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    So, the damage to Torva went far deeper than I originally thought... Huzzah for teenage psychopaths. Entertaining as always.
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    Wow, that was pretty dark! (in an awesome kinda way)
    *makes mental note: do NOT cross Torva*

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    Quote Originally Posted by stukasa View Post
    I guess what I'm asking is, does a visual reference exist anywhere you could show us?
    Actually, I just remembered. Torva isn't even human. The reason I didn't describe her was because I couldn't describe her. Her anatomy is supposed to be so different from ours, that it should be difficult just to imagine.

    Of course, this would lead to boring story telling if I didn't describe what was going on. I generally like to summarize in words easy to communicate, then later (or earlier) say that, yeah, it was actually really different. Souls communicating with each other, for instance, I summarize as them talking. But works more like it did in this latest chapter. And the Old Man in First Contact being described from his own perspective as an elder of the village, while being described from Zoreal's perspective as a creature unlike anything he's ever seen.

    I shouldn't really be saying this. I should be able to clearly communicate this in my story. Maybe I'll clear it up in a later chapter.


    I'm glad you guys are enjoying what I'm doing with Torva. Really, I'm tired of people in fiction suffering unimaginable stress without any side effects. She shouldn't really be even as well adjusted as she is. But I'm having fun with writing this character this way.

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    They can't be *totally* different if they have two arms, two legs, two eyes, hair, etc. But I suppose it would be hard for readers to relate and understand if you said Torva was holding the spear with her three flirmangers (which, for the purposes of this post, are a made-up appendage that serve the function of arms).

    Also, I wouldn't exaaactly say she's "as well adjusted as she is." I mean, in the last couple chapters she certainly seemed to be enjoying her sweet, gruesome revenge. >.>;

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 11

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 12
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    Lies and Slander. There's a conspiracy against me going on and I know it.

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 12

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    Fifth Dream: A Study in Warfare, part 13
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