EDIT: Removed reply to Mimo to end this discussion.
You wanted some C&C?
I am not gonna comment on the anatomy, cause I am still struggling with that myself and I don't really see anything that bothers me.
1. The lines look a bit weird at some places. I can see you used some tools for the straight lines. I sometimes use tools for straight lines, but I only use it on geometric objects like boxes or walls. Using straight lines on characters can make things look a bit stiff.
2. Some other lines look a bit wobbly. I am aware that most people have a hard time creating fluent lines using a tablet. The secret behind my clean linework is quite simple (no I don't have magic hand, yes they also shack a lot): time. I spend lots of time (you an see a vid here:) I won't recommend you my method for clean lines, cause it's extremely boring. Maybe other artists here have more efficient methods. I also heard somewhere that you should draw by moving your arm and not your wrist, maybe that might do the trick for you.Spoiler!
3. Your colors are on the brighter side of the spectrum. This is probably because you picked the colors on a white background. The big problem of that, is that you don't have much room for lighting and contrast adjustments. What works for me: Start your picture with a grey background (in the middle of black and white) and start picking you colors from there. The results will be much better
4. The section ID's look like they were pasted into the picture. I think it still would look better if you'd draw them by hand (even if the result is less precise)
5. What Sayara said: I also have been hanging out on these board for a LONG time (longer then my join date.. *double accounts mumble mumble..*) and have seen most of your works. Throughout the years the way you draw and color haven't changed much (from what I have seen). I have changed my ways of drawing tons of times and it really helped me move on to a next level. If you like working with your tablet, give digital painting a try. After watching most of the video's from following youtube channel, I really got into digital painting and it was a big breath of fresh air for me: http://www.youtube.com/user/FZDSCHOO...26/1McYZX6KScg
You can also try the other thing Sayara mentioned.
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