God I love cutoff tops...what? Oh, sorry. Just looking at the song background.
I love the ending to all this. It felt like you were repeating everything to re-set the mood for an epic showdown...then Selena came around with a healthy dose of reality.
I love Delfoy's and Selena's relationship. I'll keep saying it. Their open lust is very refreshing.
Aw~ even though Luna ruined it, that was probably the most invested I've ever been in a proposal.
Hm. Well, I hope you have something fun set up for Luna in the future if you're giving her this much money.
Which, again, I'm sure translates to something along the lines of around $200.
I'm with Yoshi. When I saw the raffle winnings, I fully expected that to be immediately lost back to the hotel. I'm glad to have my expectations subverted, but I love punchlines that are all buildup and no payoff like that.
I like the touch of you acknowledging our expectations and making us feel silly for it. What we thought was going to be the entire check ended up being a tiny amount of it. At least nobody got in trouble from the issues they've caused.
Oh~ Yoshi brings up a good point. Most people who get rich quick like this just as quickly lose their money. I somehow feel that that's not what's going to happen with this story, but I'm expecting something good.
I'm reading through my old chapters. I'm glad to see that at least sometimes I'm well spoken. I said that I had a lot of catching up to do, and...I think I'm almost there? I can't be too far back.
I want to point out that I still have not gotten into the habit of trying to write daily. Which you could probably guess.
I never did answer you about this, so, this is what I was talking about with the
bubbles situation.
I think we see campships quite often, and they don't have much room. Just the pre-mission area, and the cockpit. It's a pretty short, square ship. So I think in most situations, it'll be just big enough for the group of four.
Ha, I'm just now realizing I still don't know who the darker controller is.
Naval combat reminds me of Skies of Arcadia. It's a fairly typical RPG for the most part, but important battles take place on the ship. Having these grand, climactic situations take place on ships that house dozens of people each has a grander scope than a small group of hardened combatants taking out a tough opponent.
I should Let's Play Skies of Arcadia.
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