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    Mao Mao Adventures:

    CHAPTER 1:
    Suzuka Meets Jessica

    Planet Ragol, caves area:
    The horrible screeching of a grass assassin echoed through the caves as Suzuka buried her saber in the beast. She was hot, tired, and angry. She had been searching around for about two hours now. The sad thing is that she wasn't sure just what she was actually searching for. She had accepted a mission to find a certain type of rock for the head scientist at the lab. The job offered 10,000 mesetas, so she hastily agreed to do the job. She was now regretting it. She probably had a better chance of finding a needle in a hay stack! If she didn't need the money so badly, she'd be at home right now watching her favorite TV shows.
    "AGH! This is hopeless!" Suzuka screamed.
    "Is hopeless Mao Mao!? Someone mocked Suzuka.
    "What the? Who's there" Sazuka had assumed that she was alone, but she was wrong.
    "Who's...MAO!" The voice said.
    Because the caves made the voice echo, Suzuka couldn't place were it was coming from, but she was gonna find whomever it was one way or another.
    "Where are you hiding" Suzuka asked, this time she listen as best she could.
    This time, the voice made Suzuka jump because it came from directly behind her, "MAO? Hide...ing" the voice said.
    Suzuka turned around quickly, her saber at the ready, but when she turned, some kind of fuzzy creature jumped on her face, causing her to drop the weapon and fall to the floor. The struggle didn't last to long because the creature jumped off and ran into the shadows behind an unopened box.
    Using her lightning quick reflexes, Suzuka pulled out a photon gun and fired three rounds at the fleeing intruder. Two shots hit the wall, and the third hit the creature before it made it behind the box.
    "I've got you now," Suzuka said to herself as she closed in on the box, and the cornered creature.
    The box suddenly began to move as Suzuka neared it. Before she knew it, the box was flying in her direction at a dangerous speed! Suzuka rolled under the box and aimed in the general direction of where the creature should have been, but all she got for her troubles was a weak foie blast to her face.
    "MAO!" The creature yelled
    Barely fazed by the previous weak spell, Suzuka held her aim on the creature. She could now see just exactly what it was. It was some kind of cat-like humanoid creature. It didn't have any clothes on, but it was covered with golden brown fur. Its hands and feet were more like paws like a cats, and were big. It was easy to tell now that it was female. Its hair was pitch black, and was pulled into two pig-tails.
    "Is that a monster or someone's pet?" Suzuka wondered. "I know! I'll capture it and bring it back to Pioneer 2! I'm pretty sure it belongs to someone up there, and I know they'll post a reward for its retrieval! This mission won't be a total loss."
    Suzuka put her gun away and slowly walked towards the animal. "Don't worry, I'm not gonna hurt you, just be a good girl and come over here I'll take you back to whoever owns you."
    "Maoooo?" The animal looked as if it was going to cooperate, but it suddenly got angry. "MAO-MAO!" it yelled ferociously throwing a strangely odd-looking rock rock at Suzuka.
    Suzuka caught the rock and looked down at it. "YES!" She screamed. "This is it! Thanks ya little fur-ball, now come here!"
    Suzuka lunged at the animal. Surprisingly, the cat like animal jumped at Suzuka, its arms outstretched as if it was going to...hug her?
    The two hit each other, and to Suzuka?s surprise the little cat-girl was in fact hugging her. Although she would never admit it to anyone, the hug was warm and comforting. Suzuka stood up and began to make her way out the cave the way she came. The little cat-girl seemed to not care. It just made it that much easier for the Hunter.
    "Two missions, one stone" Suzuka thought to herself. "Now what am I going to do with this...thing?"
    In the time it took Suzuka to walk to the transporter, the cat-girl had fallen asleep, mumbling the first word Suzuka could understand.
    "...oreo..."

    HOPED YA LIKED IT! STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT EPISODE!



    <font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: JessicaMM on 2002-11-15 13:41 ]</font>

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    Fun story! ^_^ Though one thing: I suggest typing out the chapters in a simple text editor, such as Notepad. It should get rid of those ?s in place of quotation marks.

    Write more soon.

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    Cute story! Heh, yeah, I had that problem, too. Stupid MSWord's AutoFormat. Ah well.

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    I still don't know what a Mao Mao is. =( They sound decent 'cause they like Oreos.

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    =^_^= good start Jessica. I've almost finished the 1st chap of my fan fic so i hope Jessica is ready for more battle. I dun think I'm going to do the VR battle one. (I don't think much of a story if any can be in a strickly battle fan fic) anyway keep it up, I want to know what the heck is a Mao Mao.(i'm still not too sure)

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    heh, that seems like a good start, but a little bit misterious, 'cause we still dont know where this little cat-girl will lead the character. give us more soon

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    CHAPTER 2:
    Welcome to Pioneer 2
    Jessica woke up to the sound of strange voices, one of which sounded familiar. She kept her eyes closed just in case.
    "Regina, what is that thing?" Jessica recognized that voice. It belonged to the person she met in the caves.
    "How am I supposed to know what it is? You're the one that found it. Why don't you look it up in a dictionary?" Jessica didn't recognize that voice.
    "It's a Mao-Mao," a third voice said.
    "MAO MAO!" Jessica yelled happily as she jumped up, startling the three strangers looking down at her. One was a Fonewearl, one was the Hunewearl from earlier, and the other was a Ramarl.
    The Hunewearl had shoulder length red hair, purple eyes, one was covered with an eye patch. She wore strange looking clothes that were black and red. The Fonewearl was the tallest of the three. She had long purple hair, hazel eyes, and her clothes were weird too. She wore a short black skirt and matching shirt with a jester cap. The Ramarl was also dressed strangely (clothes in general are weird to a Mao-Mao). She was wearing black and red BDU's. Her eyes were yellow, and her hair was black. All three were very pretty.
    "Nadia, what is a Mao-Mao?" Suzuka asked the Ramarl.
    "I read about them once...hold on, let me find the book," Nadia said already heading to another room to find the book.
    The Fonewearl was content on trying to pet Jessica. "It's cute Suzuka! Can we keep it?!"
    "NO REGINA WE CANNOT KEEP IT!" Suzuka screamed. "There is no way we can afford another person living here, not even with the 10,000 mesetas I just made. Don't forget that I have to pay off a 7,860 meseta debt because of your carelessness."
    "Oh come on Suzie...it's so cute!" Regina held her arms out to hug Jessica, and to her surprise the little cat-like creature jumped up and hugged her. "Awww, you're so cute and soft! Like a real life plushie!" The little furry Mao-Mao was only about 3 and a half feet tall and was very light.
    "Mao-Mao! ...SOFT!" Jessica yelled out, still embracing Regina.
    "No means no Regina! Besides, it might belong to somebody. And if you call me Suzie again, you're gonna have a beam saber up you're a-"
    "You're no fun," Regina complained, interrupting Suzuka. "C'mon, let's see if we have any milk left," She said to The Mao-Mao. "The least I can do is feed you since misses mean face won't let me keep you." Regina stuck her tongue out at Suzuka.
    Now that she wasn't laying on the couch, Jessica could see the whole room. It wasn't very big, and didn't have much. There was a couch to sit on, a TV set sitting on top of a basic entertainment system, and a rickety coffee table in between the two. The brown carpeted floor matched the brown walls. The kitchen was in the same room as the living room. It was separated by the floor. The kitchen floor was tiled, not carpeted. All it had were two cabinets, a small fridge, and a small microwave/oven/stove combo. The three girls were obviously not that well off when it came to money.
    Jessica was already beginning to like the tall funny-looking person carrying her. Regina opened the fridge and took out a nearly empty bottle of milk.
    "Do you like milk?" Regina asked Jessica, still using her cutesy voice. The only reaction she got from the Mao-Mao was an expressionless stare. "Perhaps you're hungry? How 'bout some cookies?" Upon hearing the word cookies, the Mao-Mao became excited.
    "OREOS!" Jessica yelled out. "Jessica want OREOS!"
    "Wow! You can talk on your own? I thought you were just copying what we were saying, amazing. So your name is Jessica." Regina put the milk down on top the only counter in the kitchen and reached up into the cabinet to grab some no-named chocolate-chip cookies. "Sorry Jessica, we don't have any Oreos, but we do have chocolate chip cookies."
    "Maooooo." Jessica said sadly.
    "Don't be sad, these chocolate chip cookies may be at a domestic-poor price, but they still taste good!"
    With her free arm, Regina got a cup from the cabinet, and poured milk into it. Jessica just watched, waiting patiently for Regina to offer her a cookie. When she finally did, Jessica bit into the chocolate chip cookie and smiled.
    "Yummy!" Jessica yelled. "Chocolate Chip is good too."
    "Well, I'm glad you like it!" Regina happily announced.
    Nadia rushed back into the room holding a large-sized book, "Okay, here! I found it!" The book was labeled Dr. Osoto's animal classifications. "Let's see...hmmm, he actually had the chance to study a Mao-Mao! It says here that Mao-Mao are found all over the universe. Some say that there is a planet full of Mao-Mao, but it has yet to be found...whoa! Now this is weird. It has never been recorded that a male Mao-Mao was found. Let's see. A Mao-Mao is a race of female cat-like people. They are normally peaceful, but when pushed too far, they can be quite difficult to deal with. The word Mao-Mao is something this strange race always says. Roughly translated it means love. They can talk in any language if they learn it. It is not known if they posses their own language for no one has found this so-called planet of theirs. A Mao-Mao can become a very loyal pet. They love to eat junk-foods especially cookies. They are quick to learn, and can be easily trained to do just about anything." Nadia closed the book, and put it down on the table. "What a fascinating creature"
    "She's not a creature!" Regina said sharply, still hand feeding Jessica. "She has a name you know."
    Nadia rolled her eyes, "Oh? And what's her name?"
    "Her name is Jessica."
    "Mao-Mao!" Jessica added
    "Yeah, Jessica Mao-Mao!"
    "MAO-MAO!" Jessica and Regina said together. The two began to laugh.
    Nadia and Suzuka looked at each other and shrugged, shaking their heads.
    "The immaturity level is a bit much for me," Nadia said. "If anyone needs me, I'll be at the library."
    "Bye-bye misses mean face!" Jessica yelled.
    Nadia turned around and looked at Regina and Jessica. "Ugh. This ship isn't big enough for two Regina's. I feel sorry for whomever you belong to. I doubt they could stand you, which is probably why you were on Ragol anyway."
    "I don't belong to anyone." Jessica said, her voice suddenly losing all of it's cuteness, and sounding very serious. "And I hope you're not implying that I'm annoying because misses Regina seems to like me a whole lot."
    This time, Nadia Suzuka, and Regina all looked at each other, surprised. There was a long moment of silence.
    Suzuka broke the silence finally. "You don't belong to anyone? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME THAT BEFORE!?"
    Jessica smiled. "Cause if I told you, would you have taken me here on this ship?"
    Suzuka had had it, she was now officially mad. "WHAT WERE YOU GONNA DO? EAT ALL OF OUR FOOD AND THEN LEAVE? GET OUTTA HERE YOU LITTLE FREE-LOADER!"
    "Oh c'mon Suzie, that means we can keep her now." Regina said jumping up and down.
    "ARGH! Quit calling me that! I already told you no! We can't afford another person in this apartment!"
    "Suzuka, quit being stingy, maybe she can help us out." Regina argued.
    "STINGY?! You're lucky I let you live here with us! In case you forgot it is your fault that we're in this situation now! If it weren't for your pathetic magic, I'd be in a much nicer apartment, I'd be rich, and I wouldn't have to put up with you everyday! Now you can either get rid of that thing, or you can leave with it!"
    Regina looked at Nadia, then at Suzuka. Tears began to well up in her eyes. "Is...is that what you think about me?" Regina walked to the door, stopped and turned to Suzuka. "If I'd known that I was just a burden to you, I would have left a long time ago!" Regina ran out the apartment, her vision blurred by her tears. She was still holding on to Jessica, hugging her for comfort.
    "...Geeze Suzuka, you should really take some anger-management classes." Nadia suggested.
    "Forget her, we can manage on our own, that's just one less mouth to feed."

    End of chapter 2! I hope ya liked it! Can Regina and Jessica survive on their own? Stay tuned for chapter three!

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    Cute! Can't wait for next chapter! Good job.

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    Damn skippy! stupid Regina! oh well hope things turn out for the best. =^_^=

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    still the mistery factor in the air... i like it, keep it up

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