A free flying Bullet

[Meyfei]

Anyone know, or have some poems? I'm feeling interested in reading something, and nothing I found in google seems to satisfy me.

[Solstis]

Posted as a note on Facebook, which probably means that I don't own it anymore:

I will make a myth of my persona

Textualize the physical

As it were

Add another link to the chain

Indeterminate location, indeterminate sign, indeterminate

Origin is best unknown, best indecisive

The truth is only as free as the cage, only as free as the text

[Meyfei]

that's a good one.

As you may have noticed, i have alot of grammical errors in my typeing, and thats one of my many reasons why i dont write poems.

I also find it to overwhelming to find the right words, aswell as mixing them in a sensible fashion, and with that being the case i enjoy reading them.

Please let me know if you find, or make more k?

[DizzyDi]

On 2008-01-01 22:42, Solstis wrote:
Posted as a note on Facebook, which probably means that I don't own it anymore:

I will make a myth of my persona

Textualize the physical

As it were

Add another link to the chain

Indeterminate location, indeterminate sign, indeterminate

Origin is best unknown, best indecisive

The truth is only as free as the cage, only as free as the text

I don't get it.

Wait on second though, I kinda sorta get it.

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[Mewnie]

Nose Rings

Oh, what a heinous thing to do;

take a nose and run it through.

To pierce a hole where flesh once was;

is this not what a madman does?

Your nostrils bleed,

your nostrils swell;

and when you sneeze, it hurts like hell.

So wear a nose ring if you will;

you stupid fucking imbecile.

[Meyfei]

nice one.
I must admit, I agree nose rings are awful.

[amtalx]

FAIL

[Solstis]

I never thought that the point of poetry was to be sensible or to find the right words.

I just vomit words
Modify language
The trick is to twist it
Hardly ever works
Most things I write aren't worth a second visit
Free-flow, free-fall, free to try if you please
Failure, bad flow, poor design
Things happen, especially if try to rhyme

[AlexCraig]

I was told by a creative writing teacher that poetry was to express yourself. Then she got all Nazi and said "You're doing it wrong!" and told me to redo my poems about 5 times.

[Mewnie]

A haiku

I dream of large breasts.

Big, ripe, disembodied tits.

I awake, turgid.