Story Patch Thread (Updated 3/31/2014)

[Hatsodoom]

Ok, time to ask dat question. How much of Ep3 is translated and how much of 2-6 is translated?

[KazukiQZ]

^None of EP3 is translated, and for 2-6 (MB17), a few of Main story's cutscenes are translated, up to (story spoiler) battle between 2nd Claris Claes, Matoi, and Dark Falz Apprentice inside the ARKS Ship. And Last translated part ends in the Sara's introduction.
Zeno's side story aren't translated yet.

tldr for 2-6, not completed yet. But playable until the Story Quest. And Yden's post, a few above us, mentioned about one untranslated part. That part is situated between translated cutscenes.

[Tott0]

Can anyone post a translation for an event?

[ZER0 DX]

These scenes on the matter board aren't translated yet, and they occur before some scenes that are, so here's some lines for them. First one is for the start of the Xeno side arc, and the second one is the scene where Matoi saps Apprentice's strength away causing her to run and meet up with Luther.


Matter Board D-2
AP 228/7/9

??? (Xeno)
あんな簡単に原生生物を……？
……すげえ。


Matter Board A-4
AP 238/7/25

Claris Claes
……これで終わり？

Claris Claes
なんで、って……
わたしはそのためにいるからだよ。
当たり前でしょ？

[Hatsodoom]

Is there a change/update log I can look at so I don't have to constantly ask how much is translated?

[Urbancowgurl777]

More stuff from Matterboards 12-14. x_x

Spoiler!

Matterboard 12

C-5
Echo: "H,hey! Wait up!"

Every other instance of stuttering uses a dash (H-hey).

Kaburakan: "Hey listen u, you wouldn't believe how much of a rookie this girl is!"
Kaburakan: "All of a sudden, they got really violent can't understand words. It was really troublesome."

E-1
Jig: "The weapon Clarisa? Of course I know about it."

So far, other instances have been spelled as Clarissa.

Jig: ""White tin Clarisa". It's the special weapon used by Claris Claes."

Capitalization of White tin could be looked at as well.

Jig: "The Clarissa has an interesting history. It could be it's in the hands of someone who can't use it, or it's hiding its power."

I actually can't remember why I wrote this one down but maybe it's that awkward grammar. <.<

Ep2Ch1 Story Quest
Echo: "Ah,[Player] are you on a quest as well?"

Needs a space.

Menu at the beginning of the Story Quest
2. Go along with Echo
1. There's something I was planning on investigating

The numbers are backwards. <.<

Act 2: Her will not inherited
Luther: "Don't you want more power? Power that would even rival that of the council of six?"

Spoiler!

Between MB11 and 12
Xion: "But more than that and and importantly..."

Spoiler!

Matterboard 13

B-4
Aki: "The more I look at it, the more i draws my curiosity, This is easily the sum of the mystery of the Dragonkin in physical form."
Ko Ryu: "[I heard] [We gave you] [Permission to enter] [The Dragon Alter]
Aki: "In other words, your going to act as my guide from now on?"
Ko Ryu: "[This is] [The place where our] [Souls] [Rest in piece]"
Aki: "Piece of mind for souls? You mean a burial ground?"
Ko Ryu: "[Lives return] [to this place] [And from this place more flesh and blood comes to dwell]"

I've noticed in Dragonkin text, sometimes the first word in the clause-thing is capitalized, and sometimes it isn't. Not sure if intentional or... But it happens a lot.

Aki: "Except there are no recorded example of this is scientific literature..."

D-4
Kuna: "In my profession, it's really not unusual for people to simple be erased, right?"

Ep2Ch2 Story Quest Act 1: Clearance of the Past
*2-3 untranslated cut-ins
Aki: "She's definitely somewhere in the Dragon Alter, but they're unsure exactly where."
Aki: "I wonder if there's something inside the Dragon alter that they're after?"
Aki: "When I was young, all I was after was results."

I feel like were would sound better.

E-2
Sara: "The place to meet is here at the Dragon Alter. I'll tell you the details when we meet."

Ep2Ch2 Story Quest Act 2: Calculation of the Future
*7 untranslated cut-ins
Sara: "Ah! If finally got through! [Player], can you come to where I am?"
Sara: "Deja vu, I suppose. I wouldn't know to much about that."
Xiao: "You really have an interesting upbringing."

Had?

Ep1Ch8 Story Quest Act 3-L: A Step Toward the Future
*1 untranslated cut-in
Maria: "The two of you have a lot of nerve, pulling the second in the council of six around like this."

Spoiler!

Between MB13 and 14
Matoi: "I've had to feel pain and suffer and little bit, but even so I've very grateful."
Xion: "...so thank you."

I've noticed that in a lot of quotes the word directly following an ellipsis isn't capitalized. Don't know if it's correct, but it looks odd. Also the quote itself, "so thank you", sounded really weird. All she said was ありがとう and there was no indication to her previous statement where a "so" would sound correct.

Spoiler!

Matterboard 14

E-2
Fourier: "Oh hello[Player]! So you came here as well?"

B-3
Claris Claes: "Even though we're the Three Heroes, and we should be out there like everyone else, we're told to stand by."

We were.

Ep2Ch3 Story Quest Act 2: Never Wanted to Believe
13 untranslated cut-ins

D-5
Huey: "Right, the order to stand by has been issued for the Three Heroes"

No period. >.<

Huey: "That's why I think Leggias left her to me to act as an example..."

I can't remember what he was referred to in the other cutscenes, but I'm pretty sure it wasn't Leggias. <.<

Ep2Ch3 Story Quest Act 1: What One Should Believe
11 untranslated cut-ins

Edit: I have screenshots of most of the untranslated cut-ins if necessary. Some of them I took pictures of but forgot that I had it set to where screenshots don't capture the chat UI. ._.'

[landman]

With the latest update, all of Episode 2 should be translated. From this point on, please post a screenshot if you find an untranslated scene from Episode 1 or 2. I'll wait a few days for people to post, translate any missing scenes, then put out a new RAR/TRANSAM patch and begin work on Episode 3

The F5 scene in MB16 is still in Japanese http://www.pso-world.com/forums/show...postcount=1739

[Yden]

You guys skipped over a scene in the matterboard you're working on.

Spoiler!

The 3 scenes after this one are translated but this one wasn't.

This one is still untranslated and all Zeno's sidestory other than the first event is still untranslated (the ones starting from 7/11 from event watcher and onwards).

[SilenWhisper]

EP1 Chapter EX:

Spoiler!

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EP2 From Chapter 5 owards,most if not all non-story cutscenes aside the chapter 5 Zeno one,are non-translated.Example:

Spoiler!

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[SilenWhisper]

Spoiler!

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