Matterboard 15
D-2
Lisa: "Otherwise next time, all of them
might be suddenly be riddled with bullets."
F-3
Echo: "Since
we'll always together, I thought it would be good for us to spend some time to ourselves."
F-4
Filia: "What did she do? She used
Techics inside the city."
Filia: ""Hey, look at this," she says, and then, bam! Out of nowhere she casts a
Technic!"
Filia: "Any use of
technics inside the city is normally cancelled out."
The last two quotes show the differences in capitalization of technics. In addition to that, I've noticed in other cutscenes that they're referred to as techniques.
Filia: "What
, your punishment is going to be."
Unnecessary comma given the conversation.
B-5
Ohza: "Hey,
Asami, I told you not to run ahead by yourself."
Azanami. ._.'
Ohza: "And you don't get any wrong ideas got it?"
Needs to be reworded.
B-6
Marlur: "Ah, sorry.
I just caught up in thought..."
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