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    Curiously attractive for a fish man Zorafim's Avatar
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    I see what you mean by not being inspired to write this chapter. Not much important happens in it. I suppose, you could have embellished the fight scenes, or worked on some character development. But that's not exactly easy to do.

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    The good parts happen in later floors. The writer for those sections got a better pick i feel.

    "It looks cool this way, let's stop."

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    I dont know zor its pretty much accurate with the real deal. The first ten are. not much of a fight.
    I enjoy reading this.


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    Chapter 4: The Beach.
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    The cutoff of the tower is missing somewhere, but here is chapter 4... after almost 2 years

    Im SUPER apologetic for how long it has taken for me to type this. I've been working on pieces that are way past the initial setting of the tri character relationship stuff.

    "It looks cool this way, let's stop."

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    WHAT AN UPDATE HAVE TO READ

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    Ah yeah! Was quite the journey but we're getting there. We're going places.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sayara View Post
    Im SUPER apologetic for how long it has taken for me to type this. I've been working on pieces that are way past the initial setting of the tri character relationship stuff.
    Well, it makes me feel better about not working on my stuff, at least. It's great to finally have some progress.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zorafim View Post
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    MultiCore------------Male Cast~~~~~~~~~~~Moriah----------------Female Dewman
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    Spoiler!


    Also I located the last bits of the tower. So i'll be to work at that in the near time.
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