The Discoverer (Chapter 13: A Single Step)

[biggabertha]

I've seriously considered getting one of those Palm readers just for reading texts and eBooks like this, reading off of my monitor or printing it out (my preferred way) is troublesome/expensive but I'm sure you'll be doing a PDF version of the entire thing, right? If not, I'll sort something out with Pages and see if I can get the whole thing to fit on twenty A4 sheets of paper again...

[McLaughlin]

Great work, as always.

[DizzyDi]

Man I need to lurk Fan Works more. Didn't even know this was up. Big fan of your last work Coffee and I'm sure this one will turn out to be just as great. On its own merits of course.

[Freeze]

Keep em coming.

[EphekZ]

Guess what? I'm finally caught up, I just read, pretty much, the whole thing.
It's really turning out to be as good as I expected it to be. The fact that it's a whole new take and type of story, earns you even more respect.
Can't wait for upcoming chapters =]

[Freshellent]

This...is excellent.

[EphekZ]

Good read as always, it's getting very interesting. So, another week is it?

[McLaughlin]

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

[Freshellent]

Wow. This is a really compelling story. I find myself wondering if more will come of it after this story is completed. In a way I don't want this to end,I just want to see it continue. But because of the world and story you've crafted I think ending it would really send it over the roof. In a very good way.

I hope you don't mind. I've been saving this story in a text document so I can read it in the future,with your permission share it with others as well. Very good,thank you for sharing this.

[McLaughlin]

That was a great chapter.