How is this comic so far?

[JenJen902]

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[JenJen902]

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[Sgt_Shligger]

Well, to set it apart from other comics (or make it easier and/or more "believable" to the reader) I'd recommend cropping the images. Basically, removing unnecessary "chunks" such as the health/level bar, the room identifier in the lower right, and some empty space on the far left and/or right (or even top and bottom) sides.