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    Thank you for your-

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    P.S. Your link to the Fourth Dream actually leads to the Third Dream, just wanted to point that out.
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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 8

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 9
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    OK, I caught up to the story so far.


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    Again, I'm spending way too much time on this saga.

    I seriously don't mind this at all. This kind of adventure/fantasy story type is a big favorate of mine. Really, I bought like 15-20 of these kind of style books on my last trip to the UK(because they are so much better in english than my own language). I guess I'll be a bit sad when the fifth dream comes to an end.


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    Did you try turning it off and on again?

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    OK, I caught up to the story so far.
    New fan! Thank you for reading. Hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long between chapters.


    I seriously don't mind this at all. This kind of adventure/fantasy story type is a big favorate of mine. Really, I bought like 15-20 of these kind of style books on my last trip to the UK(because they are so much better in english than my own language). I guess I'll be a bit sad when the fifth dream comes to an end.
    Well, then some good has come of it. I'm not sure I'm going to revisit a world like this for a while, but this one will still be around for a bit.
    So another person from the Netherlands, huh? I see a lot of people from there around here.

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    I really feel for Torva myself. Looks like she's going to become quite the little badass.

    I think your gift of artistically describing scenes and scenarios with words is really evident in this last part, I really enjoyed how you described Torva (depressing as it was) and the island she was on. The imagery is absolutely brilliant and I'm certainly taking notes. I'm sorry I haven't commented here much but I am following, and I'm enjoying. I too miss Zorael's musings though :P

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 9

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    Really good chapter, loved the way you set up the confrontation. I'm guessing quite a bit of time has passed but it's not really clear how much (you mentioned "years" in your notes, so at least I know that much). Have you ever created Torva as a game character (in any game), or drawn (or have someone else draw) her, or anything like that? I guess what I'm asking is, does a visual reference exist anywhere you could show us? Although, since her story isn't finished yet, would showing it (if it exists) give us "spoilarz"?

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    Actually, no. She was supposed to just be a one off character. I don't even have an image of her in my mind, besides someone fairly ordinary looking. That's why I never bothered with a description of her. If it helps at all, I imagine her to have messy brown hair, brown eyes, and tan skin. Fairly lanky as a child, fairly muscular as an adult. I can also say she was supposed to be 9~12 before this chapter, and now she's closer to 14~17. Which explains all her backtalking and dumb decisions now, as well as her choice in boys.

    I'm glad you liked the bar fight. I thought it was pretty pretty stale and predictable, myself. But I really wanted her in a bar fight, and I couldn't find any better excuses to start one.

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 10

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