Well my good readers, I'm now under a different User Account, so I can no longer Edit posts under my old SN of Vantamiath.
Thus, I leave behind my 65 replies and ALMOST >_< 1000 views. I'm going to put up all my previous chapters (Welcome to fic boot-camp soldier. Read all the text on this page).
Thanks for all your patience, and sorry for the awesome confusion I bestowed upon you readers!
Anyways, if you're new to this fanfic, I encourage you to post your thoughts--not just positive feedback, but also negative feedback.
Now I know what you're thinking, soldier. That looks like a lot of text--but don't fear! Pull up a chair, get some munchies, open a cold beer beverage and just take your time.
Hey, if you read all of it and don't like it; I give you permission to rag on me--but imagine the favor I dunya' if you do enjoy it! WOo-Hoo!
Hippocanibal wrote:
Now lets have a 21 gun salute for my dear old Vant.What it takes to have a good story: An Interesting plot that keeps you well informed but also makes its suspensful when needed, detailed descriptions that let you see, be, think, as the main character, intense fight scenes (this one is kind of a give or take), and last but not last Oran shaped soap bars...and this my friends, has all of them. This is by far, one of the best stories ive ever read. It is right up there with "Do androids dream of electric rappy's?" (which is by the way another one of my favorites.) The descriptive words are what caught me the most. The way they stuck in your mind and how you could see everything play out was great. (One of my favorite parts would have to be when the 2 Hucasts, the Humar, and tha Ramar charge the purplenum. i could just see them walking into her apt., and going into a black room. it was great.) If your reading this and havent read the story yet, read it! its great!!!
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R.I.P.
Vantamiath
1000+ Posts
Loved by few many
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