ---Ethan: So then what are supposed to do?
    ---Leo: Calm down, Ethan. The security system has the ability to repair itself to a certain extent... But since the system's been under abnormal stress, you'll need an info Key. If you access that console in front of the door, it will tell you what info Key you need. Try to eliminate the creature that's causing all the disorder and you should receive the Info Key.
    ---Ethan: All right, I can do this. I think. I'm gonna need your guys' help.
    (End Scene)
    ---No Vol: I guess there's no way around it.
    ---Do Vol: We got your back.
    ---Ethan: (thinking) Well, it's for your guys' sake as much as it is mine!

    (Try to exit back to the previous area)
    ---No Vol: Hey! Try to remember which way we're supposed to go!
    ---Do Vol: Why're you trying to go back?
    ---Ethan: Geez, sorry!

    (Trial Start)
    (Ethan and the Vol Brothers fight from corridor C-2 to the Linear Line Platform)

    Linear Line Platform
    -----------------------------
    (Try to exit back to Corridor C-1)
    ---Ethan: I've got to get to the Linear Line platform to help Lumia.

    (Approach Hiru Vol at the bottom of the platform)
    (Trial end)

    (Scene: Ethan, Vol Brothers)
    ---Do Vol: B-Brother!
    ---Hiru Vol: Dol!? Is that you?
    ---No Vol: Hiru! We've been looking all over for you!
    ---Hiru Vol: You're here, too, No? Are you guys all right?
    ---Do Vol: W-We're fine. How about you, Brother?
    ---No Vol: We've been so worried!
    ---Hiru Vol: Hey, don't worry about it! I can take care of myself against a couple of measly monsters.
    (Ethan calls Leo over the comm)
    ---Ethan: Hey Leo, it looks like they're taken care of on this end.
    ---Leo: Perfect timing. The relief forces have just arrived. I'm on my way to meet up with you now.
    ---Ethan: All right.
    (End Call)
    ---Ethan: Hey!
    ---Hiru Vol: Huh?
    ---Ethan: Looks like the GUARDIANS relief forces are on their way. If you go back the way we came you'll probably be picked up by them. I've got to go find my sister, so I'm gonna head out now. Later.
    ---Hiru Vol: Hey you! Wait up!
    ---Ethan: What now? make it quick! I'm in a hurry.
    ---Hiru Vol: You did a pretty good job of taking care of my brothers. I guess I should thank you. So... well...
    ---No Vol: You really helped us out of a tight spot!
    ---Do Vol: Yeah, thanks.
    ---Ethan: Okay...
    ---Ethan (thinking): (This is kind of weird.)
    ---Hiru Vol: All right. So we're all squared now. Back to normal. Don't think this changes anything between us. Next time we run into you, it's not like we're gonna be pals or anything.
    ---Ethan: Boo hoo. I'm heartbroken. No, really.
    (Vol Brothers exit)
    (End Scene)

    (Continues down the Linear Line rail)

    (Scene: Ethan, Young Woman)
    ---Voice from the rubble: H-Hello?
    ---Ethan: Huh?
    ---Voice: Is... Is someone out there?
    ---Ethan: Is someone stuck under there?
    ---Voice: Thank goodness! There's somebody out there! I can't move! Please help me!
    ---Ethan: All right, give me a sec. Hm. I guess I'm gonna have to get rid of all that debris.
    (Ethan comms Leo)
    ---Ethan: Hey Leo, you go any ideas?
    ---Leo: Let me think...Is there a set of goggles in that equiptment I gave you? I think there should be.
    ---Ethan: Huh? I don't remember any goggles.
    ---Leo: Look harder.
    ---Ethan: Uh... Here they are! I must have missed them before.
    (Receive Goggles)
    (Goggle Tutorial)
    ---Leo: Use the goggles to see which parts of the debris can be safely moved. Then use your weapon to break up those pieces and get that person out of there!
    (Ethan inspects the rubble with the goggles and destroys it)
    ---Young woman: Thank you so much! You're with the GUARDIANS, aren't you?
    ---Ethan: Me? Well I...
    ---Young Woman: Just as I thought! you can always rely on the GUARDIANS! The GUARDIANS are truly the salvation of our colony... No, the salvation of every single person in the Gurhal System!
    ---Ethan: Ah, okay. Uh... if you wait here, the relief forces should meet up with you.
    ---Young Woman: Okay. Thank you so much! I owe you my life. There are probably others that need saving, so good luck!
    (Young woman exits. Ethan comms Leo)
    ---Ethan: ... Did you hear that, Leo? I'm no Guardian. I don't deserve her praise.
    ---Leo: It sounds like her gratitude went right where it should have. You saved her. That's the truth.
    ---Ethan: I guess... ...
    ---Leo: What's the matter, Ethan?
    ---Ethan: Nothing. I mean, I was just thinking about all the people we helped. The Vol brothers, that girl... It's just, I think it was a good thing, that's all.
    ---Leo: Is that a revelation?
    ---Ethan: Well, before... I think I was... mistaken.
    ---Leo: About what?
    ---Ethan: My father was a Guardian. When I was a little boy, he died in an accident during a GUARDIANS mission. He was trying to save a stranger's life. It was so hard on mom, making ends meet alone. And then my mother died soon after having Lumia. The two of us had to go live with our uncle.
    ---Leo: I see.
    ---Ethan: So ever since I was little, I've always disliked the GUARDIANS. I mean... They took away everything we had. I really hated them for that.
    ---Leo: That's not unheard of. We work alongside danger everyday. Sometimes lives are lost in the process of carrying out our duties. But you know, I've never considered leaving the GUARDIANS. Not once. I'm proud of the work we do. And I'm sure your father felt the same way. And surely your mother was also proud of the work your father did.
    ---Ethan: Yeah, I guess that's probably true. ... There's no time for this! I've got to find Lumia, and soon! That line's gotta be around here... somewhere.
    (End Scene)

    (Exit to second Linear Line platform)

    Linear Line Platform
    -----------------------------
    ---Ethan: This is... There's no mistaking it. This is the platform by the viewing plaza!

    (Proceed to the end of the platform)

    (Scene: Ethan, Lumia)
    (Ethan rushes up the rubble where Lumia is trapped)
    ---Ethan: Lumia! Lumia! Are you hurt?
    ---Lumia: Ethan? No, I'm okay.
    ---Ethan: The GUARDIANS relief forces are on their way, so hold tight!
    ---Lumia: The GUARDIANS? But you hate the GUARDIANS!
    ---Ethan: No, it's okay. I think I may have been wrong about them.
    ---Ethan: !?
    (The room begins rumbling, and a SEED-Vance appears)
    (End Scene)

    (Trial Start)
    ---Lumia: What is it? What's happening?
    ---Ethan: It's all right, Lumia!
    ---Ethan (shouting): Get as far back as you can!
    (Defeat the Seed-Vance)
    (Trial End)

    (Cutscene)
    (Leo enters the corridor followed by two other Guardians)
    ---Leo: Hey! You all right there?
    ---Ethan: Yeah.
    ---Leo: Sorry it took so long. Is your sister okay?
    ---Ethan: Yeah, she's safe.
    ---Leo: I meant to come earlier, but we were shorthanded everywhere. Guys, get working on that rubble, okay?
    ---Guardians: Yes Sir/Right away!
    (The Guardians rush off to free Lumia. Leo looks over at the dead SEED form)
    ---Leo: So... you did this?
    ---Ethan: Yeah...
    ---Leo: Alright.. Not too bad, kid. Tell me... ever thought about becoming a Guardian?
    ---Ethan: Huh?! Well... it could be interesting. I'll think about it.
    (Camera changes to the Guardian members helping Lumia out of the rubble)
    ---Guardians: This way/Watch your step.
    ---Lumia: Ethan!
    ---Ethan: Lumia!
    (Ethan and Lumia rush to one another and embrace)
    ---Ethan: I'm so glad you're okay...
    ---Lumia: I knew you'd save me... I just knew it.
    (End Cutscene)

    (Cutscene)
    (A news report broadcast showing images of destruction across the Gurhal system)
    ---Reporter: The strange meteorites that have plauged the first and third planets Parum and Moatoob have finally reached the second planet Neudaiz early this morning with truly horrifying results. The meteors left a path of destruction in their wake, contaminating the earth wherever they struck.The local fauna has grown increasingly hostile, along with reports of new and unknown lifeforms. Due to the shape of the meteorites, and emerging unidentified life forms from within, authorities have begun calling these objects, SEEDS. The SEED destruction which started at the Alliance Centennial Ceremony has reached astronomical proportions. A galaxy-wide state of emergency has been declared.The planetary governments have mobilized the Alliance Military Force for relief efforts. Stability is the AMF's first priority, in order to prevent any further casualties. Obel Dallgun, who leads the GUARDIANS, has issued a statement. Presented here is a portion of his speech. But could it be too late? Experts are predicting another wave of SEED attacks soon. Reporting live from the Guardians Colony.
    (End Cutscene)

    (Cutscene)
    (Ethan walks up to the stairs leading to the Guardian Headquarters in Clyez city. He looks at the building hesitantly for a moment, then enters)
    (End Cutscene)

    (Ending Cinema)

    Chapter 2 Preview
    --------------------------
    ---Narrator: Ethan begins his Guardian training on the planet Parum. Who's the mysterious partner that he is to be paired with? Who are the strange mother and child that they meet on Parum, a planet controlled by CASTs? Next time on Phantasy Star Universe: Typical Lives.

    Chapter 2 Alternate Preview
    -----------------------------------------
    ---Ethan: My name is Ethan Waber, and today I became a Guardian.
    ---Leo: All due to my efforts of course.
    ---Ethan: Ahhh... Old man!
    ---Leo: Old man? How old do you think I am?
    ---Ethan: So then what should I call you?
    ---Leo: You may call me, Master Leo!
    ---Ethan: What?! Are you nuts old man?
    ---Leo: I told you not to call me that.
    ---Lumia: Oh mister! Thank you for saving me earlier.
    ---Leo: Ah, yes, well.. I'm just glad you weren't hurt.
    ---Lumia: Yeah! And it's all thanks to you grandpa! Thanks again!
    ---Leo: Heh, bye now. Uh.. wait... what did she just call me?
    ---Ethan: See, you're a nice sort of old man.
    ---Leo: I told you NOT to call me that.
    ---Ethan: No problem grandpa. Next time: Phantasy Star Universe, Typical Lives. Get ready for some excitement. Well, except for you old man. heh heh
    ---Leo: Argh... I'm NOT an old man!!

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    thanks for the story write out. imo psu's story is so boring that it's actually more fun to read it than it is to play. i see alot of hard work and detail went in to this. hope to see more.

    i wonder if it would be easier to record the in-game and post it like a movie as compared to writing it all out.

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