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    I really suck at doing drama/anything serious, so I figured that I would give it a try. I couldn't help but to add a few jokes, though.


    I cursed under my breath, a cloud of vapor appearing as I did so.

    How could this happen?

    I looked at the blanketing night sky and shouted. My voice nearly hoarse.

    "A pox upon you, sky! Your peerless beauty and infinite horizon shall taunt this mortal vessel no more!"

    I glanced at my dagger. It seemed like an efficient killer, so cold, dripping with the poison that I had crafted that afternoon. The fumes themselves threatened to plunge me under, but, no, I had a more poetic death to face.

    I sat against the tree where we had first met, first made our promise. If one of us were to die in a terrible automobile collision, the other was to stab himself at this very tree.

    I caressed the bark, remembering that graceful touch!

    "For you, my dear sweet love!"

    I plunged the knife home, pinning me to the tree of our discontent.

    Oh, if I had only succeeded that day. Now I lay here, thinking, dreaming, trapped like a featherless bird in a cage made out of somber fire.

    My unsteady vision blurs further. At least the heavens granted me the ability to cry.


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    You've conjured up a win with this one! So poetic! So...DRAMATIC!

    Thank you for participating! :>

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    My pleasure Fo-Fo. ;>

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    If only I could write so poetically. I suck at all forms of poetry, and although I consider myself a decent writer, I write in the descriptive style.

    Nice job.

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    On 2006-07-09 23:07, isahn80 wrote:
    If only I could write so poetically. I suck at all forms of poetry, and although I consider myself a decent writer, I write in the descriptive style.

    Nice job.
    Actually, I wish that I could write in the descriptive style. Just don't have the patience for it.

    Thanks!

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    wow, this is great also. You're really good at writing fics...too bad I never read yours before when you wrote a lot ._.

    work on gavin >>





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    Good try! Even though it is short!

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