The life of General slash (Web comic)

[JenJen902]

This is our first episode and i thought we did a pretty good job.. Btw im the guy were both girls and one of us had to do it.. Pretty shocking first episode 0_0

Just waking up...

Huh?! Who are you!

Aww i thought my head was hurting before!

Didnt i just say that?

Get on with it! your my what!

LIES!
Jerk.. I don’t even know why im at the hospital and im kicked out

0_0 But seriously you’re a newman!

Geez 0.0 testy

Business??


Who am i? What is my girlfriends name? What is her "Business"? Why is my hair white!!
These questions will all be answered..
IN THE NEXT EPISODE!

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: JenJen902 on 2007-11-12 16:54 ]</font>

[JenJen902]

So tell me how you guys like it when you see it ^_^

[Sgt_Shligger]

Cool your jets there cowgirl, fanworks isn't flooded with magical reply bots! It's a ghost town up here ;(

Not enough of the comic has been shown so far for me to make a fair judgment, or get particularly interested. The thing is, screen shot comics are relatively common in this forum so there needs to be something to give it panache, something to set it apart from the rest.

[JenJen902]

Im not like saying comment it now! im losing my patience i said Comment it when ya see it and even threw a happy face in and give us a break its our first comic

[JenJen902]

Also its more work then Just screenshots.. The photoshop wont work atm so .. its just a start off plus i just looked at all the other comics and i see Everything i see in this comic Noxias had lvl bar and you everything so did Dejas so..

[Sgt_Shligger]

Just because some comics have certain qualities doesn't make the "good." Photoshop doesn't improve plot.

[Sord]

while it's kind of irrelevant, use your edit button instead of the double posting

[JenJen902]

if i made it like this would you shutup?

[Sgt_Shligger]

No it would not. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm trying to be helpful. It admittedly looks better but it doesn't make the comic entertaining. I'd advise planning out the comic before you just go posting chapters all willy-nilly. And also, if I recall. . .

On 2007-11-12 16:56, JenJen902 wrote:
So tell me how you guys like it when you see it ^_^

I told you what I think of it ;o

[VanHalen]

I think the problem is there isn't much storyline in the first chapter to keep me interested in what the "mysterious business" is. Also when and why did the protagonist if they are protagonist get to Neudaiz so fast?