New Fan Art, New Style!

[Aumi]

So, I changed my style a lot, and I hope you all find it to be more well done than my previous works!

It's still 100% intended to be manga-style.

So, my best pic as of now, in my opinion that is:



My comment, how I wrote it over at deviantART:

A gaming character created by me. She has incarnations in almost every game with character creation that I own, and is my main character in almost all of them. Her game of origin was Phantasy Star Universe.

Some specifics:

Name: Zera
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Race: Humanoid robot (a very human-ish one)
Weapon of choice: 2 short ninjatō without saya (guard)

P.S.: If you want the full-size picture, talk to me on my MSN.


Constructive criticism is welcome. I hope you like it though. There's more to follow soon.

[GutsGO]

It's cool, the hair and eyes are especially nice. You should try coloring it

[qoxolg]

Constructive criticism is welcome.

DANG >_>

oh well..

I like this one a lot better than your previous stuff.

complaints:
• the head sticks to far foward from the neck.
• The upperbody is to small compared to the legs

THATS ALL FOLKS!

[Aumi]

I'm not too good at coloring, never really took time to learn it digital, although I have Gimp, so I should try to learn how to use it properly some time.

Anyone know a good tutorial?

[Aumi]

DANG >_>

oh well..

I like this one a lot better than your previous stuff.

complaints:
• the head sticks to far foward from the neck.
• The upperbody is to small compared to the legs

THATS ALL FOLKS!

Hmm? I don't find the upper body too small... And what do you mean by too far forward from the neck?

EDIT: About the neck... Well, maybe a little.

[Sayara]

All im curious is what she is wearing. Its coming off entirely!

[Aumi]

All im curious is what she is wearing. Its coming off entirely!

Whatcha mean, coming off?

[McLaughlin]

I really like it. Especially the face.

Just one thing though (I also noticed her head sticks out a bit, but meh), if that black strap on her waist is supposed to be underwear, it doesn't look like it'd actually be where it should be. The fabric gets wider as it gets closer to the skirt, so it doesn't really look like it'd fit. :/

I still think it's great work though. Keep at it!

[qoxolg]

Hmm? I don't find the upper body too small...

it's overall to short, which is caused by the long head + neck. Anime style is still bound to the rules of human anatomy.

For coloring you can sniff in my topic.. I got some tutorials in there if you look in the first post.

[Aumi]

I really like it. Especially the face.

Just one thing though (I also noticed her head sticks out a bit, but meh), if that black strap on her waist is supposed to be underwear, it doesn't look like it'd actually be where it should be. The fabric gets wider as it gets closer to the skirt, so it doesn't really look like it'd fit. :/

I still think it's great work though. Keep at it!

Well, it's because the Underwear is linked to the those leg-things (can't remember the right word right now x.x)