FanFic: Gun Battle

[KaFKa]

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doors were kinda set up like that...

[Sord]

is the hallway up and down or side to side?

[KaFKa]

up and down

[Sord]

ok, you where seeing it with doors on the end and i was seeing it with doors on the side. But you didn't mention a door on the other side, that makes it confusing and Zale never got behind your main character (i can't spell the name) so it was very confusing.

[Hikosaka]

Enough about hallways already. Nice short fic, KaFKa.

[Sord]

sorry great Hiko you responded, that's rare.



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[KaFKa]

thanks hiko

sorry about the hallway thing...

[ladyjaderiver]

Ooh, it's another spiffy fic! Kinda strange for the main character to die... But nice nonetheless. Noticed a couple spelling errors (okay, one that I can think of off the top of my head), but nothing else wrong with it.

[KaFKa]

yes, fredrique died. but think of it this way: he got some revenge, right?

[ladyjaderiver]

*nod* True. So I guess it's not entirely an unhappy ending. *G* Don't ask. I'm feeling weird.