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    Great Job Shadow !
    also known as Rin or Onikisu

    I'm not dead, I actually returned to PSU and PSOworld :P

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    Wowzwers that's a long list of Characters, anyways great job Shadow
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    Dude, you right... really really well =]
    Keep the good stuff coming, I've really enjoyed what I read.
    Let's see this get to 100 chapters

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    Thanks to all.

    By the way, I'm not even halfway done So there's a 95% chance that this will go past 100 chapters

    But it will continue when AoI comes out. I'll post the suprise on the day it comes out for JP. If I get enough info on it, I'll begin writing again.

    I might write rough chapters, then edit where nescessary. ~.~
    Kyousei - 21 Fnewm

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    Kick ass Shadow! Can't wait to read the rest of this. But like you said, when AoI comes. I'm thinking you already saw Ryoten's new clothes in AoI? If you haven't, I'll show you.

    "EVEN IN PSO2, THE BURN MEANS IT STILL WORKING!!!"

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    I've been writing some "filler" until I get a solid grip on the story for AoI. I can't understand a lick of Japanese, lol. But still, the plot lines I have for the second part of the story stand, so without further ado, a tiny bit of suspense to build to await Ambitions Of Kumori.

    The Surprise Chapter

    ”It’s certainly been a while, Kyousei…” He smirked, holding his Huge Cutter. “All this time…I don’t even recognize you.”

    ”I could say the same.” I took a battle stance, arming my Uransara/Churel combo.

    ”It’s sad that it’s come to this.”

    ”I think that holds far more meaning to me than you.”

    He charged at me. I snapped my fingers, causing an earthquake via Gidiga. I had Churel cast Nosdiga to bind him to the ground while I used my Uransara to cast Diga. He, however, countered by using Megiverse to suffocate my Nosdiga snakes and Megid to dissolve my Diga blast. I then fired three shots of Diga at him-one with my free hand, one with Churel, and one with my Uransara. He dodged them all, but lost ground.

    I then swapped Churel for my Shi-Kikami, firing some bullets at him. He swapped weapons to a pair of Sharp Twins to block. He then came in again, but I used Dambarta to prevent his charge. He was frozen in place.

    ”So…mind telling me the sudden about face?”

    ”You misunderstand, Kyousei…a lot can happen in the time we haven’t seen each other.”

    ”I thought you’d died. And here you are, working for the enemy.”

    ”I have my reasons.”

    ”Right. Reasons that all involve you getting power. You’re no better than any of the people just like you that I’ve killed already.”

    ”But there was a difference.”

    ”And what is that, old friend?”

    He broke out of the sheet of ice he was incased in, lunging at me. I used my Uransara to block one of his swords, but the other was right up to my neck.

    ”I have skill.”

    ”…”
    Kyousei - 21 Fnewm

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    Ouch!
    I'm expecting someone to pull off a flashy stunt and reverse the tide of battle any second now
    It's good. I enjoyed reading it so far, let's see if you can keep up the continuity!

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    OK, guys, new idea.

    I'm going to give you all a chance to include yourselves as villains in the final arc of the story. Submit to me a profile of your evil character if you wish. No minimum, but there's a maximum of six spots open.

    GOGOGO C:
    Kyousei - 21 Fnewm

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    Cool...hye, any chance Azrha will still be involved...?


    'm a bit more active now, so now I can actually contribute ^.^

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    Of course Azra's still a part of the story.
    Kyousei - 21 Fnewm

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